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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2019 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

HUH! I just figured out the *stars rating* bar.

Okay... something grabbed me and made me very sick to my stomach.  Michael was actually having Hunter in bed, too? the insults I’ve endured constantly while being fucked by that little rat-bastard and his fuckbuddy, Lance…  You didn't use the terminology *fu*ked over*... so that was the only way to read that. That literally brought tears to my eyes. Michael deserves Hell's Fury just for that!!! Debbie should be told in no uncertain terms what her "little darling" did to a "CHILD"who trusted in his care! Ooohhh... I'm shaking!

If that wasn't bad enough, reading the description of the boards did me in. I hope I am over-sentimental today, or else I am just too deeply into this story. And I am trusting you to have *stipulations* in their contracts. And here is where I place a threat on your life. If I knew where you worked, I would call a bomb threat in so you would be forced to go home and write the next chapter, so we can get the satisfaction of seeing Troy Perkins getting his ass canned. Yes, Eric is guilty, too... but as it was pointed out, the idea had to have come from Troy. I wonder how the other artists were even able to draw that crap. I do hope the other three artists that helped with those boards are also sitting in on that meeting, so they learn to go over heads the next time, and explain to Murph or Justin that they just can't work on crap like that.

The explanation coming to Brian in bed that night, I presume is about Michael and the vials. Was Troy in on that too? or Eric? If Eric was handling the money...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

Whoa! What a punch in the guts Brian and Justin must have felt seeing the boards! I hope Mel will find some ideas to avoid a severance package.

So glad for Hunter!

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 3:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

Wonderful chapter.  Love how Hunter's character is getting so much attention.  Fantastic writing.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 1:40 pm Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

Love the look at what's going on from Hunter's POV.  Now I can't wait to see how the meeting with the guys getting the can will go.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:30 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

Indeed, "Low Blow" . Will be Fun to see Tory & Eric getting thrown out on their whiny ass***, not before getting a very hard lesson from Justin Taylor-Kinney. Both idiots should never have mess with Sunshine. Yupp, this Angel got horns around his halo too. No mercy, as whatever coming they deserves it.

Wonderful update! Curious to read next chapter. ❤ :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:00 am Title: CHAPTER 74: LOW BLOWS

You Are Killing Me Here!!!

Might Have To Lock You In A Room With Deb! 😂

This chapter just goes to show that the low opinions of Lindsay and Michael, Deb really have no basis in the relationship Brian and Justin have, cause they never knew it and understood Brian beyond the surface they loved the artificial mask Brian wore to protect himself from hurt and never delved deeper cause they would see they have no place in Brian's life much less in his world. 

Hunter (Squirt, Love That New Nickname!) is seeing first hand why Brian and Justin are Dynamic together not just as a couple but businessmen who want to see everyone succeed right along with them.

With their love and everyone else's support Hunter will soar past the stars to a whole new galaxy which Michael could never achieve and Lindsay didn't know how.

Even Deb could never achieve this level of success because it would mean she wasn't in control anymore.

Brian and Justin want their friends and family to hop on board the train but not let it be the only thing to help you succeed, they want everyone to soar past their own limits so when the time comes and the person is willing they can succeed too.

Troy is an Inferior Mongerol and Eric is an Infantile Pup who is about to learn that Pissing off Justin Taylor-Kinney is the Wrong Thing To Do, especially when he has your fate in his hands.

Drawing those vile boards is one way to have your nuts squeezed and it won't be fun or pleasant because Justin is about to grind them into powder and there will be an audience to watch your humiliation, better hope there aren't cameras in there because when Justin stings you it might play on a loop for everyone not invited to see as you are escorted out the door in your Walk Of Shame.

Hunter is about to get a crash course in this and it will be quite a teaching experience about how to destroy someone Wasp Style it will prepare him for others who might try to intimidate him and for the trials.

Fantastic Update!😀

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