Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2017 5:40 pm Title: The Return

Ray always had the potential to be an adult he just had to want it, perhaps now after his talk with his dad and learning the truth he will go back to London and become the son everyone has always wanted him to be.

So he can have a better relationship with his family and be ready for the kind of love Brian and Justin have, and when he next comes home he will be welcomed with open arms instead of disdain and anger.

Now Michael got exactly the welcome he deserved...Nothing

Am so loving Reginald/Hugo he is going to be a welcome addition to the Kick Michael's Flat Ass Brigade lol

Love that Kiki, Emmett and Hugo are treating Michael like the scrum he has always been.

Hope The GGs, Deb and Carl really enjoy California before coming back for some ass-kicking.

Gus is one special little boy cause he will always be surrounded by love just like Brian, and spending half a year on a boat with his family and 'Bestest Friend in The Universe' should be heavenly.

Can't wait for Michael to find out he is all alone and the hammer to come down on his head :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2017 3:55 pm Title: The Return

Oh thank goodness Ray's plan was intervened! that he realized that Michael was using him and playing him. Glad he listened. He seemed to take his Dad's words to heart, realizing that it was solely his own attitude, selfishness adn laziness that has put him in the position he is now. That it's hdnothing to do with Franc or anyone else. Now that he's going back to London, perhaps he'll take the opportunity to reach his potential.

then there's Michael...oh brother. What a pathetic turd brain. Hugo, Kiki and Emmett were great. Funny as hell and poor widdle Mikey didn't get the welcome home he was expecting. The man-boy is so utterly stupid that it never dawned on him that those 3 were doing what they could at his expense. His opinion of the GG's was terrible!!  What an awful awful little man. I'll never understand why on earth he seems to think he's the cat's meow. He will eventually learn some very hard lessons I hope. 

Carl!! Oh yay!! So happy for Deb! Fun in the sun for the GG's, Deb and Carl. A much deserved reprieve from all the goings on in the Pitts.

Gus is a dream. too good to be true. Oh he's just so happy! He's going to live on a boat part time. His daddies and mommies, Ruby, the cats and his best friend will all be with him.......He even get to have new grandparents! He must have a permanant grin on his face. what adventures he's going to have I'm sure.

Fantastic chapter! wonderful way to start my day.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2017 2:37 pm Title: The Return

absolutely love being able to redeem someone... it was painful, but Ray needed to see he could be better... he was worth it, if he would only put SOME effort into it.  Glad he sees the love between Justin and Brian that Michael can't, actually WON'T, see.

and really liking Reginald/Hugo so much... not taking Michael's bullshit since he doesn't have to pretend at all :) 

Author's Response:

Yeah there is only one villain in this story...Reginald/Hugo is going to be hanging around for a bit...

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2017 9:15 am Title: The Return

Wow Ray has a heart. I'm glad they were able to convince him not to pursue Justin.

Gus is just so damn adorable. So the ship awaits.  I'm glad he'll have Chandra with him.  He needs to have friends.

I was laughing so hard at Kiki, Emmett and "Hugo."  Michael is so oblivious that people are making fun of him.

Thanks for the update.

Hugs,
Jessica