Reviews For Love at First Bite

Name: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: Jan 22, 2017 8:00 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1 - Cold

Great chapter, love the "defend" conversation.

Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jan 22, 2017 7:54 pm · Chapter: Chapter 32 - Repercussions

Awww Brian and Justin got sick.

Well at least they had each other and the puppies to spend time with instead of the idiots making it worse.

Glad that Slick has found closure and is moving forward with her life to embrace her happiness.

Craig, Michael and Lindsay being sued for defamation of character?

Those three idiots should have kept their mouths shut cause now it is on  and they are going to pay.

Lindsay and Michael are lower than fleas (sorry fleas) for that stunt but getting Michael to shell out thirty grand for a comic should be hilarious, and Lindsay trying to play mommy should be funny too since Gus and Jenny don't want to be around her or her sidekick.

Stupid Is As Stupid Does <smh>



Name: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:23 pm · Chapter: Chapter 32 - Repercussions
I'm enjoying this much..First Craig should put to his right place where belongs far away from the family so he won't be able to upset Justin anymore..Then Suing the idiot duo for defamation and sue for costudy and after that cut them out of the family's life for good..Let them rot as far as i'm concern far away as the Mars as could be where they can no longer comes closer to anybody from the gang..
But before that,yap slick you should get the whiny brats store until he goes down with nothing!!the same for the cunty wasp!!They don't know whats coming on their way until it hit their faces....

Slik was so strong and brave facing her sperm donor like that..Good for you Slick,now you can move on completely towards the future and hoping that future including a studly Lindon..And what is that,Slick seems to be expert but it was a surprise that she's still untouch yet,wow🙄🙄wonder never cease...

Poor B/J cought a cold,well it was worth it,atleast both of them suffered..And the sweetness overload..😍😍😍

Great chapter andbthanks for updating😘

Name: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:23 am · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?

I know stumbling blocks are needed, and the Disparaging Duo lead the charge, I am just glad that they are caught (and overheard) and they still don't realize that everyone defends the family since they are loved by all!!!!

the defense (love) convo that ended the chapter was beautiful!

Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 6:31 pm · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?

Not surprised Michael and Lindsay used Jenny to find out what was going on and then sent Craig to freak Justin out.

What they should be ready for is what Slick is about to do and what Jennifer, Melanie are going to do?

The puppies sound so cute and it is bringing out Brian's inner child with glorious results, Brian is finally comfortable enough to indulge his own wants and needs instead of trying to live up to Michael and Lindsay's selfish desires.

Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cold, But Humiliation Always Appreciates a Captivating Audience ;)

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 1:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?

If Mikey and Lindsay think calling in Craig is going to work, they have another think coming.  Loving this.

Name: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 1:37 pm · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?

I....LAWD I.....<humming some negro spirituals RIGHT NOW so that I don't type a whole stream of cussing!> 

Can we PLEASE have the next chapter be called "GUT-PUNCHED and THROAT CHOPPED" so that you can write me into the story as an anonymous person who decides to check a BITCH and MITCH?!! These two.... LAWD!!!! 

My turn to torture some assholes....Off to write!

Happy Writing and HUGS,



Name: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:58 pm · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?
The nerve of those two,how some idiot people still manage to upset somebody??Poor Justin can't even form a word when he saw his bastard of a father?!well J better off without Craig in his life,so i hope he get over it soon..
And for the twin dump ass,the family should just cut them out of their life for good,before they made another huge mistake or do any damage to them or worst harm one of the family specially Justin..Who knows what else they're capable of doing just to get what they wants..
Great chapter as always!!Thanks for sharing..😘

Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:56 pm · Chapter: Chapter 31 - When?

Loved this, especially Carl's speech about Justin. 


Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 11:56 am · Chapter: Chapter 30 - Bears

I love how playful Brian and Justin are with each other in this story. As for the two mindless fools - will they ever get a clue? The dogs are adorable and will be well loved by the whole family.


Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:24 am · Chapter: Chapter 30 - Bears

I always knew that Brian has a soft heart.  Two dogs instead of one.  Love the names.

Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 1:32 am · Chapter: Chapter 30 - Bears

Good chapter

Name: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: Jan 21, 2017 1:27 am · Chapter: Chapter 30 - Bears
Oh my God!!I just research the kai ken puppies,they are to die for😍😍
Brian can't really say no to Justin even without talking to each,they just know what other is thinking..😘

I love how Ted ask Lindsay about the idiot part😆Seems both of them can't get any clue that nobody wants them around least of all having them at Britin..It's very annoying duo!!

Thanks for anothet brilliant update..

Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:41 pm · Chapter: Chapter 29 - Unashamed

Michael and Lindsay can always be counted on to make Asses out of themselves and to excuse their behavior because of course they don't do anything wrong.

Slick will destroy them if they hurt her boys and that should be hilarious and make them think they can take her on.

Just Love that everyone on Liberty Avenue is trying to protect Brian and Justin from the idiot duo.

The next few chapters are going to be very interesting 

Name: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: Jan 20, 2017 2:38 pm · Chapter: Chapter 29 - Unashamed
Hahahaa is there anyone's more idiot that this two???How they just jump to conclusions without learning the whole story??They really are piece of work……

It's good to know that Brandon is not a bad guy and competing Brian in here..

And Brian,well finally he lost his virginity to our little spitfire,how sweet is that specially when he announced it to the whole Liberty Avenue😍😍

And as for Daphne,you go girl,always knows how to make an interesting story with a touch of hot scene in it🙂🙂anybody can be fooled by her😆😆

Thanks for updating,loved it..

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 20, 2017 1:35 pm · Chapter: Chapter 29 - Unashamed

ROFLMAO.  That was too cool.  A car?  But to get back to the beginning, Brian let everyone know that he is no longer a bottom virgin.  That was very classy of Brandon to salute Brian.  So Brian gets a puppy, about time and gave Justin a key!  I was glad to see that Michael and Lindsay were not allowed to sit just anywhere in the diner.  Another fab chapter.

Name: Lorie (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 5:21 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

GREAT chapter.

Bitch and weasel get their asses handed to them.

And then, such a hot ending.


Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:37 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

Michael interrupted Daphne and Hunter? No wonder she wants to kick his Ass! 

As much as everyone would love to see Daphne kick Michael's Ass up and down Liberty Avenue,  he would use her so fast it wouldn't be worth the effort, Damn shame to because if anyone deserves to be beaten it is Michael.

I felt so bad for Brian his so called best friends have just broken heart, thankfully Justin was there to hold him and ease the pain a silly day is just what Brian needed to forget about the two idiots.

Slick as usual took care of The Gruesome Twosome and now Lindsay has to rush back to Canada to get her stuff and to get a lawyer because Brian is not kidding about getting custody of his son.

Can't wait to see what happens next? :)

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:44 am · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

Hahaha.  Michael was finally straightened out regarding Ben.  Then Brian gets his cell phone and calls him on his lies.  Love the silly day that Brian had with Justin.  Wonderful chapter.

Name: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 6:04 am · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted

I just love Slick! She anticipates what anyone in her family needs... also, that final scene... I think I need a cigarette and a cold shower after that!!!!!

Author's Response:

So did B&J...though their shower would most likely be round two!!!

Name: Jazzepoet (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 5:05 am · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
“Holy fuckety fuck of fuck!"......ROTFL so hard at this! Brian sure does have a way with words huh. I'll tackle Lindz and Mikey later.

Name: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: Jan 17, 2017 1:24 am · Chapter: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
That was HOT————But i need more😥😥hehehe demanding much,but i just can't get enough when it comes to our boys😍😍

I hope Gus would be granted to stay with his father full time,poor kid always put in the middle bcoz of his mothers craziness and delusional life..!!
Lindsay and Michael really deserve each other,they're so selfish and impertinent people...

So close Michael have his head off by Daphne,if only they let her go maybe the whiny brat can have a clue of what's happening around him!!
And I love Slick for moving things so quick. ..Lindsay thought it's bullshit,well take your own shit bcoz you don't have a home now...!!

Ilove it,Thanks for sharing!

Name: emac66 (Signed) · Date: Jan 16, 2017 10:15 am · Chapter: Chapter 27 - Idiocy

Michael isn't just as asshole....he's completely hateful and umapologetic. what he said to slick was totally unacceptable and unforgivable. So too were the lies about the support payments. 3 YEARS!! Unreal. His attitude is disgusting and I don't see him ever changing it. Where on earth did he develop such an attitude? I mean I get the Deb may have smothered a bit, but she would never have allowed him to get away with being so "elitest" growing up. why does he think he deserves so much or that he can excuse his behaviour so much. 

Molly, Jenny etc are terrific! Jenny at leasst knows exactly what Michael is all about now. Knows about the lies. Smart that she doesn't want to be around him. 

OK....that last part....Accusing Ben of sleeping with Daphne?? HAHAHAHAHA! Oh what a moron! THAT was hilarious! Naturally he';; go flying off the handle and then when the truth comes out, he'll blame everyone else for not telling him anyting. *sigh* MORON!!



Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Jan 15, 2017 10:04 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27 - Idiocy

Oh my god. What an idiot.

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 15, 2017 8:12 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27 - Idiocy

Micheal shouldn't listen in to private conversations.  He got it all wrong.  Where did he get the idea that Daphne and Ben were an item?  Poor Jenny, she has to put up with his shit. Love seeing how everyone is getting along, especially Brian and Justin.

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