Date: Oct 16, 2016 2:08 pm Title: The Bet
Exciting to see an update - and since I didn't get a chance to read the last chapter yet, I get double the fun . . . TAG
Well, not the response I was expecting... notice nothing was said about the ending haha.... Now you can understand what was causing the writer's block hmmm? And then it just ended to boot! I hate it when you just get going again and it turns out...ooop...nope that's the end of the chappy! Most annoying!
Date: Sep 12, 2016 12:57 pm Title: Poverty and Power
Ha ha ha... I suspect a wild fantasy to have Brian at your beck and call while you are writing your fantastic stories. Nobody could blame you.
But Michael? Really? Eww... Did I already write that?
Nevertheless, it won't stop me to keep reading.
Well, just keep in mind this is an AU...Alternate CANON (as much as I can keep it up at least) and Fetish (don't judge) as I have put in my tags now that I was instructed on how to do that. So in this AU, Mike is: an evil hypnotist.....the villian (like think Jafar evil) and possiblybutprobably insane or gettin there. And while there is the Brian/Michael pairing, it's obviously not a love match. So just keep that in mind as you strap in, stock up on the Gravol and hopefully not develop too much of a lover's relationship with John Crapper's moneymaker.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 11:20 am Title: First Day at Work
It's absolutely not boring; your stories are never boring!
It was a little funny ("made the Road Runner look like an asthmatic slouch") and little hot ("Justin teasing with the ice cream").
I guess there will be more of that later on, so I'm not worried.
I loved Brian with Sap and Vance. No BS, straight to the point.
The last scene is disturbing as Michael is tricking Brian to comply his desires, which could lead to some "eww" things if he got his way. But he can't have that, can he?
The more he thinks he will win, the more crashed he will be.
Thank you very much for telling me what you think. I love reviews like this.
And yes, the last scene was disturbing wasn't it? Don't worry, that was what I was hoping for. Things will turn out all right but look forward to more mind control.