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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 4:25 pm Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Great: Michael and Lance out of commission for some time. I juts hope they won't find alliances in jail.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 7:59 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Wow it is getting so interesting all the different angles hmm I wonder if Brian and Justin will agree to a plea bargain for Lance, I hope not!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 12:38 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

So Rita will be joining in the Cell Ring too huh?

Makes me wonder who else is going down with Michael?

Will Lindsay also be charged with embezzlement?

So which of the conspirators be jumping ship first?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 6:37 pm Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Ahhh the tangeled web they weave. Lance is fucked too...hope thy put shit for brains away for good. I'm sure we're going to find out plenty more about what Michael has been doing to Brian for years.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 4:46 pm Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Lance is innocent up to a point he made a choice that he knew would have dire consequences if Brian ever found out and still he followed Michael along in this stupid plan.

Michael might want to get nice and comfy cause with the charges piling up against him he ain't get out anytime soon.

Michael despises Justin but he hates Brian because he knows deep down inside in places where reality lies that Brian was never going to choose him.

Brian put Michael in the Friend Zone and he was never moving him out of it and Michael knew after fourteen years that friendship was all Brian was ever going to Offer him and he Hates It.

Plus he also resents that he will never be in the same league as Brian, Brian surpassed him at fourteen and kept rising above him every second, every minute, everyday of every year and he knew unless he kept Brian beholden to him that once Brian left he wouldn't look back.

Then along came Justin who at seventeen was more Brian's equal than Michael was at fourteen, he is beautiful, extremely smart, creative, generous, kind, thoughtful, considerate, talented,  as dominate as Brian sexually, is admired and envied for being himself and not Brian's shadow or boytoy and more of a grown up than Michael will ever be.

Basically Michael did a pros and cons list between him and Justin only to realize that he lost the second Brian and Justin locked eyes on each other and Justin told him he was still trying to finish that hand job. 

Michael was use to being in control and in one night he met Someone he couldn't Intimidate, Bully or Scare and That Really Pissed Him Off Even More.

The Next Few Chapter Are Going To Be Very Interesting ;)

 

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 1:42 pm Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

I'm just dying to know.  Do you have a file with all the outlines for this story?  More likely a file cabinet.  How do you keep up?  I've found myself looking at previous chapters because I thought I remembered something and couldn't quit put my finger on it.  

You make my head spin.   In a good way.

 

These are so fun to read.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:55 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

It's beginning to look more like Lance is a victem as well.  I love waking up and finding another chapter on this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:26 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Oh wow, you have really come up with some new and wonderful ideas to make Michael (my favorite idiot) even worse than we thought.  Great writing.  Hope that getting these wonderful thoughts out of your head is making you feel better.  A healthy mind, makes for a healthy body !!!!!!!  FANTASTIC !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:13 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

Firstly, Michael, get use to being in a cell. You're permanent one is waiting for you, and you aren't going to like it.

Secondly, Lance. Blinded by lust Michael certainly knew how to play him. Now his uncle who is Mel boss must decide whether or not to take his case? Come on Donaldson let him stew in his own mess. What has Mel ever done to hurt you?

Michael Michael Michael the list keeps getting longer and longer. The years in jail keep adding up. Do everyone a favor and find some way to, oh I don't know...off yourself.

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 8:25 am Title: BUILDING BLOCKS

OMG is getting worse and worse. I do not know where you are soting all his ideas but they are brilliant!!

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