Date: Feb 06, 2017 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 42 - PC Play Time.
I had to skip most of the chapter. Too difficult to read.
I can't imagine what Lindsey will do to help them.
I totally understand the skipping thing. It was a tough chapter to write too. TAG
Date: Feb 06, 2017 6:07 am Title: Chapter 42 - PC Play Time.
Oh Tag, holy Christ this hurt my heart, this made me sick, yes you're very talented writer but oh my God these guys are so evil...poor Rex! He's going to be permanently damaged isn't he? I can't even imagine the torture those PC's are having to put up with. This chapter completely horrified me I don't know what next chapter is going to do, I better have some Patron ready... I know they're fictional characters but I'm still going to pray for them anyway
I know it was a really harsh chapter. I apologize. But we are talking about de facto slavery, and I was trying my best to protray how I think modern day slave owners would behave. I think it's necessary for the story to make it believable. I'll try to keep this kind of stuff to a minimum though. I swear that it will all be okay in the end. No evil politicians will ever win in my universe. TAG