Date: May 30, 2021 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 10 Episode 10 (Queens of the Road)
Omg Mikey your a gutless idiot
Date: May 18, 2021 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 Episode Eight (Babylon Boomerang)
The switch-up of Jennifer calling Craig and the cops showing up... I believe you are writing a WASP wife more realistically.
And, what's up Deb's ass? Is Justin planning to work the shifts and still let Deb collect the paycheck?
LOVED THIS! So, the beating at Babylon did take place, but I liked how you turned it around that Justin was the one saying... That's not love... that's hate.
I wish Brian would tell Miey to stop with the Boy Wonder name calling. That's like mails on a chalkboard to me.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: May 18, 2021 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 Episode 7 (Smells like Codependence)
I really hope if Craig bashes Brian's jeep this time, they call the cops. Craig and Jennifer are worst than the first time around, so I hope they get slammed.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: May 14, 2021 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 Episode 6 (The Art of Desperation)
Melanie - interferring bitch! At least she found out her assumption was wrong.
Debbie, Debbie - delusional and a mean girl. No reason to be a bitch and worry Jennifer like that. And how low to steal a seventeen-year-olds tips.
I'm kind of noticing a few slight changes in this, unless I'm just forgetting some of it. Regardless, it's good enough for a second read.
HUGS,
Cathy
Date: May 11, 2021 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 5 Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
The therapist went better this time around. Justin acted more mature.
I'm curious if Lindsay will ask Justin to enter some drawings. If he does, I'm thinking there won't be any naked Brian pictures. Nothing for Lindsay and Mikey to drool over!
Tracy didn't seem excited about restocking with Michael, although she doesn't seem enamoured of him this time either.
Hugs,
Cathy
Date: May 11, 2021 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 4 Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
Melanie is a downright bitch in this story. I sure hope Justin pints some of that out to Brian.
I would love to know who the owner of the diner is. Somene should have his ear. Who does Debbie think she is? Debbie should have to walk a mile in Kiki's shoes during a day at the diner and see how she loves doing all the dirty hard work.
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2021 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
I enjoy your take on things. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2021 7:14 am Title: Chapter 4 Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
I love this story. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2021 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3 Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I think it would have been funny if Daphne 'very loudly' whispered to Tracy how that dark-haired guy was on Linerty Avenue hitting on the 'hottest men' and they all laughed and said, 'Go talk to your mama."
HUGS,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2021 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Episode 2 (Queer, There and Everywhere)
I liked the subtle differences with the whole Patrick Swayze arc. If I was Mikey, I'd be ashamed to admit I was with Brian Kinney and didn't come!
Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2021 11:07 am Title: Chapter 2 Episode 2 (Queer, There and Everywhere)
Loving this. Especially the changes.
Author's Response:
Music to my ears. TY.
Date: Apr 09, 2021 3:11 am Title: Chapter 1 Season 1 Episode 1(Premiere)
I love it... can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2021 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 Season 1 Episode 1(Premiere)
Thank you for finally cross-posting this. I so enjoyed the story the first time around, and I look forward to continuing to reread it. And if we're lucky, you will find a way to continue to bring this delightful story to fruition.
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response:
It took me so long to figure out how to post this. It's like I'm rereading what I wrote as I post.
Date: Apr 08, 2021 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 Season 1 Episode 1(Premiere)
That was awesome I like the changes lol
Author's Response:
There were so many things I couldn't resist changing. Wish I could have changed Mikey's attitude. Who knows maybe a whole new story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2021 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 Season 1 Episode 1(Premiere)
I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Words I love to read!!!