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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2016 12:34 pm Title: My Love is Fickle like the Wind

Brian seems living a very ordered life and "dealing" with some painful memories.

What is he going to do so spontaneously? Seeking after Justin?

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2016 11:28 pm Title: My Love is Fickle like the Wind

It's interesting to read about someone else's (Andrew's) lack of success in breaching Brian's barriers and getting him to love them. Brian's introspection as to whether he is capable of romantic love is very poignant.

I actually feel a bit sorry for Andrew in his efforts to help Brian and to get him to communicate. Clearly a bit like battering his head against a brick wall.

Is Brian going to run into Justin during his spontaneous outing?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2016 6:54 am Title: Screwing the Exit Plan

I'm sorry for the mistake and I agree with your "Eww" and shivers.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2016 1:54 am Title: Screwing the Exit Plan

Oh yeah, I enjoyed it.

It almost makes me cringe that Michael was in their team and in Justin's bed but given the circumstances, it was not too bad.

The idea of the plot is very interesting.

And the (long) scene with Brian is self-fan inducing.

I loved the « “You’re incredible you know that.” “It’s true,” he said turning to Justin with a smirk and a wink, “I am.” »; I could see him saying and doing just that..

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

No, no it's not Michael Nobotny. He's actually dead in this story. Mikael is just another lost soul and a New York street rat who's great with blue prints, he helps them manuveur in and out of places, which is why they also call him "Eagle eye."

He's the one next to Justin on the poster. Eww no Michael and Justin together...*shivers*

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2016 8:59 pm Title: Screwing the Exit Plan

Read and reviewed on AO3 before seeing you'd posted on KD! My two favorite sites, so I'm glad to see it on both. 😊

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Clever play on words with the chapter title!

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