Date: Dec 16, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is so far out there but not everything has to be serious all the time. I enjoyed it a lot.
I'm glad. It's hard to write something that hasn't been done, so I hope I managed it. I appreciate all the comments.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Excellent! Jack as the mayo in Joan/Vic sandwich: the threesome from Hell! Yeehaw!
I bet Emmett will be delighted to be a father and Deb will be so disappointed.
Deb will never accept that she's not a grandmother. Emmett is happy as a clam. I just couldn't resist Jack with Vic plus I couldn't leave out Joan. Technically that was all Michael's doing.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent: Brian is pregnant and Justin is sick.
Will they leave the firehouse? I thought it was big enough for a big family, which they are getting.
Poor Ben: he really isn't good at picking a good partner. At least, he isn't sick anymore.
I think the firehouse was tainted by Deb and Michael's interference so moving is a viable option. About Ben if it weren't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all on picking partners.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
LMAO!!! I can't say that I blame Dummy for clawing out his own eyes with the images of the last scene. I'm still laughing hard at that!
So glad that they have all moved on beyond Manic Michael and Loony Lindsay. Hopefully they will have a life full of love and laughter, but most of all Novotny free!
Great Job Phyllis!
I thought, what could be the worse thing for Michael and ran with it. Living in a home with it's own playground and such an assortment of playmates for Becca and Gus will insure lots of laughter. Now that there are five kids to love it's a sure thing.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Glad Carl decided not to waste any more of his life arguing a losing battle with Debbie. Her one track mind has finally cost her everything.
When Deb gets focused on something, she's like a dog with a bone. This time I didn't want Carl to suffer for it.
Date: Oct 29, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love that Marty knows what Marilyn knows but not the other way around. Creates a very interesting dynamic between the two personalities.
So Brian is pregnant but Justin is suffering the morning sickness? SWEET! I can't begin to tell you how many times I wished someone else had the damn ANYTIME sickness when I had my two....LOL
So Ben married a married man with 6.5 kids....SMH I honestly don't know if he went from bad to worse where Michael is concerned. Now THAT says an awful lot!
Onto the next chapter!
I wanted something different and a reason why Mysterious Marilyn denied sending the cards. Unfortunatly once I get thinking on a plot line anything can happen.