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Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2018 7:43 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

I love your idea of Michael and Lindsay who paid Ethan !! my god it's so bad. and Ethan who thinks himself irresistible. they really did not understand anything about brian and Justin's love. Jennifer is perfect and Molly also the Taylor form a nice Wasp team.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 8:10 pm Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Hi Nichelle, I did realize I wrote the 200th, but didn't remember I also wrote the 100th; let's try to hit the 300th...

When the story is great, it seems quite easy to keep your readers captivated; I guess the frequent updates are helping keep the tension high. Let's not forget that you are in the top 5 of the favorite authors. That means something.

Happy writing!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 5:03 pm Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

If I had 2 sec I would feel sorry for Michael and Ethan, but you know what, I don't have such time for them. I feel bad for Jennifer though.

I can't wait to see how Lindsey will react when they will come to see her about the money she gave to Ethan.



Author's Response:

First, thank you soooooo MUCH for being my 200th review! I never imagined when I started writing this that it would garner the response it has.

Michael and Ethan are a special kind of desperate...SMH But whereas Ethan has a modicum of self-preservation where he would at least think twice about pushing Brian, Michael has none. It will be interesting to see how far he's willing to sink from this point on.

As for Lindsay, all will come out, and when she least expects it! 

Stay tuned, Darling!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:43 pm Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Of course the imbecile & the cunt paid Ian...I'm not surprised. I absolutely love Justin's calm sense of courage & justice. I can't believe shit for brains is still fighting this...he's gonna end up in a cell too! 



Author's Response:

Hey Shine! As you know I always love writing a strong Justin. Michael is definitely in for several rude awakenings dealing with him.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 10:50 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Great chapter.  The noose around Michael's neck is getting tighter and Brian is now aware of just how bad her & Linds really are.  And, you have done so well with turning Justin into a powerful man so that Brian has an equal.  Terrific job.  Thanks again for this wonderful story.  Hope that you are feeling better.I am still having side effects from my shot, but I will live.  HUGS & 4th of July firewords to you.



Author's Response:

Hey Marilynne! Happy 4th to you and yours! I'm doing as well as can be expected and trying to extend my writing time a bit more each day. 

Michael is one for whom the idea of self-preservation really doesn't register. One has to admire his tenacity, even if we are all looking forward to his downfall. 

I have always loved to write a 'strong' Justin. I've never seen him as the weakest link in his and Brian's relationship, although many writers tend to write him that way. Sure, he might have some issues, but don't we all? So I try to write him in a way as close to 'human' as possible.  

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 6:25 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Lol that’s taken care of Ian and almost all of widdle Micky good job

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 5:36 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Perfect! Justin certainly knows Michael's motives and how he manipulated Brian in the past. So glad that Brian let Justin handle Michael the way that Justin let Brian handle Ethan.

And Lindsay paying Ethan to pursue Justin! She should get life in prison for that alone! And have Mikey as a cellmate!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 2:26 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Well, Lindsay and Michael might have to pool their future resources if they manage to stay out of jail.  If they get jobs at the Big Q or McDonald's perhaps they could share an apartment.  That gives me chills.

 

I never liked Ethan and I like him even less now.  Lindsay, Michael, and Deb are really something.  Personally, I cannot abide people who cannot accept personal responsibility.  You've made them punch all my buttons.  i find myself wanting to commit acts of violence on them.  hahahahaha  I better go take a pill . hahahahahah thanks for the entertainment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 1:07 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Two down and one to go.  Ethan and Mikey got tossed, now to give Deb a go.  Loving this.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:19 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

I don't know how you find the time to write so quickly.  It takes me forever to write these days, but hopefully that will change soon.  Anyway- love that Brian figured out that Ethan was the puppet of Linds and Michael. Such interesting twists and turns.  Enjoyed having Molly text Justin to tell him about Mr. Whiney.  I don't like Michael or Lindsay and I do believe they are as manipulative as you write them.  Loving the update and the story. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:16 am Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Not surprised by Lindsay and Michael involving the chin rat. Wouldn't be them if they didn't. He was so good at playing the starving artist and letting Justin using his pay and tips for the hovel they were in, where did the money go?

Justin's smackdowns surpass his husband's. 

What an idiot to try and use either Brian's or Justin's money to fix his problems. Mommy is not going to be happy he failed. Deb should be by the office the next day. Hope security is called on her too. Jenn thinks Justin learned it all from Brian, but she's been teaching him since he was little. She just didn't know it. Next chapter should be just as fun as this one. Yay!

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 11:43 pm Title: STUPID IS AS STUPID DOES BUT DOES THAT APPLY TO A SORRY ASS, TOO?

Yes I can see Lindsay pulling the strings and leaving Michael to get caught with his hand in the cookie jar and crumbs beside him, Thank Goodness she is such an amateur and Michael as usual needs to be lead by the nose.

Michael running to Jennifer proved to be a waste of everyone's time cause while he screeched, Justin was the model of decorum Jennifer taught him to be, by staying calm, cool and collective while tearing Michael down he showed that he is the adult and Michael is a child throwing a tantrum when he doesn't get his way again.

Brian and Justin should have money set aside for Jennifer cause Debra is coming to defend her baby and this time Jennifer may lose her Wasp Cool and beat her down lol

Won't take long for word to spread that Michael and Brian are over, Brian and Justin Taylor-Kinney are married, suing Michael for money he stole from Justin and Brian.

A quiet voice is louder than a shout :)

Jennifer is right that Michael and Debra being together under the same roof will force one or both to see the truth or continue the denial while blaming everyone else.

It will also force Debra to face her greatest fear which is not being Alone, but being Alone with Michael <shudders>

 

 

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