Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, that plan was never going to work, Lindz. Lol. TAG
Date: Feb 14, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
What is she planning? It's not like she has any hold on Brian anymore.
Author's Response:
Susi
Lindsay is like Michael in some ways. She thinks she should always get what she wants in the end.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
So happy that they had a heads up to what the hell those bitches were thinking.
Mel thinks she can undo this? with her legal expertise? the legal mind that thought stealing sperm was totally ok??? wtf
so glad brian and justin are already bonding with THEIR babies! :)
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Jessica felt bad about what she had done and saw a way she could help them, so she did.
Mel is grasping at straws, she knows they're screwed.
The babies will be loved.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooh thats just great!!You both are piece of work,and you deserved everything you got..And Mel just try to do something about it and you're facing the mother lioness in Jennifer and not to mention Harriet..
Aaaaaw the boys got an instant kids without any effort..So excited for them to take the babies home...
Author's Response:
April Danielle
They are just pissed because they lost out on what they thought would be financial freedom for them.
At least the kids will be loved.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 1:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Welcome to fatherhood Sunshine!!!
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response:
Kathleen
Can't imagine having two better fathers than those two.
They are very lucky kids.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 07, 2017 3:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow what total bitches.
Author's Response:
wellreadbunny
Yes, they definitely are that.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 06, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
DAMN!!! First please excuse as I am writing this in a parking lot but I could not wait. Unbelievable!! Those stupid women signed over the babies -- lucky babies dumb egg donors. For a scam like that they needed to play the long game. Just wow!!
Im so happy B and J handled things so well. Life is going to change.
Everyone still has it in for Justin. I wonder what they will come up with next?? Loving it!!
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Certainly was a stupid way to try to get money. But now these wonderful men get to raise their own children.
Justin also has a lot of people to protect him, but it doesn't mean people won't try.
Glad you're enjoying the story.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 06, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Name: Mariana (Signed) · Date: Feb 06, 2017 12:05 pm · Chapter: Chapter 8 Name: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: Sep 21, 2016 12:57 pm · Chapter: Chapter 10
That was a great story. I'm going to read it again right now.
I hope Lindsay will steal Justin's condom and got herself pregnant and Justin will get the baby at the end (just a suggestion from me to you).
Sorry for the late review but I've read the first story again. This is an amazing story and I enjoy it very much. Is so nice to see my "suggestion" come to reality even if you thought it before.
Author's Response:
Mariana
I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
There is more good stuff to come.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh That Was So Worth The Wait!!
I love that they thought two blonde haired, blue eyed babies could be Brian's.
Are those two Bitches on Crack!!!
They got pregnant so Brian could take care of them for the next eighteen years and instead they are out in the cold and as soon as everyone else finds out it is going to get colder and they are in serious trouble. (Jennifer is going to go off better than the 4th of July!!)
Whatever Lindsay and Mel have planned to get their revenge it will be nothing compared to what is coming their way.
Just so Damn happy that Brian and Justin got those babies away from those two scheming heifers, can't wait to find out what their names are and Justin better call Jennifer so she can freak out and then go shopping for her grandbabies lol
Thank goodness those two idiots were talking loud enough for Jessica to hear and she rushed to tell Brian and Justin, soon she will have her job back and smart enough not to fall into the trap she fell in before.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Some people just have no morals, like the bitches.
They will be taken care of eventually.
Babies names in the next chapter and Jennifer will find out in the following chapter. We can't do all the fun stuff at once.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 06, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Clearly the girls are severely deranged. There's absolutely nothing they can do short of killing Justin and of course I wouldn't put that past them, to try to do.
So are they 2 Boys 2 Girls 1 of each what? Lol
Author's Response:
Glo
They did it for the money. Well that was Mel's only reason. Lindsay wanted the money but also wanted Brian tied to her.
I'll be nice and answer, it's in the next chapter, one of each.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 06, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ha ha ha... Too funny!
I don't know if it's even possible and legal, but that serves the bitches right. They are really too dumb and so stingy.
Author's Response:
SNO
Not sure of the exact legalities but no one should benefit from being a thief and trying to extort money.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm not a lawyer, but isn't taking or in this case stealing something with the idea of a monetary reward tantimount to stealing? So couldn't Mel and Lindsay be brought up on charges? Love where you went and with Lindsay's attitude toward Justin I do not see any way that she'll be able to get back in Brian's good graces.
Author's Response:
YumYum
There are several things they can be charged with in connection to what they have done. Brian has just about had it with both of his 'best friends'
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 06, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Normally I get a feeling of rage when it comes to both Michael, Lindsey and even more so Craig. After the last 2 chapters though, I actually have a wee bit of dread. I'm realtively sure that nothing major will happen to either Justin or Brian, however, the plans that any of these 3 may come up with are sure to be pretty horrific. That's what makes me nervous. That they can possibly be so incredibly vindictive, self-serving and calous is unbelievable.
thankfully the boys acted quickly. got all their ducks in a row. As much as the girls will want to take action, they won't get far, especially with the recorded conversation. So ,much for Mel's legal career...If it's found out, I'm sure she'll be disbarred or the threat will be there at least.
wondering what Craig has up his sleeve. He is all kinds of evil. Evil plain and simple and will stop at nothing to get what he wants...or at least try to. He's one that I anticipate will go down with everything lost to him. The only thing he will get is a prison sentence.
AS for last chapter...GO JENN!!!!!! OMG...words cannot express. That was awesome!!
Michael's flashback of the convo between he and Ben was gut wrentching. Oh how I feel for Ben. I don't agree with his sympathy for Mel mind you, but I guess he has no idea about how they were both empregnated.
The last few chapters have been most informative!! HEart is racing a bit when reading. To say I'm looking forward to what's going to happen is an understatement.
Cheers and thank you both for such an incredible sequel!! It is most definitely thrilling!
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Unfortunately there are a lot of people who are really like that. They only think of themselves, not how what they do affects anyone else.
The boys are in love and will work things out.
Craig will get what he deserves in the end.
Jen did what most of us would like to do to the weasel.
At least Ben can finally get on with his life now. No one but the girls knew what they were up to.
There are a lot of surprises to come.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~