[Report This]Date: May 13, 2017 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love the things you notice and had Ted and Emmett point out. Not to mention the time in the hospital with Lindsay and Brian. You're right she did look guilty. Love how the doctors are not letting Michael and Lindsay get away with phrasing things a certain way. It's amazing how many things Michael told people that weren't true. Will Deb get a clue?
Date: May 13, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad Brian and Justin are making progress. I think they are both traumatized just like the prom all over again.
Michael is a piece of work. That statement was terrible.
Date: May 12, 2017 10:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm... this is a very intersting form of therapy? Not sure if I could do it but if it helps Justin I'm all for it.
Date: May 12, 2017 12:03 am Title: Chapter 4
YES!! Thank you for having Emmett point out that Michael lied to him about Brian begging him to go to the hospital! It always bothered me that Michael got away with lying so often, but that lie bothered me most of all.
Love how Emmett only refers to Michael as him or Mr. Novotny! Then he puts Lindsay in her place by confirming that Brian and Justin are married!
Way to go Hunter for calling out Michael's performance and Blake for blocking Deb's attempt to push her way back into their lives! I believe Ted would be very happy for Blake to continue being so assertive. J
Everyone's reaction to Brandon was spot on.
So happy to see Justin is making his way back!
Deb
Author's Response:
You and me both! I absolutely detested that he said that, I have to skip that part.
Hope you continue to enjoy.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Interesting how Eden and Brandon view everything. Love how Emmett gave the hipoints and how Blake set Deb in her place.
Date: May 11, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. I'm glad they are married and getting custody of Gus. How old is Gus at this time?
Can't wait to see what happens to Michael and Lindsay.
Date: May 11, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's great to have an external to analyze what happened in the past and how the drama took place.
Deb really need to back off if she wants a chance to get back in their family.
Date: May 11, 2017 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wait as sec........that was in the car?!?! Sweet Jeebus. Girrrrrrrrrrlllll, that was sumthin's else. Always a pleasure to read those scenes you write. *fans myself*
must say am going to enjoy these sessions if this one was any indication!
Emmett starts off with his very accurate if slightly flamoyant description. I love the way he talks. It's very visual for me. finding out about Michael lying from teh beginning was intersting. My guess is that he always has...just nobody ever held him accountable, of he was able to always put the blame onto others, Namely Brian.
Hunter's moment to michael's "fit" was a hoot, as was everyone else's participation. not surprised at all that michael tried that. Lindsey's idea of the marriage being false was also put to rest.
Brandon's POV thinking was good here. He's pretty much voicing all of us! lol.
Blake blasting Deb, well, have to say I didn't expect that. Kudos! Good on him. He is soooo gonna get lucky tonight! :)
curious as to how Deb is going to be. she seems to be all apologetic, but am skeptical. Will she continue to blame Brian? If she does, then perhaps teh parking lot was forshadowing her being alone. She's stuck between a rock and a hard place. michael is her son. It's automatic to want to support him. But yet, it's been proven his complicancy. she can't deny that. Hmmm.
cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
I have to admit I love writing about them getting it on...actually off!
I hope you continue to enjoy, it's pretty to hard to write in places, but I am loving it.
Best
Nicole
Date: May 11, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, goodie! Drew is back! Emmett will have some strong support. Ted is great since he is friend with Brian.
Glad Brian didn't let Deb go back as if nothing happened.
Date: May 11, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting plausible explanation why Brandon lost his bet with Brian.
Poor Deb: she doesn't to be treated that way by her son.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Proud of Justin and Brian standing up to Deb and letting her know that all is not forgiven because she also needs to be held accountable for her actions and the blame she always put on Brian for Michael's stupidity.
Emmett, Ted and Hunter got me all teary-eyed they are really showing their support for Brian and Justin, I especially liked Brian opening his arms to Mel so she could cry, just goes to show instead of hating Brian she have been getting to know the man behind the mask.
Eden might need a long vacation after this but I think her and Brandon showing Michael and Lindsay for the conniving snakes they've always been will go a long way to helping the prosecution (Not that they need much help).
Plus everyone needs to hear how in a way they all had a hand in this by enabling Michael and Lindsay's delusions. (Truth hurts, But Denial Kills)
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: May 11, 2017 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful chapter! So good to see everyone supporting Brian and Justin. Thank goodness Deb didn't try to help Michael; maybe she has finally opened her eyes to the kind of person her son really is. You brought tears to my eyes when Emmett and Ted both greeted Justin.
Lindsay needs to knocked off the pedestal she has placed herself on! Hopefully that will happen with the sessions. Should be very interesting!
As for Michael, I wonder how he will react to finding out Brian and Justin are married and Brian's name is now Kinney-Taylor.
Can't wait to read more!
Deb
Date: May 11, 2017 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cannot wait for the next page , great story
Date: May 11, 2017 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hoisted by her own petard...BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh I haven't heard that expression in forever! I can totally imagine Lindsey's expression hearing that...LOL! Having a few giggle fits here and there reading that. hehehe.
Awwwwwwwwww...Drew's back! Oh yay for Emmett. Happy for him. He needs the kind of support that Drew can give him.
So Charles is Eden's hubby huh...interesting plot twist. At least he know's to keep her happy. lol
Justin shows his strength by putting Deb in line. Brian too. Neither are willing to let bygones be bygones in this case. Michael went waaaaaay to far and her blind support was abhorrent! I was a bit surprised at her reaction towards Brian speaking to her. She seemed shocked that he did it. Did she really think he's not stand by Justin or stand up to her? disappointed in her for that. Not sure she's completely learned her lesson yet.
Hunter!! What a gem! I think that tiny part was one of my favorites in this chapter. Damn...little boy is all growed up and is more of a man than his dad Michael.
So who's the person they are waiting on to arrive? Hmmmm. Michael's entry was definiltey the comic relief of teh chapter. :) A seal...HAHA! both his and Lindsey's reactions to everyone being in the room was priceless as well. Not what either of them were expecting.
So looking forward to seeing what all is going to happen in these sessions!!
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm dying to find out exactly what happened. This is going to be f--cking perfect.
Date: May 10, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think Michael bringing up Vic may be one of the worst most evil things I've ever seen him do... he's lucky Deb only hit him the one time!
Date: May 10, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
perpetual victim Lindsay and permanant asshat Michael... can't wait for the past to be filled in :)
<3
Date: May 10, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great intriguing start with a strong Mel and not so strong Justin!
I hope he will get better faster than after the bashing.
Michael might face prison life, but Lindsey will have a reminder every time she will want to do anything with her hand. She also lost her son.
Date: May 10, 2017 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is different than normal, but interesting so far.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
So happy to see this one get written. Thanks. TAG
Author's Response:
No thank you! It was your brilliant idea, hope I do you proud.
MissMerlot
Date: May 10, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another new fic to eventually add to my Kindle collection! You have your own section you know! :) Just saved the last 2 finished fics to it yesterday. :)
I like the style you're wwriting this in. I'm assuming it's all flashbacks for a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone is going to say in teh meetings!
There's going to be some enjoyable new characters. I love how you always blend them into the story so well. It's like they already belong.
Interesting that Brandon wanted to be Brian's bottom boy. I always kind of wondered about that in the show.
So...L&M tried to off Justin huh? Are they really that stupid that they actually thought they'd get away with it? Had to laugh a bit at reading that Michael double crossed Lindsey and tried to kill her. LOL! (sorry, laughter was in poor taste, but seriously...kinda funny) I guess he though she'd get blamed and he'd be off the hook. Dumbass.
Michael talking to his mom...utterly reprehensible! My LAWD!!! (to quote a brilliant writer I know) To play that game...to use Vic like that. And to think people he knows will fall for it...UGH! My thoughts though are that while he does come up with some rather intelligent ideas. Devious yes, but the amount of deviousness that he shows takes a certain amount of intelligence really. It's the part where he carries things out where it tends to fall apart. And in some cases pure dumb luck. It won't take long for everyone to figure out that he's scamming them with this pitiful BS.
Proud of Justin!! He's going to face the asshols! He'll have family there to support him as well. Strength in numbers as they say. He'll get through this with the help of those around him.
I can't WAIT for the confrontation. Very exciting actually. lol. Lindsey already knows their married, but not Michael. That will be a terrific revelation. Thank goodness Mel and Brianget along. Briand and Justin will now have gus thankfully!!
Fanfriggintastic start to what will inevitably be a terrific story.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 10, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Another Fabulous beginning toa new fic. Looks like it will be a roller coaster ride.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 2:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Love that you've made Brandon a doctor. That's going to surprise Mikey. The nerve of him and Lindsay. But I know you'll fix him good.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 2:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy, a new story and it looks to be a humdinger.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 2:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Don't get me wrong, I love your writing! But I feel like I missed the beginning of this story. Will it be like flashbacks to explain how we got to this point? BTW totally love you 🤓
Author's Response:
Thanks my dear. The flashbacks will come in from mid C3 in the sessions. Hope you continue to enjoy.
MissMerlot