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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2018 5:24 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Todd found a new pet! Can't wait to read about their adventures!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2018 6:41 am Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

First, the broken condom and then the insuing talk of monogamy... HOT! 

“The incompetency hearing is tomorrow.” Mel continues. “But he will not get anywhere. How he got someone to write this up will be one of life’s mysteries.” Just how did he get someone to write it up? Just who is this person? Will Michael conspire with this person to further try to get back at all of them?

 

Michael's reasoning for incompentency fell pretty flat.  “I don't want Mr Kinney to be disappointed when she tires of him. She has cast me out..."  Okay, that's NOT an incompentency reasoning. It's once again a jealousy comment.

 

Lindsay standing up for Debbie isn't really a shock to me. She was, after all, tired of Michael and saw the nastiness that he is before leaving the Pitts. But good for her for taking the stand against him

 

Glad to see the adoption went through that same day. Brian will be able to walk his Mother down the aisle to be married to his Father. Will he be also be able to be Carl's bestman?  And so very happy they will have the wedding at the palace. Michael won't be able to get in so he can't ruin the wedding. Although he and the new not quite trained puppies could provide comic relief.

 

What does Todd know? Is he a member of the court? Does he have proof of something, other than a voyeuristic Michael? But whatever he wants to talk to Michael about... like he said,  “It is time for you and I to have a very long and much overdue talk…”

 

Can't wait for the next chapter. Do I detect a smackdown coming? I ABSOLUTELY love Mikey smackdowns! Thank you for the update. Loving this story...

 

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2018 1:05 am Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

I can't wait to find out what the overdue talk is about.  How wonderful that the judge witnessed the adoption of Brian by Deb and Carl!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 11:55 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Whoa Todd Is About To Lay Down The Law on Michael not that he will listen.

Can't believe Lindsay helped Deb and her apology might actually have been sincere?

Perhaps Lindsay leaving Pittsburgh was just what she needed to grow up and face reality?

Deb and Carl are now Brian's parents and Brian ignoring Michael with everyone else following is something that will drive Michael crazy.

Moving the wedding and is a smart move because Michael is so desperate for attention that he might call in or start a fire to make everyone acknowledge him smh

Brian and Justin planning for their future is without condoms and more kids is Wonderful!

Superb Update :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 11:19 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Wonderful chapter.  Love that Brian has been adopted.  He finally has loving parents.  The ideas for this story are amazing.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 10:21 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

Good reading, waiting on the next chapter.

 

 

 

lah

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 7:40 pm Title: The Beginning Of The End and The Start of the Beginning

I can't wait to see what kind of talk Todd wants to have with Michael!

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