Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2018 3:15 pm Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

I'm impressed by Claire's behaviour: she seems worthy of Brian's trust.

I loved the "DHL, dead haddock Lindsay"!

Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2018 8:44 pm Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

Hello Writers-Flock,

 

next epic Review is due. I am seriously to slooooow to keep up with you...

 

 

37: oh yeah, Witches Sabbath in the Pitts! And here we go again… Ms Grassi and Mrs Kinney at their worst. But no more tantrums or rants because they will never change - I have finally resigned and abandoned all hope that anything in this direction will ever happen. Nonetheless: I am very sure that every action will be followed by an appropriate reaction - the queens, bears and fairies of Liberty will never forget... and beware! Annihilation step 2 is brewing

 

And I'm so immensely pleased with Justin! He will protect poor stunned Brian with everything he has, wicked, cutting tongue and all. Let your inner WASP sting, Sunshine!... If only it weren't such a shame that absolutely nothing of what he says will trickle into their brains

 

Lindsay... well, let's say she kills every little glimpse of seemingly decency with boat-loads of crap - and slowly but surely she will sink in it.

 

 

38: Ha! Brian is back and lays down the law. He is so finished with his so called mothers and I so wish he would go through with going to Joan's church...

In one point, however, I have to contradict Brian in all this: he isn't motherless. He has Del and will have Jen, to some extent Mami and her gaggle... plenty enough mother-figures in his live.

And there are some really fiercely loyal fag hags around him - Daph and Cyn are some scary Ladies. They will bite everyone's head of if it is necessary.

 

The interaction between Lindsay and Debbie shows to me how boneheaded Deb really is: she seems to think that Michael will be the good son and support her. But in this regards Lindsay is right: Michael will drop his mother like a hot potato if it seemingly benefits him. She will be on her own and should really try to bring her sheep in the dry… but I don't know if crossing both Michael and Lindsay is actually the best way to do so.

 

I love how Justin takes care of Brian, helps him to unwind and getting his thoughts of things.

 

 

39: Wow! There is actually a Kinney who gets it! Claire has overcome her disturbing legacy of sermons and punches. She ripped her kids out of this toxic environment and doesn't repeat the disgusting mistakes that her mother apparently still considers admissible. Claire seems to love her gay son ... and yes, her gay brother too!

 

So, Joan told father Tom what happened? And he saw through her woe-story and called her on her bullshit. Rightly so! But naturally Joan knows best what God wants and what his words mean, better as her fellow church-goers, and certainly better as a priest! And Joan has the gall to call Claire sanctimonious? Oh really??? What a black souled Witch-Bitch!

When she leaves her church, what will she do? St. Joan will be all alone: she condemned her Children, she doesn't have Friends, there seems to be no other family members... will she live as hermit? Read the Bible and live on air and booze alone?

Well, in my opinion Claire's 'duty as a daughter' doesn’t exist, as she was saying. Joan has forfeited all rights of getting help from both her children.

Is there a possibility for adult children to be emancipated from their parents? Maybe Claire and Brian should start a legal procedure that severs any connection to her? No inheritances for them but also no further responsibility for Joan. (Here in Germany adult children have to pay for nursing homes and care even if they are estranged to their parents if these can't afford it. It takes extensive legal actions to rectify this – if there is actually a chance at all.)

 

Debs recon-mission clearly doesn't go according to plan. Vics handling of his obnoxious Sister is very good and I knew it! He didn’t want to share a name with her. It's sweet that Vic and Rodney got married but it is sad that Rodney died… they should have had a longer married life together.

 

Am I right when I think Vic laid one carefully crafted trap before Debs feet by telling her the addresses? There are still these restraining orders of Mel and Ben out there. Deb and Michael will break them if they come to Mels door...

 

It's great that Jen and Craig are so committed to Brian. The Taylors have fully figured out Lindsay's games and are suitably equipped to stop them.

 

However, what I do not really understand yet, is what Debbie wants to achieve by sending her notebook to the Petersons. Sure, the information that Lindsay has $ 70.000 sabotaged her attempts of trying to squeeze more money out of Ron, but it does not benefit Deb… hmm...

 

 

and now I am waiting for the next developments

 

Warm greetings from Germany

Katharina

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2018 4:34 am Title: She's Now Good. They're Still Bad. And She Gets Evil

Looks like Brian has the backing of all the right people and Lindsay is in trouble.  Can't wait to see what you have planned for Ms. Grassi and Mr. Devore.