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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

These sessions with the doctors could get intense... TAG

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2017 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

It's really interesting to see their relationship through other people's eyes. Can't wait to see how that develops. 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4

YES!! Thank you for having Emmett point out that Michael lied to him about Brian begging him to go to the hospital! It always bothered me that Michael got away with lying so often, but that lie bothered me most of all.

Love how Emmett only refers to Michael as him or Mr. Novotny! Then he puts Lindsay in her place by confirming that Brian and Justin are married!

Way to go Hunter for calling out Michael's performance and Blake for blocking Deb's attempt to push her way back into their lives! I believe Ted would be very happy for Blake to continue being so assertive. J

Everyone's reaction to Brandon was spot on.

So happy to see Justin is making his way back!

Deb



Author's Response:

You and me both!  I absolutely detested that he said that, I have to skip that part.

Hope you continue to enjoy.

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Interesting how Eden and Brandon view everything.  Love how Emmett gave the hipoints and how Blake set Deb in her place.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

It's great to have an external to analyze what happened in the past and how the drama took place.

Deb really need to back off if she wants a chance to get back in their family.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wait as sec........that was in the car?!?! Sweet Jeebus. Girrrrrrrrrrlllll, that was sumthin's else. Always a pleasure to read those scenes you write. *fans myself*

must say am going to enjoy these sessions if this one was any indication! 

Emmett starts off with his very accurate if slightly flamoyant description. I love the way he talks. It's very visual for me. finding out about Michael lying from teh beginning was intersting. My guess is that he always has...just nobody ever held him accountable, of he was able to always put the blame onto others, Namely Brian.

Hunter's moment to michael's "fit" was a hoot, as was everyone else's participation. not surprised at all that michael tried that. Lindsey's idea of the marriage being false was also put to rest.

Brandon's POV thinking was good here. He's pretty much voicing all of us! lol.

Blake blasting Deb, well, have to say I didn't expect that. Kudos! Good on him. He is soooo gonna get lucky tonight! :)

curious as to how Deb is going to be. she seems to be all apologetic, but am skeptical. Will she continue to blame Brian? If she does, then perhaps teh parking lot was forshadowing her being alone. She's stuck between a rock and a hard place. michael is her son. It's automatic to want to support him. But yet, it's been proven his complicancy. she can't deny that. Hmmm.

cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

I have to admit I love writing about them getting it on...actually off!

I hope you continue to enjoy, it's pretty to hard to write in places, but I am loving it.

Best

Nicole

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