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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 5:08 am Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

I love how thorough your research is and how inventive Justin is to tease Brian!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Love photography and how it worked in the story.  Great idea.  And, Justin having the upper hand was great.  Terrific chapter.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Nice to see an update! I liked tagging along with the boys at the park! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

How cruel of Thumper to gloat on what Brian missed out on.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Love the photos and THANK YOU for adding Malik into the story.  I've missed him.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Justin played him well, as did Brian's imagination the night before. Ha!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

What a lovely chapter! The bookstore sounded very comfy and entertaining. A creative day at the park, nice. Yes, let's go to my place & look at the shots I took.....hahaha not likely. They'll be looking at each other & their 'other bits'.

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