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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 1:41 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

So many wonderful things happen in this chapter-  Really enjoyed the scene with Justin and the new client.  Michael is an ass- I can't ( really I can) believe that he thought he could get away with calling in that Brian and Justin were using drugs.  He doesn't think things through.  If he thought that the police finding drugs in the Loft would enamour Brian to him and make him leave Justin- he was so wrong.   But I love the consequences-  Michael in jail and Justin throwing the book at him- literally.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 1:46 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Thank you for resolving this, I was scared you would lead us on.  Michael is a deranged man- filled with delsuions and hate.  So happy that Brian and Justin are charging him with all those crimes-  hopefully, he will stay in jail, far away from everyone

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 9:43 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Justin is the best! Like a boss Sunshine! Woohoo! Get friggin Mikey outta there! Beyond a douchbag! Justin totally saved Brian from going to jail for murder 1 that's for sure! Omg this just keeps getting better & better! 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 5:06 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Michael should always remember this saying " When seeking revenge always remember to dig two graves.

Brian, Justin and Mel are going to shred his soul, burn the ashes and the earth so nothing can ever grow there again.

They were willing to be lenient but now the gloves are off and they are armed for battle, Michael crossed the wrong people this time.

And it looks like Craig will be joining Michael cause by talking and trying to bend Justin he just dug his own grave too.

Justin should re-write Rage give it to Josiah (Love That Name :)) and Brett and see if they can take it to a whole new level.

If Deb is really taking some self-realization then when Michael comes around she can't run to save him?

Michael seriously didn't care that they could lose Gus to child services he just want his Hero, Saviour, God back in his place catering to him 24/7.

Michael is about to learn what it truly means to fucked hard without lube and totally forgotten.

Josiah and Jared just got a crash course in what Brian and Justin have to deal with and they didn't run away, perhaps friends outside The Family is a good thing after all :) 

Love how Brian and Justin are motivating everyone to reach for and beyond their potential to succeed.

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 3:29 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Justin is amazing with his sperm donor! The list of villains is getting long.

It's great that Kinnetik's teams are working willingly and are so motivated.

The end is the beginning of Michael's downfall: it was the last drop for Justin, and for Brian as well.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 3:27 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Oh, wow, great chapter and having the words come out of the idiot's mouth really let Brian know what we all knew all along.  Terrific writing.  Keep feeling well, it shows in the writing that you are improving.  As I said, thank God for listening to our prayers.

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:48 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Well that made my head spin.  So much going on.  Yummy.....

 

Michael is such an idiot.  He deserved being carted off by the police. Sadly, I was hoping for head FUCKING first down the stairs.  What?  A woman can dream.

 

 another exciting chapter.  You make me happy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:09 pm Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Who is left to defend him.  You gave us a lot in this chapter and let us see Mikey at his worse and caught.  Nice job.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 11:13 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Lord help Michael!  I think Brian was ready to kill him.  I'm sure Mel and Gus were scared at what was happening.

I hope Jared doesn't change his mind.

Thanks for the awesome update.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 9:33 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

OMG I loved this chapter.

I knew Craig was going to show but didn't even dream his was in cahoots with the weasle. Justin is going to let him drown himself in debt if need be instead of helping him. Did Craig truly believe things would go his way? Ha!

Seeing the shit with Michael go down, I don't think Jared and Josiah are going anywhere. Justin was right. He and Brian just made friends outside of the gang.

Time to take off the kid gloves people, Michael is going down.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 8:24 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Wow just WOW Fabulous chapter!! 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 6:31 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Awesome! Amazing! Loved it! Looking forward to more!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 5:34 am Title: PRISON ORANGE IS NOT YOUR COLOR, BUT

Finally  the fucker should have been in jail. 

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