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Reviewer: Morwen80 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 8:59 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Hi again,

Ok, so Robbi and Vic uncovered the reason why Debbie blackmailed Joan. I am distressed at the thought but I have to admit that I see this as a tiny little bit of redeeming reason for what she did. It is still unspeakably wrong in its entirety but I can understand it to some extent. She needed the money to safe her Brother. But – and it is a BIG but! – why the heck was she using Brian? She could have easily blackmailed Joan with her embezzlement. The result would have been the same, but Brian would not have suffered as much as he did. I thought she loves him? Seems not to be the case…

Virago… well, I know that's a negative used word in English (as it is in German too to an extend) but knowing the Latin meaning I'm inclined to say it is really not the fitting name for Debbie. Heroine, Hero-Virgin, Goddess... even masculine looking ones - no, really doesn't fit at all. She's no virgin and definitely no heroine.

Nancy and Lindsay don’t seem to grasp that they are on the losing side. They are restlessly fishing for information's of Ron's financial exploits and don’t realize that he has them fishing in the dark and is clearly protected from their sticky fingers in his wallet.

Looking at Roberta cleared some things up in regards of her brother. She worked all her live regardless of her husband's net worth, which was insipid as Nancy announced. As for his sister, Society reputation and grandstanding are no concern for Ron therefore no manipulation possibility for his women. He strikes me as the type of man who would live happily as long as he is able to live comfortably off his own achievements and Brian and Mel allowed him to see his grandchildren; with no ties to the overbearing WASP-nest.

And I am absolutely sure he will do everything to prevent that Lindsay will bring up the new baby to her way… he is scheming like a pro. I can see that Ron is starting to reign in his demon-daughter and is about to put her on a very short leash. It is a stroke of genius on his part that he will Lindsay make the personal assistant of her sister – only question will be which one will kill the other first, because I don’t think Lindsay will be any good at being a PA.

Ok… Mikey provided us not really with new news. His reasoning and scheming and lying… same old, same old. And Debs Pride will be short lived. Trying to use Lindsay to weasel their way back to The Avenue is another plan to combust on them

 

So, I am waiting… impatiently!

Later!

Katharina

 

Oh… almost forgot: what plot-point did I give to you? I'm always happy to help. But I truly didn't catch it.



Author's Response:

Hi Katharina,

I hd no idea what Virago meant in Latin, you're right ill fitting for Miss Grassi.

Love reading your reviews and will be posting over the weekend we promise. As for the plot point, we were trying to work out how to bring Lindsay back and you prompted an idea. So once again thank you!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 8:14 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Boo Another Cliffhanger Just When It's Getting Good!! ;)

Nancy and Lindsay are walking into a trap of their own making and I doubt they will like the Snap!! lol

So Deb took the money to pay for Vic's pills and she along with Joan used Brian to absolve themselves of their wrong doings smh

Michael must've busted a gut coming up with that idea, should really relax and have another beer <eye roll>

How much of the money Deb got from Brian has she set aside?

Lindsay working for Lynette? rofl

What job will Nancy be doing once Ron kicks her No Ass to the curb?

Lynnette may be a Bitch, but she owns up to it and I think Ron can respect her for being direct, while Nancy and Lindsay hide their cruelty and that no one can respect.

They attack behind your back, a True Wasp would want to see your face when they destroy you, as they sip expensive champagne and nibble on expensive hor d'oeuvres.

Such amateur behaviors from Wannabe Wasps with No Class to go with their No Ass lmao

Thanks For The Updates They Were Awesome!!! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 5:45 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

You sneaky person you.  Giving us little tidbits of information but not all.  Need more.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 5:33 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

Read all the current chapters and they are great.  Love how you are moving the story along and the new characters make it interesting.  Just always happy when Michael & Lindsay are in trouble or in their case, more trouble.  Terrific job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2018 4:43 pm Title: ...Begins to Bite Some People's Asses

The painting is beautiful!

Ronald is planning something and I can't wait to see it. Lindsay and Nancy think they will be able to remain in Pittsburgh; they will be very disappointed very soon.

Great analysis of the money situation: how was Joan able to give money to Debbie while there wasn't any in the Kinney's household. I bet Joan would be mortified if the information was known.

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