Date: Dec 06, 2022 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great ending to a great story!!! I loved that Mel and Lindsay were on the good side of things this go round. Michael and Deb, though, wow. But I'm with Brian - at least Michael ended up with some jail time and didn't just get a slap on the wrist.
Date: Jan 11, 2021 4:33 am Title: Chapter 25
Another excellent story thank you
Date: Sep 23, 2019 5:21 am Title: Chapter 25
Beautiful story. I really loved how everyone saw the real Brian
Date: Mar 11, 2019 7:51 am Title: Chapter 25
Love this fic. Finished it in one sitting and is already missing these characters dearly.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed this story! Great ending even though I never wanted it to come ;) I loved that Brian was able to see everyone as they really were and so glad Micheal and David got jail time. This was so much fun to read- thanks so much for writing and sharing <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 25
Brilliant work..loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 8:44 am Title: Chapter 25
This story was too amazing to fully put into words. The characters were consistent and the story was perfectly balanced with plot and character development. I loved that Michael and David got a proper punishment for the fraud. It is a huge personal issue with me, and I hate people not getting punished for things like fraud and stealing, I was so mad at Brian when he didn’t want to try and get the money back from Michael originally, but I’m so pleased that you changed his mind, and the ending was excellent. This has been one of my most favourite stories, thank you so much for writing and sharing this :)
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
A really great story. I loved it.
Date: Sep 23, 2017 2:38 am Title: Chapter 25
Great update. All tied up. Shame Michael won't get more time but what time he does get is goingvto make him cry. Good! Maybe Deb will change and maybe she won't. It's all up to her
No more secrets just more love. Yay.
Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yet another absolutely wonderful tale has come to an end. This was really just terrific! As alsays, loved every single word of it. Naturally saved to my kindle.
The conclusion was perfect. All tied up with a bow. Hopefully Deb stays strong and really does try to maintain a proper relationship with everyone. I know they will all be waling on egg shells for some time to come yet.
Another successful business venture between them. Everyone seems happy and content now. (well, except the obvious, but really, that made US happy right?! lol) Sadly Michael didn't get the punishment he so richly deserved, but at least he got something. Nobody could save him this time thank goodness.
LOVED IT!! Thank you so much.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 25
Glad Jen and Tucker got to celebrate their big day with their families and loved ones.
The Family photo is going to be so gorgeous and start the water works all over again lol
Is Deb really ready to build a better relationship with Brian or will she revert back to her old ways once she see Michael being hauled out of the court?
Brian giving the money to the rehab center is much better than keeping it cause it will do more good out of Brian's account.
No fair getting me all teary-eyed with that last paragraph, it so Brian to be Ridiculously Romantic <swoons> ;)
Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 25
Slogan is perfect! Great ending! Really enjoyed this!
Date: Sep 22, 2017 8:59 am Title: Chapter 25
I love how Brian is with Justin. It's like he can actually be himself and not have to put on a front. They are so good together.
Love the new slogan!
Thanks for a great update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful story! Loved every sentence! And I have to say I'm sorry to see it end! :)
Deb
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 4:08 am Title: Chapter 25
Nooooo! Another great story coming to an end. You did a wonderful job. Shame Michael's getting such a light sentence. But you never know. As long as Brian's happy so am I.