Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 27
Poor kid, what future with parents like that?
Date: Aug 10, 2018 1:42 am Title: Chapter 28
Great update. Oh how I cannot stand Michael !!!! Hope he gets what is coming to him. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2018 12:33 am Title: Chapter 28
Peter and John are safe...For Now
Will their father still want them?
Michael and Claire's to drain Brian dry just went Kerplunk!!!!
Brian is not going to divergent a dime for that baby and child services are going to be watching Claire like a hawk once they find out why she got pregnant.
Its time Justin tell Brian to stop giving Joan money and perhaps file a restraining order against Joan, time for Mommy Dearest to get off her rump and get a job.
Perhaps the Big Q is hiring?
Michael isn't giving up anytime soon and he is close to hurting Justin or anyone else in his way to Brian.
Fantastic Update Thank You So Much :)
Date: Jul 09, 2018 1:41 am Title: Chapter 27
Michael is at his devious and twisted thinking again. Glad that Justin is not falling for any of his machinations.
Date: Jul 08, 2018 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 26
Impressive Craig! I bet Justin will have some difficulties before trusting him.
Date: Jul 08, 2018 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 27
Another twist in the tale!
Very glad of the update as this is is my fave out of your current WIPs, although Alone comes a close second.
Thanks as always for your writing,
Deb.
Date: Jul 08, 2018 1:52 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh wow, was not expecting Claire and Michael to be having a baby. Just when I think I can't dislike Michael anymore another reason pops up. Great chapter.
Date: Jul 07, 2018 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 27
Well, Michael and Claire having a baby together was a twist I wasn’t expecting. TAG
Date: Jul 07, 2018 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 27
I thought you were almost done, then you throw this bombshell at us. Way to keep us guessing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 27
Wow, that was some twist. Michael talking Claire into having a child! Evidently Claire is dumber than she thinks Brian is.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 27
Craig reaction when he realizes Cara is in labor after eating is funny.
Did Michael and Claire sleep together?
Cause if they didn't then where did Michael get the Moe for insemination?
Michael is going to have to face this dilemma and grow up cause Brian is not coming to save him.
Not that I think he or Claire should be around a baby they are both too selfish to care about anyone but themselves, and that innocent baby did not ask to be born in this mess.
But Deb can't save Michael either.
Lindsay can stay in Miami and wrestle alligators until the end of time, she is another person who is selfish and self-absorbed to be around decent people.
Can't Wait to See How This Works Out :)
Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
All that happiness around and somehow Michael's funk tries to spoil it all. Too bad it didn't work.
Claire's having this baby for Michael then Michael can damn well take care of it.
Nobody wanting Craig to know Cara was in labor was hystetical.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 26
I do enjoy a story where Craig sees the errors of his ways and is willing to change.
Brian is going to know what it really means to be apart of a family and now that Craig has stopped putting conditions on his love he will be the kind of father Brian has been missing.
Deb and Michael are left to fend for themselves Brian doesn't have time to cater to them anymore.
There has to be someway to prove that Lindsay was trying to sell Gus to her sister while Mommy and Daddy were willing to pony up the fee?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Jun 30, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. So nice to have a Craig that isn't such a jerk.
Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 26
I really like this Craig. And that Cara is a woman after my own heart. I'm glad that Justin has his family, and that Brian is, at long last, getting a new family in the process. It's also wonderful that he's seeing the dynamic of Michael and Debbie clearly. Hopefully she'll also begin to see it instead of letting Michael suck the life out of her.
Lindsay & Co...LAWD, be a FIST and some Holy Water to knock the devil out of those people...SMH I really wonder if Nancy trapped Ron into marriage from the onset and she suggested to Lindsay that she do the same to Brian. After all, even then Brian was successful and had a certain status within business circles- two things that are so ever important to the Peterson women. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this plays out.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:30 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow. Big turn around for Craig.
Great update.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:07 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow! Everyone's getting along. Nice.
Date: Jun 14, 2018 5:13 am Title: Chapter 18
Love how Justin handled Michael The Delusional. Just tell Michael the truth and let him believe he's getting what he wants. LOL! Well, Michael is in for a big surprise!
Wow the Petersons are really something. Not what they think they are, but really something disgusting. Poor Nancy was so certain that Craig would be on their side. Shocker, he's not!
Nice to see that Craig is finally seeing what his hatred has done to their lives and that he's willing to work on his problems as well as help to protect Gus from Lindsay and her family.
Wonderful chapter!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:34 am Title: Chapter 17
Glad to see that Brian isn't going to let whatever Lindsay is up to interfere with their lives. He trusts Mel enough to know that she'll do whatever it takes to help protect Gus from Lindsay and will keep him informed.
Mel certainly knew how to handle the Petersons. I'm sure they're in for a few surprises.
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:14 am Title: Chapter 16
So glad that Justin and Jennifer made up and that she's able to give them a bit more insight into what Lindsay might want.
Gus is so adorable!!!!
Michael needs a nice padded cell and a straight jacket until he learns how to listen and accept what is being said to him by everyone who isn't Lindsay. She's only out for herself and he'll probably learn that the hard way.
I love Leda! She's the female Brian Kinney and much better suited to Melanie than Lindsay. I wish they had paired them together instead of having Lindsay and Melanie's commitment ceremony in the series.
The banter between everyone at the end of the chapter was so spot on, including Gus! LOL!
Loving this!!!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Jun 11, 2018 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh what a great chapter. Love the idea of Mikey being locked away !!!!!
Date: Jun 11, 2018 3:00 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Brian chose to push Michael into Rehab. Worried about what Lindsay and Craig have cooked up.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 25
Time for Michael to grow up and face reality and time for Deb to accept that Michael is no longer a child who needs to be coddled for the rest of his life.
It's also time for her to grow up too and live her own life without catering to Michael every few seconds.
Brian and Justin walking into the room showed Michael what he refuses to see that he will never get Brian to move beyond friendship.
And Brian is no longer at Michael's beck and call he is moving forward to his own Happiness.
Craig stepping up to help Brian and Justin shows that he is ready to move past his stupidity and fear to embrace his son...I mean sons and protect them as much as he can.
Now The Petersons are in from some rude awakening cause if they don't stop interfering they will know what it feels like to be social pariahs.
Lindsay screwed up her life and needs to deal with the consequences of being a selfish, self-absorbed over indulged Princess.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
Huge step: Deb is acknowledging that Michael has a problem and Brian can't fix it by himself; Brian is telling Justin what is happening with Michael and let Justin help him dealing with this tough situation. They are all growing up, even Deb.
Great chapter!
Date: Jun 10, 2018 11:17 am Title: Chapter 25
Seems that at the rate Michael was trying to get Brian back to him, and the length he would go to, he'll be away for a long while.
Brian could use his "maw" in his new life.