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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter.  It is good to see a grown up Gus even under bad circumstances.  Wonderful writing.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! We love writing teenage guys, and we're glad you guys enjoy reading about him too! - TI

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 4:14 am Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay does seem rather dense but Mel catches on fast.  At least Gus has allies in Jennifer, Justin and Brian.



Author's Response: I think Lindsay just wanted to believe Gus would be more open with her, but he’s definitely got both of his moms firmly on his side now. And to be fair, Gus had intentionally not given Lindsay and Melanie any details, so they didn’t have a lot to go on besides him being stubborn. All is well now! Thanks, as always, for reading and commenting! -PTW

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 3:50 am Title: Chapter 7

Poor Gus! Thank you Jennifer for the wise feedback!



Author's Response: Jennifer has been through it all with 17 year old sons, and she made sure to learn from the experience. I love that it allows for her and Justin to be as close as they are now (Brian and Jennifer too!) Thanks for reading!! -PTW

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