Date: May 24, 2017 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Slick is so amazing. This was great idea.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
So many hot arguments here! And not in a life affirming way...
The eviction of the Dynamic Evil Duo has begun.
Date: Jan 14, 2017 9:53 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Well that's done and done. Can't believe Michael would say such a thing. And Lindsay was warned to act proper, now look.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
You are scary. Great story.
~Lorie
Date: Jan 14, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Love kick arse Mel. Slick getting revenge on Mikey and Linz, Fantastic.
Fabulous update, can't wait for next update.
Thanks for sharing
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Wait Michael Hasn't Paid Child Support In Three Years!!!
Mel has restraint because I would be beating the dog piss out of him bit figuratively and literally.
I feel so bad that Jenny had to find out but it is good that she can see him for what he really is and Lindsay aswell.
I would slap Lindsay so hard it might help improve her looks, she lied and lied and lied to hold on to her place in Brian's circle and now she is out in the cold.
Michael using Slick's mother to get back her was beyond low thankfully Daphne took care of him.
So Slick owns the house in Canada and the building Michael had his comic book store, this is going to be very interesting and a lot of fun.
I wish that the next chapter was up already I want to see Michael go fetal again and hopefully Lindsay go red before her head explodes lol
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Wow. The truth finally comes out about Michael's lack of involvment re: support payments. 3 Years though. what a massive dissapointment he is. all for his stupid store. Certainly know whre hsi priorities lie. Bith L&M have been called to the carpet finally. And with slick as their landlord, well, this will be interesting to say the least.
Daph deserves a massive round of applause! Between tossing Lindsey's shit out the door and almost de-balling Michael, well, she's one of my new heros. Again, nothing short of brilliance.
M&L now will be in full forse revenge mode I'm sure. will be trying every dirty trick in teh book, but naturally it will be to no avail. their continual downfall will be most enjoyable.
I always look forward to each and every update. You NEVER disappoint. I get such pleasure reading this. Thank you!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Michael, Michael. He doesn't think Brian bottoms, that Ben should be able to see Jenny, and he hasn't been paying support for her. He lied to everyone letting them think he was and Lindsay never told Brian that the money he sent was for both kids, not that he would have minded, but to be lied to? Love how Daphne tosses Lindsay's stuff. So we have Lindsay and Michael packing and planning to come back later, but they don't realize that they have no idea how they got to Britin. Holding my sides laughing. Mel's back? Was that planned? Love how Mel had Jenny keep Lindsay's mind off of keeping track of where the car was taking them. Mel is so smart, she even had the joint credit card canceled. I can't believe they are sending Gus back with Lindsay. How cruel. Even more cruel was Michael bringing up Slicks mother. You'd think he learn his lesson about opening his mouth? Daphne let him have it though. Buying out Michael's place of business and Mel and Lindsay's house isn't enough of a payback. Wander what standards Micheal is not upholding?
Date: Jan 13, 2017 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Slick is one "slick" lady... smart and pissed off, such a dangerous combo if you are on her bad side... I ALMOST pity Michael and Lindsay, Almost but not quite LOL
Date: Jan 13, 2017 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
DAYUUUUUUMMMM!!! They really fucked with the wrong one
Date: Jan 13, 2017 9:37 am Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
Very nice