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Reviewer: LapsusCalami Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2018 11:06 pm Title: Zoo Life

Goodness. I just love how effortlessly you capture that five year old joy and wonder. And the way Gus just says everything in a very Kids Say the Darndest Things way. 

 

 

-LC



Author's Response:

 

LC,

TAG and I have six kids between us, it was a lot of fun remembering the things they did when they were little. 

~Tagsit & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 9:36 am Title: Zoo Life

So they finally meet. Love the zoo experience. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Things will get more interesting now.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 6:04 am Title: Zoo Life

Finally they met...cant miss the sparks...lol...totally amazing ...they are naturally close to each other at the first meet.

Thanks for the lovely update.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Those two always have sparks when they are near each other.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 12:32 pm Title: Zoo Life

A day at the zoo.  This story is all kinds of interesting and we get to meet Beauty ...er... Justin.  I'm sure Justin's back story will prove to be interesting as well.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

He definitely is a beauty.

Justin and Brian both have stories to tell.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 2:31 am Title: Zoo Life

Yes, I get that you're giving Gus a 5-year-old voice... And I think it's done very well, and feels natural. That's why I like it. In my mind, I could just imagine Justin overhearing this and using the same endearment to irritate Brian - in his very Sunshiney-way, of course! ;-)

I think Brian is trying his very best to ignore the similarities he sees in Gus!

 



Author's Response:

 

Toto too,

Thanks that's a great compliment. It's been a long time since my kids were that age.

Justin will have a couple of pet names for Brian.

It's creeping in slowly, others definitely notice.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Zoo Life

HOORAY! Justin is finally here! And it looks like he already has Brian's number.

BTW, B'ine is the cutest name ever. I hope Justin tells him so too! I'm also loving how the family is humoring Brian by not pressing the obvious, that this kid is his! Saving Chapter six for a little later, when I can relax and give it the attention it deserves.



Author's Response:

 

Toto too,

We're trying to make Gus sound like a five year old. 

If Brian pays attention he'll probably notice similarities.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 4:58 am Title: Zoo Life

I absolutely love this story!!! You have no idea how many times a day i check to see if there's an update lol. Keep up the amazing work :)



Author's Response:

 

Dark Oreo,

We will try to update every day.

So happy you love the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 2:32 am Title: Zoo Life

Love love love this zoo interaction! How adorable, although I can't wait to see what happens back at Brian's place. 



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

More fun ahead.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Zoo Life

This just keeps on getting better and better, I love stories with Justin and Molly - so I was super excited to see that is how Brian and Justin met. I can't wait to hear his story and why he is taking care of Molly so much.

Brian is learning what it is to fall in love, his heart is being warmed by this kid and he has no idea it's even happening = and that's what makes this so great. He feels truly happy and he doesn't really recognise that feeling. Gus is just as good for Brian as Brian is for Gus. I am dreading him having to call social services.

Cannot wait for more Brian and Justin, but also more Gus and Molly hehe.

Rocking this, ladies.



Author's Response:

 

Sally,

We will know Justin's reason soon. 

Brian is trying to enjoy all the new feelings, without putting a name to them.

More from all of them soon.

~Tag and Lorie~

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Zoo Life

Really enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

 

Chadmom,

Very happy that you're enjoying our work. Thanks.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Zoo Life

Wow. Really great chapter, so much detail. I like relaxed Brian and the midget is adorable.



Author's Response:

 

wellreadbunny,

Brian really needs some downtime.

Hopefully Gus and Justin can help him with that.

Gus is a great character.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: rachel_johnson1031 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Zoo Life

JUSTIN'S HERE!!!! YAY!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Rachel,

Yes, Justin is here, hot parts coming.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

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