Date: Feb 15, 2017 10:51 am Title: Chapter 12
So that makes two problems solved at once.
Author's Response:
Susi
It's getting to the end.
For some there is only one way out.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
the judge's chambers was intense
but that ending though.......
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
There was a lot covered in this chapter.
Asfor the ending, Karma's a bitch.
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Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
What a chapter!!! You were on overdrive!
Too much of good things to think of, but I loved the way Jennifer punched Melanie. Soooooo good and so deserved.
As for the end, it will solve some potential problems.
Author's Response:
SNO
There was a lot to tell.
Jen is tough when you mess with her kids.
Yes that definitely fixed a few things.
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Date: Feb 09, 2017 8:49 am Title: Chapter 12
Yaaaay go mother Taylor!!That was one heck of a punch,knocking someone down🤗🤗🤗
So Laura wasn't that bad,only doing those horrible things to prove herself worthy and having low self esteem is kind of hard..But the most interesting is judge Russo being a good person aside with his bestfriend Jamie..So it's all good..And Brian and Justin don't have to worry about their babies being taken away specially now that Craig might die..
I think it was Michael who got slammed with Craig's car,isn't it??
So excited for the next chapterðŸ˜
Author's Response:
April Danielle
Jen is not someone who you want to piss off.
Jamison is a good friend to both Russo and Laura.
No one will take the kids away from their fathers.
Yes the other car was Michael's.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow!
Author's Response:
wellreadbunny
Hoping that was a good 'wow'.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 3:11 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael has some nerve wanting Deb to mortgage her house to give him money that he was never going to payback, so it's okay if Deb loses her house just as long as Michael gets what he wants to Hell with Deb living in the streets.
Lindsay got dealt with but good in court and now she has no one to save her, she is going to face the consequences of her actions.
Russo surprised me I was expecting him to help Craig but he has a good friend who is willing to put his anger aside to make sure he does the right thing, Jameson is willing to forgive rather then throw away a forty year friendship for Craig's vendetta, that shows he is a real man.
Melanie got lucky she wasn't sitting with Lindsay at the defendant's table, the judge is giving her a chance to change, her petty, vindictive, jealous behavior almost cost her her career, that it never crossed her mind just goes to show how much she wanted to have power over Brian.
Laura might actually get something that she never had before... a chance to regain herself self-esteem and confidence that her mother robbed her of to satisfy her own selfish needs.
Jennifer came in and laid Melanie flat with that powerful right hook and I Loved it just like everyone else.
But the ending was very surprising and I didn't see it coming at all!!
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
This is the order of who is important to Michael. Number 1- Michael. That's it, there is no one else who is important.
Lindsay found out that Karma will bite you back.
Jamison is a good man and willing to forgive Russo.
Melanie was blinded by what she thought was love.
Laura has learned a lot from Jamison.
Mel learned that Jen is not someone to piss off.
We needed to have a surprise in there somehow.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Damn!!! Really nothing else to say I mean the whole chapter was just-- damn!!
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Hoping that means you liked it.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow. I mean wow! Michael had hit rock bottom, feeling that his mother should support him as if he were five. We were worried that Craig would manage to get those beautiful babies and destroy there lives the way he'd tried with their father. But you fixed it with Michael driving into Craig. Hopefully it's perminant? Then we have Lindsay who is so stuck in her delusions that there is no hope for her unlike Melanie.
Author's Response:
YumYum
Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. He doesn't think there should be any consequences for his actions.
What happened to Craig and Catherine is definitely permanent. (We're not writing Pet Sematary).
LIndsay, like Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. She also believes that she should have Brian.
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Author's Response:
YumYum
Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. He doesn't think there should be any consequences for his actions.
What happened to Craig and Catherine is definitely permanent. (We're not writing Pet Sematary).
LIndsay, like Michael has always felt a sense of entitlement. She also believes that she should have Brian.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
Everytime I read an update, I have moments where honestly, my heart is about to beat out of my chest. Again, another chapter FILLED with excitement, angst, loathing..Amazing
I was hoping that Roy was going to do teh right thing. thank goodness he has such a friend as Jaimie. Good that Jaimie was able to forgive him. The history behind them was interesting adn very informative.
Was very hesitant in trusting Laura when Jaimie first mentioned her. His faith in her proved spot on by the end of the chapter. that whole scene was intense! Mel got off relatively well! Aside from Jenn power punch. (again, well deserved!!) Jenn has a terrific right hook!
YAY! Glenn and Daph are getting hitched! Happy dance! Excited for this to happen.
then there's Lindsey........Having Jaimie as the judge! EPIC! Brilliance! Peed myself reading about what her lawyer said. Her inner thoughts.WOW1 This chick needs to be sent to the psych ward 'casue she's NUTS!
Not exactly sure how i feel about the accident. eaerly death would definitely eas teh angst, but you have to admit, you guys write angst SO well!! REALLY looking forward to how you do this! I hope Deb doesn't go overboard with feeling guilty! She can't take that on! I can totally see michael using it all to hsi own benefit though. Fake a worse injury? Fake amnesia? Not sure if he's smart enough to pull either off. AS usual I'm makignwild guesses.
What a treat today is. Updates galore! SAdly I'm not getting any work done at my desk. bonus is boss is out of the office!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Jamie just proved what a good man he is by forgiving Roy.
Laura had reasons for the way she acted.
Jen is not someone to piss off.
Daphne and Glenn are a good match.
Lindsay, like Craig will find out what Karma has in store for them.
Deb has plenty of people around her to help.
Michael won't need to make anything worse.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~