Date: Dec 07, 2017 11:46 am Title: Part Two
Brian did think only of himself and his grief when Justin died didn't he. Poor Jennifer.
Happy for Em. Six children he'll be able to adopt. Blake will raise his and Ted's son as happily as he can. He'll always have a part of Ted with him. Michael, no great loss.
Now Gus, I'm surprised how Brian turned him away.
What a lonely painful life he chose to live for himself.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 6:58 am Title: Part One
This is fantastic. I wascso engrossed I wanted to keep on reading. More please. Soon.
Young Brian and Clair. She was his ang there was no room for another boy in her life.
Joanie was going to leave Jack. What their lives would have been likebif she had.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 5:41 am Title: Part One
Normally I don't read WIP's but Dickens' Christmas carol happens to be one of my favorite books. So I HAD to read this one.
Girl, this is starting off really well. It's certainly packs a punch. Strong imaging and exquisitly written.
Ted gone and so are Justin and the rest. Chlling prospect.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.