Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2020 3:57 am Title: Chapter 4

Hmm, this was good. Apparently, the talk from Craig to Jack, penetrated enough that he's taking a look at his life... But I wish Jack luck, while trying to change Joannie's mind. Coming into Kinnetik, drunk and raising brimstone, isn't going to earn her a place in heaven... and as you stated, judge yourself.

In Matthew, Jesus warns that one who condemns others will themselves be condemned. So, drunk ole Joan better watch out.

Well, we got a Mikey siting.. I can hardly wait for Debbie to get there. I hope she drags him by his ear all the way home, berating him as they go.

Oh God, I can just imagine the hell when Lindsay hears that news! Poor Melanie!

Hugs  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2020 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

 

Cathy,

Loving this story. Both if them have good fathers and fucked up mothers. Great job. Getting more interesting all the time.

~Lorie