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Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2019 1:10 am Title: Berating and Explaining

So good!!! Love it :-)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 8:11 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Great chapter.  Love how these now characters add to the original. And, of course, anytime Mikey is in trouble I am soooooooooooo Happy.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 7:15 am Title: Berating and Explaining

Michael, Michael, Michael. Trying to get the upper hand of Mercy and trying to control her, is like committing virtual suicide. All of them are ready to take you out, and you will fast find that out. But Kudos go to Uncle Vic. But he shouldn't have stopped with a couple of teeth. I do wonder if Michael will file a complaint with the police. 

Brian admitting he'd rather suck snatch, [shudder the thought] than to be with Michael, that way, was both funny and revolting at the same time. But yes, as I said earlier in a review, Brian would be outraged to know the truth of that.

Why Michael wouldn't just call defeat and stop his blabbering to Mercy, I'll never know. He just continued to drone on and on, embarrassing himself, and humiliating himself in front of everybody. He just doesn't know when to shut up, does he?

I just KNEW when George handed him the watch, that it wasn't Brian's. But I expected it to be a fake. Not the real thing. George's real thing. But if they can get Michael and Ethan for having George's watch, well, that's one one to skin the goose.

Thanks so much for all these updates, again. I love reading your stories.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 7:01 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Michael is such a prick in this story: so good to get to hate him.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 5:18 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Michael's selfish behavior really came through that time he honestly sees Mercy as his possession and when his toys don't stay in their boxes and assigned place he stomps, pouts and whines loudly until he gets his way.

Michael sees Mercy as his own special toy and her parents moving to London pissed him off so the shiny A-Hole decided to exact his revenge in his own cruel way and he is still doing it to Mercy by trying to put her back in her place.

Vic knocking out Michael's teeth was rewarding but Michael isn't going to let that stop him from trying to get his hands on Mercy.

Michael should get use to bring knocked on his Ass I doubt this will be the last time Hell a que is forming and everyone wants second, third and fourth chances.

Thanks for the Update. Happy New Year

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 2:33 pm Title: Berating and Explaining

Michael seems to have unreal expectations and doesn't have a clue about what a best friend is.

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