Date: May 31, 2018 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 25: 50th and 9th
I’m really loving this story even with B and J with others. You are such a good writer, and it’s a really compelling story. :) I hope you finish it someday, despite some negative feedback. I think the majority absolutely love it, like all your stories. Regarding the chapters so far, Lilly and Duncan are so adorable, and the pet rats too. :) I took a class where we had tame rats, white or tan with spots, and would have them run through short mazes. They were so sweet and intelligent! At the end of the class, they let students take them home as pets. :) I like when Brian and Justin interact in this story, but can’t help but like Eric too. Take care, and I hope you are having a good week!
Date: May 28, 2018 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 17: 23rd and 5th
This is such a good story and I’m hooked on reading it this week. I’m sorry to hear about some of the comments, it’s just fiction after all. I’ve wanted to read this story for some time, especially seeing that it is a series with spinoffs and deleted scenes. I do like B/J together, but I’m glad to see that they could also find happiness elsewhere if they could. I’m going back to reading the story again. :)
Date: May 26, 2018 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
I really liked the first chapter, and did see that Brian had changed, and that Justin just wasn't ready for commitment like Brian was. It's sad to read that Brian was with a new man with a child, but also glad he appears to be happy. How funny that Brian tried to say that he didn't know "Frozen", but he really does, LOL.
Date: Oct 30, 2017 9:27 am Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
I also wanted to say I LOVED the hammock scene, it was beautifully written, it was touching, yet sad, and tugged at my heart! Made me realize I'm ridiculously romantic and just want our boys together!! Is that in the cards for them or for me...guess time will tell. Candy
Date: Oct 29, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 48: 48th and Greenpoint
Please tell me this great story won't be left as a WIP, I'm about half way through and while I am hooked, a part of me doesn't want to be left hanging. While our boys will always be sealed together in my heart, I'm not normally a fan of either with someone else, but this is really well written. Every time I think they might cross that line, I'm surprised at where the story goes. So here's hoping the author will have mercy on us and gives us a great ending and a sequel!! Candy
Date: Aug 27, 2017 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 39: S. 4th and Bedford
Hey Annie, in re-reading this I notice that Brian finally called Justin Sunshine...is this the first time he's said it directly to him since they first saw each other again? I think so, if I'm not mistaken...
Date: May 08, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 48: 48th and Greenpoint
So glad to see an update. Lots of good stuff- wish Justin would let Brian know about the twins.
Interesting conversation with Cynthia- I think there is more to it than Brian is letting on- not sure what it is, but he is bothered by Lily finding out that Cynthia is her mom.
I love that Debbie took Gus out of school to come see the recital.
Date: May 05, 2017 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 48: 48th and Greenpoint
Thank you for this update!
Lily is very intense for a little girl and can be queening out like her daddy. Poor Duncan having to "fight" for the first place in her heart. He is so attentive and charming.
Cynthia and Justin left me with a bittersweet feeling as they seem not fully happy with their life.
Date: May 04, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 48: 48th and Greenpoint
'It's boring & lacks all feeling'....nice Brian, way to be supportive of your 4 year old! Lol Love how everyone comes to the theater for Lily! Nathan vs. Duncan lol
Brian & Cynthia...priceless!
I really enjoy Eric & Justin’s friendship. That nursery is going to be a masterpiece!
Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:42 am Title: Chapter 47: Wythe and N 7th
Oh, my actual GOD. I don't know whether to laugh or cry here...Poor Justin is going to have his hands full, isn't he????????? I mean, it's so great for him and I am so happy - but the poor guy seems so overwhelmed by this LOL!
Also, am I the only one that now COMPLELETELY AND UTTERLY ships Justin and Eric.... I don't mean like that, but as friends, Eric just seems to know what to say sometimes and he always seems to calm Justin down when he's panicking. Loveeeeeeeeee this!
Date: Apr 04, 2017 7:34 am Title: Chapter 47: Wythe and N 7th
Love love love nervous Justin...he's so sweet...with such trepidation about the future...cute! Funny dinner with his friends, lovely lunch with Eric. The mural sounds really nice. Will they allow Lily to watch Justin paint? She may want to 'help' lol
That was fairly short for you, what's up with that? Are you becoming a tease? Well knock it off, I live for your long chapters heehee
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 46: 3rd Street and Sinatra Drive
Oh, Hunter. You embarrassing love bug, you!
Also, why is that every chapter I read, I go, "this is the best Lily storyline..." seriously, this kid is just made of actual fucking win. Her trying to get Justin in on her little act to stay downstairs, and her amazing acting skills - she cannot be beat. And Duncan loving his quarter latino lady, these kids crack me up.
I love Malcolm, like I think I awww'd so much during this, it's like, Justin - he likes you, man. And he'd totally look after you and the baby, LET HIM.
I loved the hammock scene -- especially Brian teasing Justin about how Eric would stop talking to him if he caught them, little shit that he is LOL.
I seriously could read this without any of the cast being in it and it being all LIly and Duncan (and the rats) LOL
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:39 am Title: Chapter 46: 3rd Street and Sinatra Drive
Poor Molly, we've all been there girl....heart ache, it sucks! Justin is the BEST big brother ever!
Jesus, you go Justin with your hot...whatever he is...Mr Right for now I guess...lol Yikes! Sometimes there is a things as too big...ouch! lol
Emmett's house is the best place for a Halloween Treasure Hunt, clearly. And Lily my girl, you belong on the stage! Too funny...
That hammock scene, shit...so touching, sad, nostalgic...Christ, you're killing me Anne!
Hunter is so sweet! Love that song!
The end of Justin & Malcolm...too bad he was a nice guy but something tells me Justin's heart really wasn't in it...
Date: Mar 04, 2017 5:39 am Title: Chapter 46: 3rd Street and Sinatra Drive
I have so missed this story. Once again you have made this family come to life.
Hell I was loving the games, the way you had Malcom explain Duncans reaction and his imput was right on target.
Keep up the good work!
Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 46: 3rd Street and Sinatra Drive
That was an amazing chapter!!! Long, dense, funny and yet with some sadness.
The scene with Brian on the hammock and the end... I feel so sad for Justin, even if it's his decision regarding Malcom. I just hope Malcom will remain in Justin's future, once the baby is born. As for the memory of Britin with the stars in the sky, it was gut wrenching.
So happy Hunter was here to cheer Molly up.
The whole Haloween part was so detailed, I could almost "see" and "feel" it.
Thank you for this long update!
Date: Feb 24, 2017 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 45: W Bay and S Howe Streets
Well done, Miss. Lily. I hope she doesn't let her record go to her head :)
Brian and Eric are legit scorching hot. I love their sexy time scenes. The way Brian just lets himself go is so so so hot.
I really love Eric, when Brian said how Gus turning 15 made him feel sick, I lol'd so much as Eric's "and old" haha.
I really dislike Eric's parents, his mom especially. I understand her finding it hard having a gay son, what with her being all religious and stuff, but she doesn't even try and make an effort :(
Date: Feb 22, 2017 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 45: W Bay and S Howe Streets
I absolute love this chapter. It's always nice to see Brian give in to his more vulnerable side. This story has given us a lot of insight into that but this chapter especially. I love the good side of Eric's family dynamic. The scene where his dad asked to say goodbye to Lilly especially spoke volumes. Can't wait to see what happens next. And just because B/J will always be my favorite I really hope Justin is in Toronto. I am torn between loving B/E and wanting B/J back together. Ahhh you're wrecking my emotions and fantasy B/J life. Awesome job, keep writing!!!