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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 3:44 pm Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

That's what I call a magnificent verbal bashing: Brian can be very good with words when the subject matters. I'm wondering who will first react to the "husband" part.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 12:02 pm Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Getting Daphne involved is sheer genius.  I love how she let Bob and Brad have it.  Having Michael evictied was great too.Then to top it off Ethan was given walking papers too.  What more could you do?

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 11:15 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Lol yay Daphne making a splash into the team and Brian disembowled Ian! Such fun 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 10:00 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Great chapter.  Your mojo is definitely back in high gear.  I really needed this update this morning since it is 6 am and I cannot sleep.  I got the new shingles shot Sat. morning and I have all the side effects.  Extreme tiredness, a red swollen arm and am just plain miserable.  It will last 2-3 days (if I can last that long) and the pharmacist said as miserable as it is, it outweighs getting shingles.  I sure hope so.  Hope you are feeling much better.  Sorry to dump that on you, but I guess I just needed to get it out of my system.  Hugs to you.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 8:16 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Daphne and Cynthia will do a great job together. It's time to settle accounts I love it. Michael who still does not understand anything. I hope jennifer also buy the dinner and Ethan really? Is it an idea of Michael? They should be together 2 losers !. Thank you for this wonserful story and the update.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 3:43 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Daphne and Cynthia together? G-d those offices are going to run so smoothly.

Michael just can't shake Jennifer can he? Good for her. Why should he be living on Ben's dime anyway? Time to go home to mommy. I wonder who it is that he thinks owes him? I do have someone in mind, but will keep it to myself.

What the hell did the chin rat think was going to happen? Justin would see him and leave Brian just like that? Ha! Michael must have been busy for how else would the chin rat know where to find them? Please ho through witj your promise Brian to contact his agent. Let the agent know exactly the type of person they're working for.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 3:32 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Loving this!! Justin and Daphne working together will be just as awesome as Brian and Cynthia. Enjoyed emmensely how they handled the Dumb and Dumber twins. Is it awful to hope that they try to file a lawsuit against them for wrongful termination? It would be so much fun to watch them fail!

Damn! Wonder what peabrain Mikey is up to. Well, hopefully he ends up in jail soon, 'cause you know I'm really concerned that he doesn't have a roof over his head now that he's been evicted.

And poor delusional Ethan. He just will never learn. Maybe he should hook up with Mikey?

Another great chapter!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 3:07 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

These last few chapters have been fantastic, smackdowns all around! Brilliant!!! Can’t wait for more... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

So wonderful to know you are enjoying this, Darling. I'm really digging this variation of the characters- those we love, and those we love to hate. And because it's my take on two fantasically crafted stories, it's stretching my writing chops again. It's just what needed at this juncture.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 2:41 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

Does Jennifer plan on buying the diner and the building of Red Cape Comics too?

It could use a revamp and an updated menu and better service in certain areas and the comic book store could use better management?

My goodness I see where Justin learned how to think strategically, when they go after you it is straight to the jugular.

Michael is running to Ben, Vic or Brian to save him?

All the tenants who want him gone is not surprising his voice can penetrate walls and peal paint, their suggestions for his new residence was Hilarious.

He must be high if he thinks any of them would give him a nickel much less a bed to contaminate, better go to Mommy cause she is the one who wanted to take care of him, so living together again should be a joy for both of them.

Daphne working for Justin is perfect she knows Justin well and is just what he needs.

Cynthia and Daphne are going to be lethal and invigorating at Kinnectik.

Ethan just learned when Brian says something you listen then run cause he is not playing when it comes to destroying you.

Michael, Debra and anyone else want to fight? 

Well Bring It and Prepare For The Consequences

 



Author's Response:

Jenn is the very personification of 'danger' right now. She's one pissed off mother with a hefty bank account and a Broker's license. She's also a WASP, who realizes that her real 'power' lies in acquiring as much as she can. The fact that she's stategically buying up Liberty Avenue and tormenting her son's enemies by doing so...well that's just the added bonus in Jenn's book...LOL 

Daphne working for Kinnetik is going to be a lot of FUN! There's a very definitive reason why Cynthia thinks of her as the 'Anti-Michael' which will become even more clear as time goes on and she settles into her new role as Justin's assistant. I think I laughed my head off and then screwed it back on with her tirade to Bob and Brad. Between her and Cynthia, the employees had better stay on the straight and narrow.

I don't know if we've seen the last of Ethan yet, but his role in Brian and Justin's breakup still needs to be addressed. 

You're going to be surprised at just 'who' Michael is running to...but he definitely won't get the reception he's hoping for! 

Stay tuned!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 2:41 am Title: THE ANTI-MICHAEL, CAPTAIN P.I.T.A., and MIKEY Jr.

So excited to see another update to this story.  Can't believe that 

Ethan showed up and tried to get Justin to go with him.  He really is an idiot.  Loved how Brian stood up for Justin; even though we know that Justin could do this by himself.  Loved that Brian hired Daphne.  She is perfect for kinnetik and Justin. The "bobsy twins are so full of themselves and I'm grateful that you let them go as well.  Michael is an idiot, thinking that just because he wants something means he will get it.  I can't wait to see if he actually coughs up the money or ends up in jail.  Would serve him right to be in jail since he would get a wakeup call regarding his actions.  I doubt Michael will ever see what he did as wrong.



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy! So glad that you are continuing to enjoy this story. It's just about at the point where it will start 'writing' itself and I'm so happy at that.

Ethan is has swiss cheese for brains- just full empty of holes in his head...SMH Sadly, he is also like Michael's long lost twin in that he has such an inflated ego that he believes he is a real catch. Those two are the very definition of 'people only a mother could love'...SMH I'm not sure that we've seen the last of him yet since he's a lot like a hard-to-kill STD where it shows up just about everywhere it's unwanted, and a recurring nightmare to the patient. However, I am so HAPPY that Justin finally let Brian do what it is he needed to do on his behalf instead of trying to assert his independence. We all know that he could have handled himself beautifully, but Brian needed this! Justin stepping aside meant  lot to Brian on so many levels. They really are growing! I feel like a proud mom, LOL

Daphne working for Kinnetik is going to be FUN! With the four of them (five if we include Ted) at the helm of the company, there are plenty of hijinx and wise cracks ahead. But she will fit in perfectly because not only is she a hard worker, but will do just about anything to help Brian and Justin to succeed; a true Anti-Michael in every way that matters. 

Michael is a special case of stupid. It will be interesting to see if his mother's gift for self-preservation is indeed genetic, or if the inherited stubborn streak is going to bite him in the ass. One thing is for certain, he's definitely NOT going to go away quietly.

Stay Tuned, Darling!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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