Date: Dec 03, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 37
LOVED this chapter! Definitely a truth that Gus changed Brian right along with Justin. This Lindsay certainly wouldn't be happy that Brian would be limiting his previous self-destructive behaviors; it throws a huge monkey wrench into all her plans.
The only reason I can think of that she would want to try for a girl with Brian would be to discontinue his bloodline. If taken from the normal POV of men having sons, Gus would be looked upon as Brian's living legacy. There is no way that Brian wouldn't want to guide his son into adulthood so that the destructive heritage of abuse- both self inflicted and to others- which Jack Kinney left behind wouldn't continue. So basically Gus' birth just killed her dreams of Brian joining her dumb ass in hell! Like Justin said, Lindsay's downfall is her own doing! WTG Bitchzilla!
As for Brian and Mel's alliance, I hope it works out well and very soon! I'm glad that Brian was able to tell that Lindsay was lying to him based on Mel's past confrontational behaviors during their interactions. As for Bitchzilla's comments about Michael, true that he hasn't always been the most supportive friend and that he did expect Brian to take care of him in their former life. But she overplayed her hand by not realizing that Brian had already picked up on her machinations earlier in the day. Hopefully, the more arrogant and comfortable she gets that she's 'right' and getting her way, the more blind she'll continue being.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
Date: Nov 06, 2017 9:47 am Title: Chapter 36
Brian doesn't do boyfriends or relationships, but, oh boy, he does jealousy!
Michael is really great in this story; he thinks and acts to get Lindsay out of control, so she makes mistakes.
Todd's a little devilish; he loves teasing Lindsay.
Date: Nov 04, 2017 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 36
OOOOHHHHHHH that tricky bitch! I can't wait to watch her fail! Brian may be feeling like his world and all the people in it are going crazy, but eventually he's going to put all the pieces together for himself. I can't wait until he confronts Old Lyin' Lips Lindsay about her lie.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
Date: Oct 30, 2017 10:21 am Title: Chapter 35
A few possibilities appear to deviate from Lindsay's plan: Ethan, David and Brian being jealous. If they play the right cards, it could work or at least seriously annoy Lindsay.
Michael is great in this part: he thinks to other things than comics and his best friend. I like his idea to see who is responsible for the loft's intrusion.
Date: Oct 25, 2017 9:19 am Title: Chapter 34
ADmittedly I'm getting a bit concerned about the current situation. I know that you would never separate them, but the lead up to everything getting restored is nerve wracking.
That whole thing with Lindsey freaked me out! How did Michael and Justin not react?
What's with Brian's reaction at the end? Is he jealous of Michael? Is he wonderingWTF is going on? Is he figuring things out?
Edge of my seat!
Date: Oct 18, 2017 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 32
That entire scenario with Stockwell was great!! Oh the look of his fice must have been absolutely priceless! LOL! Love it.
Kind of neet having Michael being a "ggod guy" now. Seeing his previous self and being moritified at his actions. Past brian I think is a bit out of sorts seeing a new and improved Michael. I also like how Brian is obviously looking for Justin. Frustrated that he can't find him.
Getting pretty concerned about this raging fire that Micheal was referring to. He's right. Things seem to be a bit simple right now. Too simple. I'm biting my nails waiting to see what's going to happen. YIKES!