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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 10:54 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

I LOST MY REVIEW!!!!!  OUCH, OUCH OUCH!!!!

The internet went out for a minute just as I was going to hit enter!!!  Oh hell! It was a doozy too! I can't recreate it in the whole sense of it, but....

I told you I wanted reactions like a televion show, and you gave us that in spades.

Deb... really??? She took heed when she thought of slapping Rodney, why not with Jennifer? She was warned! Oh well, the punch was a long time coming. But I'd love to be a fly on the wall when she comes down off this higher that thou attitude and has to let it sink in what Brian said. And for the record, I never would have left you behind, but I couldn’t cater to Michael’s whims anymore.Yep, once again her little ingrate...

Claire... where was she when God handed out brains? Does she honestly think the D.A. needs her help in making charges stick and putting away Lindsay, Michael and Craig? They will laugh in her face!  Oh lordy woman, what made you put the picture in my mind of her and Lindsay together? That's an eew, eew, eew, moment!

Craig... If he thinks he deserves leniency... the man is off his rocker! He tried to KILL his son. HE was involved in the horrors of what they did to Christian. I can overlook that he likes dick... but the other stuff... not so much. And was it because he was jealous of his son and wanted Brian Kinney for himself? I think Brian would rather cut off his dick than stick it in Craig!!  I'm really curious though what Charles meant about Brian not knowing of his connection to Craig. And just how much "info" are we going to get off his extra computer? But wouldn't Lori already be aware of it? Surely she has gone through stuff already since Craig has left?

LINDSAY, Lindsay.... Barren by hysterectomy - that she caused to happen. Nope, don't feel bad for her. There are certain women in this world who should remain childless... she's right up there! If she thinks ANYONE is going to be concerned about her list of complaints... well... we know how that will turn out. She has been working towards being Mrs B Kinney for longer than the age she was when she started the process. When is she going to learn IT WILL NEVER HAPPEN!!!! I wonder if she will smell the air of defeat as she sits in solitary.

Ingested Bleach!!!  Couldn't happen to a nicer guy!!!  And his mantra... Oh well, once I’m out of here,was getting old, fast. Doesn't he realize he's not going anyplace for a very long time??? And if they can tack this 'trying to harm Bubble with the bleach' incident on him... it's just one more infraction. But, oh hell... he's waiting for the nurse to arrive, so I assume help is on it's way.

QUESTION FOR YOU... I remember reading something about Hobbs' new trial. Are we going to get front row seats for the court trials?  If so, we need to have a virtual popcorn party.

One chapter left to catch up. This has been a trip reading this much the last couple of days.

HUGS  ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 3:11 am Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Deb: "Look at you now," he answers back, and I hate how reasonable he sounds, too. Why the fuck isn't anyone yelling back at me when I need a fight?!

Oh, how I can identify with this. I come from a family of 'yellers'. My partner was the calm, reasonable, psychologist-voiced one in our partnership. She spoke in order to de-escalate and stop a fight before it happened. To this day, I'll never forget yelling at her to "get angry, dammit!" We're just friends now, but she still has to remind me to use my 'inside voice' when I'm on a roll. LOL



Author's Response:

LOL! Roni! Believe it or not, my family knows that as long as I'm yelling they are still in the 'safe' zone. It's when I get quiet that they know stuff is about to start flying around the house, beginning with them! Makes for truly interesting holidays around here...LOL

So HAPPY that you've decided to join me in this mix of Rewritten Literary Gumbo! I hope you continue to enjoy it as the story keeps unfolding.

 

HUGS, LOVE, and ETERNAL ADMIRATION,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 5:41 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Deb was in such a rush to by everyone to bend to he will and praise her that she totally ignored what Justin said about what Michael, Lindsay, Craig, Gary and Gardner tried to do to Justin.

She just saw that Jennifer and Joan are getting praised for changing their behaviors about their son and how they are accepted, she is ignoring as usual that they have earned and we still earning the their places in Brian and Justin's lves.

Her actions in front of everyone shows that Michael is the way he s because she still believes she is just entitled to bask in the light before Brian and Justin do.

A lifetime of Self-Entitlement doesn't take a few weeks to get rid of and despite Deb's words is she really ready to stop being the center of everything and everyone else's lives or bullying everyone to get her way?

Is Deb Really Ready to Let Brian Go?

Or Does She Deserve To Be In A Cell With Michael?

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Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 10:09 am Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Many valuable points applied on show too. Being sweet Deb did expected Brian & everyone to give her things. I always liked Vic more than her. She should know "Respect is urned not forcefully taken". Concluded, her life biggest failure is Micheal (In QaF).

 

I hope your health doing better. Fantastic chapter! Love it. ❤:)

There is No hope for Deb. Happy with Brian's decision. Claire deep in shit, still brewing something? Craig too late to realize what he lost.

Justified in Lindsay's case. Her wrong doing pays her back in Big way.

Meanwhile whiny moron is choking (Mikey own fault), I feel worried for Justin. If Brian hear about Mikey's murderous thought for Justin? What will they find that house?

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 8:35 am Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

I liked this chapter where we see each other's thoughts. Only Debbie and Michael still believe that they have done everything for the best and should not be rejected. Poor idiots like mother like son who really did not understand anything.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 9:08 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

All caught up on the chapters now.  Wow, this story is great and your writing is amazing.  Hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 5:59 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Very dense chapter! Thank you for the update!

This is so accurate about Debbie: "It’s about your need to be right, your need to be needed, your need to be worshipped."

Lindsey didn't expect to get a full "treatment" and now will have to live like a 50/60 years old woman; too bad!

Was Michael stupid enough to drink the mix he prepared for Bubble? It must have smelled bleach, right?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 5:10 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

Oh Hell No, That A -Hole doesn't get to Die cause he stupidly drank diluted bleach ok that is way too easy.

So Lindsay can't have kids anymore huh! Hallelujah!!!

That is a blessing for everyone so she can stop thinking her Snatch is made of Gold and no kids will have to deal with her genes, wish it could be ripped out of Gus but he will soon forget about her, so another charge of statutory rape?, maybe she will be in jail longer than Michael?

Being in confinement will drive her crazy because there will be no one to act around and being stuck with her own thoughts for hours will drive her to the insanity she is trying to claim and it will also give everyone else peace from her lying mouth.

Craig doesn't deserve leniency for the stuff he did to Justin to hide that he Likes Dick he is the worst kind of hater because he hates himself and turned that self hatred on his son who admitted and embraced the truth about himself freely, while Craig chose to be devious and hide in the shadows won't it hurt when that comes out?

Lindsay slept with Claire?!! Ewww!!! 

Well I guess she'll munch anywhere the price is right? 

Claire using John and Peter as her Get Out Of Jail Free Card will not work because there are too many people who are going to make sure she Never gets to those kids Ever Again, plus whatever golden information she has will help make sure she gets more jail time.

Deb has some nerve thinking she deserves credit for band-aids, gauze, alcohol, peroxide and meals  when she did nothing to help Brian that a nurse could've and did do at the hospital, she made Brian feel  wasn't worthy unless Michael benefited first and despite her conditions Brian still achieved  his dreams says Thatcher head games didn't work, the amount she spent patching up Brian's wounds is nothing compared to what he spent trying to keep her and Michael happy.

As soon as she pays back every cent Brian gave her he will cough up the  buck ninety-five she needs to call her friends who give a flying fuck.

Jennifer warned her and she should have heeded it because like Brian Jennifer doesn't say things she doesn't mean, Deb got a punch that was due for years and if she comes back she can get a matching set.

Perhaps it's time to let Deb go for all her words her actions spoke volumes and this leopard isn't ready to change its spots.

I kinda hope she tries to have Jennifer arrested so  she can have a cell next to Michael lol

W

OMG!!! SO WORTH THE WAIT!! 😆😆😆

Beyond Thanks For The Update!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 4:55 pm Title: WHINING, COOS, YELLING, SQUEAKS AND THE SCIENCE OF SCCCCRRRREEEEEEEECHology!!!

So much goodness, or badness, depending on how you take it.  Debbie, Mikey and Lindsay all got what they deserve.  

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