[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
So Joanie knows the truth and is willing to play along. Unfortunately the violin player may come to haunt them. I've never seen Mrs. Winterbourne so I'm just taking each chapter as it comes.
Author's Response:
The most similarities to the movie was in chapter one. I've gone in a different direction and the end will be very different.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
So weird to learn what Justin was doing for money; but I guess it could explain why he doesn't want to tell the truth about his memory loss.
I loved how Brian's mother let everybody hear that she knows that Lindsay is with Melanie, implying she is Brian's beard.
Maybe Patrick was Ardan's or Brandon's lover? Is that the reason he is present?
Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Patrick wasn't their just his parents. I don't want to spoil anything, especially if I change my mind. Lol. I liked the part about Lindsay and Mel too.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
So, Joanie knows Justin is not her son in law, but she doesn't say anything; good for Justin, who will be able to stay in the family.
Ethan is a mean person and wants only know if he can get some money from this nightmare. Craig is worse than Ethan.
Is Justin starting to remember?
Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought it would fit better if she was a secret matchmaker. Ethan is a bad guy in this story. More of him to come later. I don't know if I'll put more of Craig in. Maybe. Yes, the chapter I'm writing now he's getting his memory back. And the gang is in the chapter too.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Justin, completely lost. Brian starts to find some discrepancies.
Author's Response:
Yep. It's going to get good.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice beginning!
It reminds me a French film from 1983 (J'ai épousé une ombre) based on "I Married a Dead Man" from William Irish. I didn't read the book, but I loved the film.
I love how you prepared the drama to come (in addition to the one that just happened).
Author's Response:
Yes, that's were I got the idea. Mrs. Winterboure. No Man of her Own. I've always wanted to read I married a dead man. Thank you for liking and commenting.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
I feel really bad for Brian. I get the feeling Brian really loved his brother and was glad one of them got to be happy. I'm still wondering how Justin and Brian will meet? Please post more soon
Author's Response:
Just posted chapter 3. They have met but everyone thinks Justin is Brandon. I hope you still enjoy the story. Yes, Brian did.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to say I love the start of this story. Brian going to have his work cut out for him. I love Brian having a twin brother, an umm question did he and his twin get along? Will Brian be the one taking care of his brother's children? Will Brandon get his member back? How will Justin and Brian meet?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. They got along but it was strained. Brandon died along with Ardan and thier baby in the crash. Justin has been mistaken for Brandon. I'm sorry.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Amnesida, male pregnance. This story has it all. We've met Deb, Vic, Mikey, sort of, Joanie and Lindsay, sort of, along with Melanie. Where will you take these characters!
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you like the story. This one seems to be flowing nicely. I'm going to keep writing until I got to work. Hopefully, it won't stop the groove I've got going. Stupid work.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a twist. Brian with a twin brother who is married. Justin with Ethan who is not a nice person. Brandon married to the twin and Pregnant. Justin pregnant in New York. Then you throw in a train wreck. I've got to know more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying. I hope you like the rest.