Lol. This is getting nuts.
Im enjoying watching Brain lose his mind
It does get crazy, huh? This story was basically just a way of torturing Brian day in and day out. Glad you’re enjoying it! Lol. TAG
Amazing story! I wondered how Brian will move forward and the way you made him was genius!
I loved the need to buy another alarm clock: I didn't count how many times Brian woke up to it, but it has traumatized him!
It's a great achievement for Brian: he is as ready as he could ever be for what is coming.
His soliloquy is very moving.
It's funny that you make Brian and Ben meet again before Ben starts seeing Michael. Maybe he will think twice if he could see Michael behaving towards Justin.
I can see them singing "Que sera, sera"... What a scene!
Oh no, this can't be good: Cody is worse than Chris!
That was almost the perfect story-line! Damn Hobbs and company! Even if Brian is getting tired of this "reboot", the morning after is one of the best moments they are having. He is getting better and better with Justin and that's the main thing.
I was afraid it might be Craig, but this is worse!
Yeah, Craig is violent and hates gay people! No way he will allow Justin near Brian, ever!
Ruin him and Stockwell as well!
Talking to Craig could work, if Brian is able to show the parallel between the fact the Craig was accepted by Jennifer's family while he is from a Mormon family and Brian who is gay, therefore, out of the "norm".
The other way, which I would prefer, is to ruin Craig financially and socially, after he shows his true self to Jennifer and Justin; because, deep down, I think he is not a good guy.
Yeah, this Brian seems to be well balanced, and it's messing with Michael's head!
I bet we will see some of Craig's action though.
I was quite sure it was the right one!
Yeah, the bimbo did crash the funeral, but I didn't expect Justin to turn to Chris and absolutely not Stockwell to deal with our dear murderer.
You promised that Brian will suffer, you didn't lie!
Lol. I can be very tricky sometimes, huh? And, yes, I DID torture Brian quite unmercifully in this story. Poor guy. But, I’m sure it will all work out... somehow. TAG
I thought it would be Craig's assistant who would cause a problem, saying Brian was with Craig when he died.
I was afraid Justin wouldn't leave his mother.
The only easy way to get rid of Craig is to make Jennifer aware of his infidelities or to ruin him before Justin is outed.
Very succinct and apt. Lol. TAG
Lol. Good description of our hero! TAG
Great day, great fun, great poking at Michael!
The part with Craig was not fun at all, but the result is that Justin might move in.
It's great that Brian is getting real fun as any kid would have. I think there is a part, hidden very deep, that is the childhood he didn't have. Maybe if he tries to live some funny moments, he would be less bitter and less sarcastic, therefore nicer to Justin.
Yes! He did it! He found the good balance and a reliable way to get back to the morning after THE night.
He finally was able to experience the scarfing without interruption, though he prefers the bus to go back in time. Less hot, but efficient.
Poor Brian: he has a very long way ahead. He has all wrong either with Justin or Daphne; none of them could trust him. He is not very subtle.
Very funny! Brian is begging Justin to stay and take a shower! He better be careful or it will look like he's stalking Justin.
I always love writing stories where the tables are turned. LOL. TAG
The bashing is one of the key moments of Britin. Now Brian knows it wasn't his fault, but Justin's death might be.
I wonder how Brian will deal with Kip.
I'm quite sure I already read this story, but I can't find any of my comments.
It's an amazing and intriguing beginning; it reminds me of "Groundhog Day" with Bill Murray.
I can't wait to see how you will manage this travel back in time with Brian and his favorite twink, until he gets it right.
Thank you for reading it again and reviewing. I’m afraid Brian’s going to have to really work at getting this one right... TAG