Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2018 7:38 pm · Chapter: Chapter 53

Great update.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2018 1:36 pm · Chapter: Chapter 53

Michael has become the Michael he could have been.  Hunter is part of the family and appears to be happy with that.  Tucker will do the right thing I'm sure.  Uriel and Gabriel round out the family.

Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jul 02, 2018 1:29 pm · Chapter: Chapter 52

Wow, great chapter.  Writing what I call a "normal" story is difficult, but writing something of this depth is amazing.  This all has to come from your mind since there is nothing to copy it from.  You are so talented.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jun 30, 2018 5:28 pm · Chapter: Chapter 52

Glad to see more on this. 

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 05, 2018 12:15 pm · Chapter: Chapter 51

Whoa, Joan got the balls from her late husband!!! Great part; I loved how she managed Claire and what she told Brian, even if it's too late.

Are they finally out of the woods or will Lindsay come back and try to derail their lives again?

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 05, 2018 12:00 pm · Chapter: Chapter 50

Heartbreaking the way Brian is trying to deal with this difficult situation.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 05, 2018 11:37 am · Chapter: Chapter 49

Kira seems feisty, just like her fathers.

Name: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: Jun 05, 2018 7:52 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

" I would have loved him anyway." I swooned.

" I have conditions.", so Brian.

Going to miss them when this is over.

Name: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 7:55 pm · Chapter: Chapter 51

great story. Glad they got their forever together.

Name: emac66 (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 11:57 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

I forgot a couple of things I wanted to say....

The whole turn around with Joan. Came as a shocker, especially the yway she spoke to claire. Very refreshing. At first I thought maybe she went back or forsard in time allowing herself a nother chance. This was just needed for Brian to fulfill his destiny though. 


Name: emac66 (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 11:55 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

*sniff sniff* so sweet!

Gotta say though, Brian has BALLS OF STEEL facing down the angels never mind God! (nice touch putting Him in Vic's body!)

Loved this!!



Name: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 10:31 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

Absolutely LOVED this chapter, StarBaby!! Brian forgave Joan for her inaction and mistreatment of him throughout his life. It was a HUGE thing for her to admit that she was incapable of being the kind of mother he wanted and needed. It was actually a very nice change from the sanctimonious harridan we have all come to know and hate. Claire...well, talk about a greedy, nosy and judgmental chick who just needs to be SLAPPED to sleep!! She's a straight 'Poor man's Lindsay', but that's another tirade for another time, LOL.

The talk with the Angels, as always, is interesting. Add God himself to the mix and WHOO! Yes, I actually cheered aloud when he showed up! I love the fact that Brian and Justin's testing phase is finally over. I was completely enthralled as the reason for Brian's creation was revealed to him at long last. Ironically, I have always viewed Brian's character as a person with a definitive moral code, even if it lived and breathed outside of societal norms. You did an amazing job portraying that here.

This series is one of my absolute favorites and has kept me intrigued. Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us!

Happy Writing and HUGS,


Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 10:28 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

I do believe this chapter maybe my favorite one :)

At long last Brian and Justin are going to live their lives without anyone else's influences, not Heaven or Hell can change destiny now and Lindsay along with everyone else will finally get what's coming to them.

Forgiveness is strong, but Love is more Powerful than Hate or Envy, Especially True Love ;)

Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 10:22 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

Great chapter.  Great writing.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2018 7:15 am · Chapter: Chapter 51

Tests!  At least they are living the life they should have.

Name: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: Jun 03, 2018 8:22 pm · Chapter: Chapter 50

I know you haven't undated this in a while, but I really want to know what happens. I've been reading this story and am fascinated by the light and dark and in between tha you have created.  It is very complex and filled with love and caring but also hate.  I hope you continue to post this story.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Apr 21, 2018 8:15 pm · Chapter: Chapter 50

Looks like Brian and Justin will get their way.  Yahooo!

Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Apr 21, 2018 4:37 pm · Chapter: Chapter 50

Great chapter.  Hoping for a happy ending.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Apr 08, 2018 5:56 pm · Chapter: Chapter 49

Looks like Kira is in control.  What will Brandon do?  Where did Lindsay end up?  Can't wait to find out more.

Name: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: Mar 11, 2018 8:45 pm · Chapter: Chapter 2

interesting twist-  Im intrigued

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Mar 11, 2018 7:58 am · Chapter: Chapter 48

How is Lindsay using Brandon?

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Mar 11, 2018 12:57 am · Chapter: Chapter 48

Ha ha ha, Lucifer and Debbie!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Mar 10, 2018 11:52 pm · Chapter: Chapter 47

I hope that will be enough for Chris, so he will stop his harassment.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Mar 05, 2018 6:16 am · Chapter: Chapter 47

Wow.  Michael really has some power and it was good that Justin was there to stop him.

Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Mar 04, 2018 11:22 pm · Chapter: Chapter 47

Wow that was intense.

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