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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2016 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Don't be.  It's all good.

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Date: Jun 20, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Odd, I thought I read this in the last chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry I just realised my mistake. I cut the chapter in half but forgot to delete from first chapter. I'm so sorry.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

Woah!  So Ted wasn't the mole and he isn't dead.   This story is getting more complex with each chapter.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2016 6:12 am Title: Epilogue

This can't be tge end need to find ou g whats happening 

Lover the story



Author's Response:

After I finish all my WIP stories I will be doing another sequel.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 13

What a wonderful chapter.  Good things happening.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I wanted a chapter to lighten up all the sad and badness.

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 4:26 am Title: Chapter 12

OMG!  Justin has a breakdown.  And he's not nice!

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 4:18 am Title: Chapter 11

Thank goodness you've fixed their relationship.  But now there's more trouble.  Who's giving out private information?

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 4:13 am Title: Chapter 10

Justin should have known better than to keep something from Brian.  Now he's in trouble for trusting Brandon.  You won't let him get away with it will you?

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 9

There is a story behind the Brandon thing.  Will we learn what really happened in a future chapter? 

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 3:52 am Title: Chapter 8

Poor Brian.  At least Gus and Briana and Justin learn the truth.

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Date: Jun 08, 2016 3:35 am Title: Chapter 7

With Brian on his side, Justin has nothing to worry about.  Sibling rivalry, what would a story be without it?

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 13

Wow, you brought them through the crash, then Brandon and last so far Justin's psych issues.  Hope they get some relief soon and back to a somewhat normal family life.

Love this verse, Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope you'll like the rest of the story. Now all I gotta do is write it.

Reviewer: Rca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Finally the much awaited reunion.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

They are finally together.  But there is so much more to find out!  Can't wait.

Reviewer: Rca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 4:43 am Title: Chapter 5

why do i jave a feeling that when justin comes back brian is not there to welcome him. Hope its not the case. Update soon. I wish they finally meet next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm just going to update. LOL. Don't want to spoil.

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Date: Jun 06, 2016 2:33 am Title: Chapter 5

So close and yet so far.  Now to get the word out that Justin and Travis are on the alive list.



Author's Response:

Yep, that's coming up. It's still angsty though.

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Date: Jun 06, 2016 2:15 am Title: Chapter 4

Yay.  They're getting closer to being rescued.  Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Soon.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

What a intense and angst filled fic. Brilliant, hoping to see an udate soon.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I'm going to update soon. I'm working really hard on finishing the whole thing before I go to work.

Reviewer: Rca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wah you got to updat soon n i hope they finally see each other on the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I have all the way to 11 already wrote. I can update again today. I just didn't want to get confused like when I put Detective's Son all once up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2016 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

It's sad that they haven't been found yet.  But various people have found their strength.  Other's, not so much.  At least Brian isn't giving up on finding Justin.



Author's Response:

Brian would never give up on Justion. They're going to be found soon.

Reviewer: Rca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2016 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hope theyll find them soon so brian n justin can begin to heal the hurt that is between them.



Author's Response:

Its going to happen soon but mayben happily ever after might be a little further off.

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Date: Jun 04, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 2

At least Justin and Leda and the Petersons are alive.  If Mrs Peterson tries to keep Justin from taking Joshua, I hope she gets a bad case of herbes.  How long do you plan for them to wait to be rescued?



Author's Response:

It's not very long.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a spot to leave us.  Justin did make the mistake of not telling Brian what he was doing.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Sorry I know it was a bad part to leave it at. I have about 14 chapters already done. I didnt want to post them all at once because I had trouble last time I did that.

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