Date: Jan 02, 2018 9:32 am Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Really emotional. Great writing.
Date: Dec 20, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Michael is such a dumb guy with the police!
I'm surprised by all the sobbing: Brian learned about what Michael intended to do and that's an awful information, but his reaction was weird. As for Jenny, who started all this by calling Michael: how could she change her mind this drastically? Even Mel's reaction is very strong: she knew that Jenny was with Michael; he wouldn't have hurt her, thinking she was his daughter.
Author's Response:
This is Michael we are talking about. As for the reactions, Jenny didn't tell Mel where she was that's what scared her, who she was with makes no odds, especially even though Michael wouldn't harm Jenny if Mel tried to find out from him where they were he wouldn't have told her and thought she wouldn't have gone to the police either. They were geared for him taking her on Monday as he told Norbert in the bank...he was the bank clerk remember? As for Brian's reaction, he found out about what Michael intended at the police station and being Brian was holding it together for everyone else, when he got home and could process the fact that his best friend wanted to have him raped it hit him hard...as it would anyone.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Michael hung himself so good by waiving his right to remain silent and to have an attorney present.
Stupid Is, As Stupid Does <shakes head>
Jenny heard everything Michael said?
Michael declaring himself the better parent because he is there for Jenny.
He was the Drop In Dad who only showed up to get Brian's attention or side with Jenny, he wasn't really involved her life because she was just another stepping stone to the prize he covered the most.
Brian being surrounded by everyone who loves him is good and keeps him from going to the jail to kill Michael.
Lindsay coldcocking Michael is Hilarious.
Jenny is finally seeing that her actions have consequences and for once she is ready to face it.
Perhaps Jenny is finally ready to change her wicked ways??
Superb Updates for both of your stories :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Now we get to the meat of this story which is sooooo good. Michael hasn't a leg to stand on once he regains conciseness. And Jenny turned around, she's finally realized what a douse she's been? Amazing.
Date: Dec 19, 2017 11:35 am Title: Here's the Rope...Go Hang Yourself
Oh what a fantastic chapter. Michael is truly the idiot of the century and your imagination did that. You are a wonderful writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy Holidays.