Yeah, he did it; he won the gold and Brian's heart!
It would be nice to have an epilogue to see how Craig is taking the medal and his wife owning his company... To see him suffer...
I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. it was an emotional journey from start to finish. Justin truly won big here; I think they both did. An epilogue is an intriguing idea. Who knows what the future may bring...
Thanks so much for your comments. It is greatly appreciated! :)
Ah, Emmett and Daphne, what a pair of friends!
The war is declared.
The fags against the WASPs.
Glad to hear Justin trying to protect Brian from Melanie.
The fags will shoot back.
Yeah, all night long...
With Daphne and Brian, Justin is quite well protected.
What a nightmare this Ethan...
Brian is marking his "territory".
Eww, Ethan arrived; can't be good.
Mel's head is going to explode; that kiss...
I wouldn't be surprised. Finally, they are having a moment to get to know each other better. :)
Read this in it's entirety last night. I already have it on my Kindle. Wonderful throwback to my introduction to QAF and it's fanfiction. I htink this was one of the first one's I read, ot at least it was definitely one of the first real memorable ones. Needless to say, it certainly helped get me hooked into the fandom.
LOVED how Craig got his cummupence. I think one of my favorite parts was when Emmett flounced into Craig's office. I could picture it perfectly. And now that Jen has control of it....well, I can just imagine what will happen there. Needless to say Craig got his just rewards and Jen was definitely the benficiary.
Lindsey has her head on straight with regards to her relationship with Brian. Mel....have to say she was pissing me off. A LOT! At least Justin stood up to her. Good on him. AFter reading one of her many little tirades, I actually had to go outside for as cigarette. I had a battle of words with an invisible Mel in my head while smoking. LOL. Yes...I obviously get emotionally involved with some stories. hahaha.
And of course a wonderful ending for our 2 boys. *happy sighs* those always make me smile.
Cheers and thanks for reposting. It give me a chance to review. I used to be sooooo bad for it adn now I'm trying very hard to be more diligent.
Elaine, thank you for such a complete and so well thought out comment. I am enormously touched that this story moved so many readers. I enjoyed my part in that particular 'verse more than I can ever say. I hated bringing it to the end, but at the time, I just felt it was where it needed to be for a fitting and final closure. I have become attached to the characters in different stories that I have written, but I don't think I have repeated it in more recent stories as I did with this one. It was a unique and very special journey for me as a writer.
Thank you for reading this again, and for leaving your thoughts. I appreciate that more than I can say. *Hugss* Janet
Completely loving your stories!!! All of them!!
Thank you!! I appreciate hearing that so much. Thanks for commenting. :)
So, Craig was behind all this. Nice move coach!
Once again, Craig gets the worst Father-of-the-Year award! Ugh. More chapters posted now. I hope you continue to enjoy this one. Thanks for your comments. :)
No Babylon tonight for Justin... Who made him sick again?
How does the coach know it's stomach flu?
Yeah, Brian gives a shit! And we love it when he does.
Yes, Brian doesn't fool anyone. Certain people it is so obvious he cares about. Already, Justin is falling into that category. :)
As if he would continue without Justin in his mind...
Justin is playing with fire!
The heat is high...
Ah, Daphne is here! Love that girl!
Yes, we do have a bit of Daphne. She is such a special girl. :)
Interesting beginning. Craig and Mel beinf their usual mean people.
Oh yes, Craig and Melanie are both irritating. One will be more than the other.
LOVE this story:)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting. :)