Date: Dec 24, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 21 - The Prince and The Palace
Amazing story! I wondered how Brian will move forward and the way you made him was genius!
I loved the need to buy another alarm clock: I didn't count how many times Brian woke up to it, but it has traumatized him!
Date: Dec 18, 2017 8:57 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Reverse Bashing
It's funny that you make Brian and Ben meet again before Ben starts seeing Michael. Maybe he will think twice if he could see Michael behaving towards Justin.
I can see them singing "Que sera, sera"... What a scene!
Date: Dec 17, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Perfect?
That was almost the perfect story-line! Damn Hobbs and company! Even if Brian is getting tired of this "reboot", the morning after is one of the best moments they are having. He is getting better and better with Justin and that's the main thing.
Date: Dec 17, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 14 - A New Plan
Talking to Craig could work, if Brian is able to show the parallel between the fact the Craig was accepted by Jennifer's family while he is from a Mormon family and Brian who is gay, therefore, out of the "norm".
The other way, which I would prefer, is to ruin Craig financially and socially, after he shows his true self to Jennifer and Justin; because, deep down, I think he is not a good guy.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 7:03 am Title: Chapter 11 - How To Ruin a Perfectly Good Funeral
Yeah, the bimbo did crash the funeral, but I didn't expect Justin to turn to Chris and absolutely not Stockwell to deal with our dear murderer.
You promised that Brian will suffer, you didn't lie!
Lol. I can be very tricky sometimes, huh? And, yes, I DID torture Brian quite unmercifully in this story. Poor guy. But, I’m sure it will all work out... somehow. TAG
Date: Dec 10, 2017 11:33 am Title: Chapter 6 - I’m Pretty Sure I AM Crazy - Why Won’t They Believe Me?
It's great that Brian is getting real fun as any kid would have. I think there is a part, hidden very deep, that is the childhood he didn't have. Maybe if he tries to live some funny moments, he would be less bitter and less sarcastic, therefore nicer to Justin.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - No Way Out
Yes! He did it! He found the good balance and a reliable way to get back to the morning after THE night.
He finally was able to experience the scarfing without interruption, though he prefers the bus to go back in time. Less hot, but efficient.
Date: Dec 04, 2017 11:46 am Title: Chapter 3 - No Regrets?
Very funny! Brian is begging Justin to stay and take a shower! He better be careful or it will look like he's stalking Justin.
I always love writing stories where the tables are turned. LOL. TAG
Date: Dec 03, 2017 1:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Night Before the Morning After
I'm quite sure I already read this story, but I can't find any of my comments.
It's an amazing and intriguing beginning; it reminds me of "Groundhog Day" with Bill Murray.
I can't wait to see how you will manage this travel back in time with Brian and his favorite twink, until he gets it right.
Thank you for reading it again and reviewing. I’m afraid Brian’s going to have to really work at getting this one right... TAG