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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2018 12:41 am Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

First, the broken condom and then the insuing talk of monogamy... HOT! 

“The incompetency hearing is tomorrow.” Mel continues. “But he will not get anywhere. How he got someone to write this up will be one of life’s mysteries.” Just how did he get someone to write it up? Just who is this person? Will Michael conspire with this person to further try to get back at all of them?

 

Michael's reasoning for incompentency fell pretty flat.  “I don't want Mr Kinney to be disappointed when she tires of him. She has cast me out..."  Okay, that's NOT an incompentency reasoning. It's once again a jealousy comment.

 

Lindsay standing up for Debbie isn't really a shock to me. She was, after all, tired of Michael and saw the nastiness that he is before leaving the Pitts. But good for her for taking the stand against him

 

Glad to see the adoption went through that same day. Brian will be able to walk his Mother down the aisle to be married to his Father. Will he be also be able to be Carl's bestman?  And so very happy they will have the wedding at the palace. Michael won't be able to get in so he can't ruin the wedding. Although he and the new not quite trained puppies could provide comic relief.

 

What does Todd know? Is he a member of the court? Does he have proof of something, other than a voyeuristic Michael? But whatever he wants to talk to Michael about... like he said,  “It is time for you and I to have a very long and much overdue talk…”

 

Can't wait for the next chapter. Do I detect a smackdown coming? I ABSOLUTELY love Mikey smackdowns! Thank you for the update. Loving this story...

 

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 7:05 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

I can't wait to find out what the overdue talk is about.  How wonderful that the judge witnessed the adoption of Brian by Deb and Carl!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:55 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Whoa Todd Is About To Lay Down The Law on Michael not that he will listen.

Can't believe Lindsay helped Deb and her apology might actually have been sincere?

Perhaps Lindsay leaving Pittsburgh was just what she needed to grow up and face reality?

Deb and Carl are now Brian's parents and Brian ignoring Michael with everyone else following is something that will drive Michael crazy.

Moving the wedding and is a smart move because Michael is so desperate for attention that he might call in or start a fire to make everyone acknowledge him smh

Brian and Justin planning for their future is without condoms and more kids is Wonderful!

Superb Update :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:19 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Wonderful chapter.  Love that Brian has been adopted.  He finally has loving parents.  The ideas for this story are amazing.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 4:21 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Good reading, waiting on the next chapter.

 

 

 

lah

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 1:40 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

I can't wait to see what kind of talk Todd wants to have with Michael!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2018 10:05 am Title: Hope Springs Eternal and Infernal

Thank you for the update. I think they should all look into mental incomtepency for Michael. If he tries to file that, he's going to have a LOT of people out to prove it's him, too.  I loved the look of the new Adoption Certificate.

Looking forward to more,

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 6:33 pm Title: Hope Springs Eternal and Infernal

Great update.  Can't wait to see where you go next with this wonderful story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 9:39 am Title: Hope Springs Eternal and Infernal

Is Michael trying to say that Debbie and Carl are mentally incompetent? That would be funny to read! Talking about funny, I love when you make Gus "talk/think".

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2018 9:03 pm Title: Hope Springs Eternal and Infernal

Michael is too nasty.  I'd hate to have to change his nappy.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2018 8:51 pm Title: Hope Springs Eternal and Infernal

Oh Michael Let It Go!!

He used think and properly in the same sentence does he even know what that means or how to do it?? lol

You have lost against them so many times may have to come up with a new word for Loser!

The adoption and wedding should be on the same day, or before Deb and Carl leave for their honeymoon the next day, a celebration breakfast for both occasions.

Deb didn't betray Michael he betrayed her the second he treated her like the help and dictated how he wanted things done.

Gus is so cute but he doesn't like his rest being disturbed.

Brian, Justin, Gus and their kids will love living at Britin, Ben and Benson will love the Blue Moon House.

Michael might actually get a beat down.

Win Win win My Opinion rofl

Wonderful Update:)

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2018 1:32 pm Title: Just The Two Of Us, Then The Three Of Us And Only You

The beginning is hot as hell!!!

The gift from Deb and Carl is amazing!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 11:54 am Title: Just The Two Of Us, Then The Three Of Us And Only You

Do I dare say 'Poor Michael'? Poor Michael, because he cant' stand to not be an ass. Poor Michael... He just can't grow up, and realize he can't best the others. Pounding his chest like a monkey! Throwing his plate with the chicken on the ground! What is he, two? I can't believe he was able to get a house on the other side of the boulevard! Good smackdown on the adoption... maybe it will really get through Michael's head how little he is cared about. H for Hero? Heartless? Get real Michael! Maybe Brian will become legally their son on the day of the wedding... A Real Double Celebration! Good to know he emancipated himself years ago. Three surnames... does that mean him and Justin are getting married?

The cakes were beautiful...

Thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us readers. Also for updating so quickly. It's very appreciated.

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 8:56 am Title: Just The Two Of Us, Then The Three Of Us And Only You

Fantastic. Love that they adopted Brian. The cakes and the jewelry pictures are great.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 7:35 am Title: Just The Two Of Us, Then The Three Of Us And Only You

Latin and an adoption!  Love the pictures

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2018 9:14 pm Title: Just The Two Of Us, Then The Three Of Us And Only You

OMG, Now That I Didn't See Coming!!!

Deb and Carl gave Brian The Best Birthday Gift They Ever Could.

Brian has been free of Joan and Claire for years with his new Family He is Almost Complete.

Just need to tie down a certain blonde Forever lol

Michael keeps trying to hurt everyone and it keeps backfiring on him, he just refuses to learn the lesson because he can't stand being ignored, but his ignorance is why he will Always Be Alone.

The cakes look Great and that gift from Brian is Stunning!!

Fantastic Update:)

 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 7:42 pm Title: Yeah That Door Is Most Assuredly Closed, Sailing Off And The Blue-Eyed Selenophile Loses His Hand

Ahh... Ms Peterson is gone!  And, since Mr Devore has to vacate in a week, he might find it hard to find another rental, or a least a nice place to live in. He should know better than try to plan a devious scheme, as everyone one usually beats him to it, and foils his plans.  Good story...

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 2:20 pm Title: Yeah That Door Is Most Assuredly Closed, Sailing Off And The Blue-Eyed Selenophile Loses His Hand

Just love this story.  It always makes me smile especially when Mikey is in trouble.  Great writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 12:54 pm Title: Yeah That Door Is Most Assuredly Closed, Sailing Off And The Blue-Eyed Selenophile Loses His Hand

The 3 last sentences are so Brian! Excellent (not only these sentences of course)!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 10:56 am Title: Yeah That Door Is Most Assuredly Closed, Sailing Off And The Blue-Eyed Selenophile Loses His Hand

Brian and Justin getting Hot in the moonlight is not a bad way to end this chapter.

Us Rome really ready for Lindsay, us anywhere really ready for Lindsay??

Michael is an idiot but his stupidity is amusing for others, now the neighborhood can rest easy knowing that no one else will have to listen to him whine while getting off <shudders> though feel bad for the next neighborhood :(

So what new idea will Michael come up with next?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2018 7:34 am Title: Yeah That Door Is Most Assuredly Closed, Sailing Off And The Blue-Eyed Selenophile Loses His Hand

Michael seems to have problems of his own making.  He won't get any help from Lindsay.  Brian and Justin seem to be still playing poker.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:04 pm Title: You Really Did Start the Fire, Now Your Bridge is Burning

Oh Mikey is such an iidiot.  A snake in the grass is better than him.  Great writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 1:05 pm Title: You Really Did Start the Fire, Now Your Bridge is Burning

What an idiot about the deliveries! The last part is less funny as the family might not find it amusing that the Novotny name was used like that.



Author's Response:

That is true. But Brian will always protect his mum.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 11:13 am Title: You Really Did Start the Fire, Now Your Bridge is Burning

Oh Crap!!!

Michael is So Dead They Are Going To Have Bury Him Thrice!!!

Deb may just kill him or someone else will have to cause prison orange wouldn't make a good wedding dress.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 8:06 am Title: You Really Did Start the Fire, Now Your Bridge is Burning

Michael is not having a good week.  What malviolent plan does he have now?

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