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Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 8:57 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Agh whenever Brian and Justin think this shitstorm is coming to an end all the fuckers regroup against them again. I am so glad Emmett managed to get the toy boys conversation taped so our boys can plan their next move. Yep let’s go see what possible horrors await our awesome twosome in California!

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 8:20 am Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Your best story yet. And that’s saying a lot!  Can’t believe how you have EVERYONE here. And not just a walk on. They all have solid story lines. 

im hooked. 🥰

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 8:51 am Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

So happy to see an update of this story. I just love it. Gardner, Troy and Eric are idiots  but Brian and Justin have loyal friends

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 7:58 am Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Debbie's introspective of herself and Michael was spot on. It's about time she realizes the error of her ways with Michaels's upbringing. And there is Nothing wrong with Michael. No mental health issues, nor anything else she could think of. Spoiled, manipulative, and rotten through and through. Did she not slap him upside the head enough? I don't think that's it. She should have taken a switch to his ass when he first started showing signs of entitlement, and maybe washed his mouth out with soap once in a while. Heteronormative? I guess I never associated that with Michael. And how is it that she will be alone now? I thought she had Vic, Rodney and Alex. Is it because she's in court for Michael?

Well we have three more idiots to add to the list. Hmm, I know I mentioned once that I couldn't figure out what their beef was, and I guess now we know. But why would Gardner hire them to keep tabs on Brian and Justin? Brian had been let go at work, so I don't understand that part. How could Gardner hire them, if he no longer owned the company? Anyway, what kind of idiotic people have a conversation like that in a public restaurant? Serves them right that they were overheard and recorded. It's bad enough that Emmett and Brandon heard it from two tables over, but where was Hunter that he also heard it? They may think they are so smart, but when Brian hears that recording, Eric and Troy are gonna be out of a job, and any chance of spying, will disappear completely. Also, once Brian learns about Saps party, they won't have anything to hold over Brian or Justin's heads regarding that.

The thought of Michael having something in the house in California, is almost scary. As crazy as it seems, I can see that being the case. He probably also has a locked room or section of the house, where Brian would not be able to leave or escape. But if Michael was hoping for an reenactment of the Stockholm Syndrome, he would be waiting a hell of a long time. And I shudder to think of the length Michael would have gone to, to get Brian to California in the first place.

I think Brandon has a point about having an interstate search warrant, prior to anyone going to the house. They don't want the chance of contaminating any evidence that may be there, and possibly be accused of planting it there. BTW, I really like Brandon and Emmett hanging in there and making a go of their relationship. It's a match I'm sure I have never read before.

So happy to see an update of this story. I just love it.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^= 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 12:21 am Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Fantastic chapter.  So glad Brian & Justin have loyal friends.  Great story.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:34 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

BEGGING FOR MORE!!!! LIKE ON MY KNEES BEGGING AND PRAYING FOR MORE!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:14 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Gardner, Troy and Eric are idiots to hold that conversation in a public place but thanks for their stupidity, they have as much chance of this plan working as Michael does of getting out of jail and Lindsay not opening her legs lol

There has to be something Michael is holding quite sacred in that house in Palm Springs that would've got and kept Brian with him, Michael is an idiot but he is an creative one who is expecting all his dreams to come true once he gets Brian to Palm Springs.

A search warrant, booties and gloves will be good no point tainting evidence that can be used against Michael should also video everything too.

Deb can look for any excuse she wants but Nothing and No One can help Michael now.

The best thing Brian and Justin can do to protect their rep is talk to each of their clients and Lau everything out on the table and let them decide with clear facts Not Spin.

Take away all their smoking guns and leave them with with water guns which can't fire anyway.

Makes me wonder if Lindsay has something she is thinks will get Brian to bend to her will?

Birds of are Feather with the same pea brain which has vacated and in witness protection lol

Love a new Update to This Story :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 4:07 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Gardner, Troy and Eric might have something on Justin, but even if Brian didn't have the details, he suspected what happened during Sap's party. Leo might not like what he will hear though.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:38 pm Title: LEARNING TO LIVE THE FICTION YOU WRITE... OR MORE ACCURATELY, THE ONE THAT'S WRITTEN FOR YOU

Looks like Gardner's plan is going to fail.  It would be interesting to know what that house in Palm Springs contains.  Always enjoy each chapter of this intrigueing story.

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