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Reviewer: Lorna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2020 8:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Love how he admits his true feelings. 

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 5:32 am Title: Chapter 1

It is great to think Brian had someone familiar to support him on the way to the hospital. I always enjoy stories where we "see" Todd outside of Babylon's back room - so many opportunities for his character who was never explored further in the series.

Reviewer: Simply written Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great way to bring in a character that you never think of as a real character.  Of course he loves him.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow what an awesome story. Todd being the EMT was the best thing to happen for Brian. He gave Brian some reassurances he needed at that moment. Thank you so much and Gloria too for this idea

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, Todd has to do something and this fits in perfectly.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 8:04 am Title: Chapter 1

I swear, Lorie.... In just 852 words you've managed to reduce me to tears, make me smile again, and ultimately give me hope. The EMT occupation really did fit Todd. I mean, after all, he has such a giving 'spirit'. I'm so glad Brian had him in that moment; he really needed Todd's calm and capable presence.

Awesome work, Darling!

HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 7:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Shame on you! Author's Note should have read: TISSUE WARNING - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

This was so awesome. Todd being the EMT was the best thing to happen for Brian. He got Brian on that ambulance, and gave Brian some reassurances he needed at that moment.

Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 5:24 am Title: Chapter 1

When I read this request I hoped someone could write it, and you did it beautifully.

 

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Reviewer: TrueIllusion Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 4:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! I really liked the twist with Todd. I totally see Brian in this moment as needing someone else to take charge and make decisions, take action. Well done.

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:32 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG! You had me crying with Brian and smiling that Todd was the EMT.

Beautifully written scene, such a roller coaster of emotions. Thanks for the ride!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Great job.

Todd, who knew, needed to keep Brian calm, keep hims mind occupied before he sits waiting for the doctor.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 3:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story and wonderful idea.  Really relived the scene reading this and knowing Brian's thoughts.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg Lorie, thank you thank you thank you!!! You're the best! Todd was one of the EMT's? Lol that's awesome! You did good babe! Thanks again!



Author's Response:

 

Gloria,

You're very welcome. When I saw your request earlier I just couldn't get it out of my head so I made some notes and wrote it when I got home from work. Sometimes stories just happen that way. I just figured Todd must leave Babylon sometime so I gave him a job. Glad you liked the story.

~Lorie

 

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 2:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Well done!

*Hugs*

Deb



Author's Response:

 

Deb,

Thanks. Gloria had posted the request earlier today and I couldn't get it out of my head so I wrote it when I got home from work.

~Lorie

 

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