Date: Oct 17, 2018 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
Janet seems to find some strength to fight Chris. This jerk has some huge backup; will it be enough against the Liberty family?
Author's Response: We'll find out.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
That's a huge coincidence that Donald is Hope's father; let's hope he will get some sense into his daughter's mind! Let's hope that Joan will do the same with Craig!
Author's Response: Good luck to both of them.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Chris didn't improve with time! What a jerk!
Author's Response: Yep!
Date: Oct 17, 2018 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
Mel is realizing what she is losing as she is all alone away from her new life.
Hope is really a mean jealous girl; Bree might be spoiled, but she isn't a brat.
Author's Response: You're right about Bree and Hope. Mel is realizing what she has lost.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Mel really is not welcome and Bobby handled her like a pro; so well prepared and she couldn't do as she wanted. Jenny is as tough as her mother and it must be hard on Mel to be treated like this.
Author's Response: Nothing that Mel hasn't earned.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Justin handled Hobbs pretty well at the gallery! After, it was another story.
Now that Cassandra knows her father, maybe she will change her name. Hobbs' wife didn't make the link yet, but she is quite hard on him.
Each time Brian says "Are you sure", it reminds me of their second first time, after the bashing.
Author's Response: Good, that was what it was supposed to remind you of.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, that's not good! Chris, Craig, Brian and Justin in the same room!
I love how Lindsey, and secretly Brian/friends, handles Mel's call.
Author's Response: Not good at all. lol
Date: Oct 17, 2018 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Gus: I'm wondering if Mel resents him for being Brian's son; she cannot even think about him going to be away when she will come. She doesn't want to admit that she isn't fair.
What Mel doesn't see is how close Lindsey and Brian are together once again, now that she's not there to spite them and remind Brian how little she sees him. This is a great relationship.
I love the "Holy tonsil bath, JT"!
Author's Response: I imagine there must be a little resentment about Gus' father and the relationship Brian and Lindsay have.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how you write Brian in his couple and family.
A few more weeks and Lindsey will be able to move on.
Author's Response: Thanks, I can so see him in this family.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 1:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great chapter. You made my day when I saw a new Sunshine Files yesterday, but I didn't get to start reading until today. RL intrudes. You know I love these stories so very much. I will probably not review until the end since once I start reading, I have to keep at it.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy this file, and thanks for commenting when you can.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 11:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Will Craig ever grow up?
Author's Response: Not in our world.
Date: Oct 17, 2018 2:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I could hug Brian if he would allow that, just to give him some comfort. What wouldn't he do for his daughter!
So happy to see an update!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story. Thanks.