Date: Jun 10, 2018 1:31 am Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Okay, that sentence really bothers me, "I wonder if everything is finally ready for Michael to take the next step and if he needs my help again for him to do so."
So what has Deb done in the past "again" infers that she's helped Michael get something he wanted in the past from Brian. Can I just say this...BITCH!! I hope Jen bitch slaps her, might be wrong to turn to violence but some people just need it so much, the Novotny's are so those kinds of people.
bec
Date: Jun 10, 2018 1:10 am Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
WHO WAS AT THE DOOR!? Oh, sorry for shouting, but damn! Is it Jennifer, Brian, Lindsay? OMG I can't wait to find out.
The way Debbie is behaving here I'm hoping whomever is at the door is there to bitchslap some sense into her head. She needs to let Michael grow up and take responsibility for his actions. And she needs to leave Brian and Justin alone!
Really love how Jennifer handled herself with her surprise guests. She was ready to defend not only Justin but Brian as well. Love that! And so happy to see that they were there to help Brian and Justin and return the support the boys gave the community. Now all she has to do is take on Deb.
Another wonderful update and I can't wait for the next one!
*HUGS*
Deb
PS: Forgot to mention earlier that I love the name you gave the judge! Brought a tear to my eye.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 12:11 am Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
I love this, but then I love pretty much everything you write.
Star
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2018 11:57 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Could it be Lindsay at the door?
Deb is the reason why Michael thinks he is entitled to whatever his greedy little heart desires, she repeatedly told herself she was allowed to pass judgment on others for their choices while dismissing that her choices is the reason why she took the name of a dead service man and lied to Michael for years that his father was a hero.
She looks down on her nose at Hunter for hustling to survive while dismissing that Rita sold her son to feed her habit.
She looks down on her nose at Brian while dismissing the fact that without Brian Michael would have never lived to finish high school or gotten laid (Cause Mommy going to the clubs and picking out a partner for Michael and then critiquing every position would have been so helpful), Michael got the comic book store because of Brian but it is losing money because of Michael.
Has the brains to rob Brian and steal from Justin but can't finish college without someone holding his hand?? smh
Deb is about to see her world collapse around her, while Brian, Justin and everyone else is about to meet the Real Deb Novotny.
Harold and his friends giving Jennifer that check to give to Brian and Justin is so moving, and will be a lot of help to Brian and Justin to help start Kinnectic.
Date: Jun 09, 2018 10:55 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Well it is now even more obvious why Michael feels so entitled to everything. Debbie thinks even more warped thoughts than he does at times. You definitely have got your writing back and doing an amazing job at it. Cliffhanger ??? Well it will just get better !!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jun 09, 2018 10:38 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Can I just say that Judge Stone is going to be my hero. If I were Jennifer I'd be heading to the loft while that check was buring a hole in my purse.
Debbie's thoughts sound almost incestuous. Also sounds like she knows what he's up to. Guess she's going to go down with him.
Brian owes them nothing. NOTHING! Especially his life. Spending the rest of his life with Michael. Ugh!!
What gives Debbie the right, at least to her addled brain, to think she knows what and who is or isn't best for Justin? Inflated sense of self worth much?
Who was at the door? Lindsay? Carl? Jennifer? I need to know.
Date: Jun 09, 2018 10:20 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
That money will be a huge help starting Kinnetik; if Brian wins his battle against Gardner, it will increase the funding of their project.
Debbie is as delusional as her son.
Date: Jun 09, 2018 10:12 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Omg Debbie is as delusional as her son! What a fucking hypocrite and selfish woman! This 'Debbie part of the chapter just pissed me off to no end! Sweet Jesus! That has to be Jennifer at her door. And what a rude greeting, wtf? Is the next chapter going to be some consequences for shit for brains?
That was a very nice check that Brian & Justin will get though.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2018 9:03 pm Title: NO DEPOSIT, NO RETURN
Now we see where Micheal got his screw loose from. If she knew what she was talking about that would be one thing. It's going to be fun watching Jennifer try to corral Deb when Deb is so obviously in the wrong and will never admit it. I wonder who is at the door?