Date: Jul 18, 2018 1:05 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
OMG OMG OMG I get keeping your friends close and your enemies closer!
Date: Jul 18, 2018 2:37 am Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
Old homo week- (lol) do all the old nemesis of the guys get together and have a meeting of dicks and decide to invade Kinnetik?- Should be interesting to see how this all pans out.
Author's Response:
LOL Sandy! It does seem that way doesn't it?! It will definitely be interesting to see what foolishness awaits...SMH Aaaah, never a dull moment in the world of JT2U, LOL
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2018 11:10 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
Whoa Christopher Hobbs has a twin brother?
A Gay Twin Brother??
Eric the crush and Troy the Dumbass is this day get any worse?
Damn, Just Jinxed It! :(
Making Kinnetik into a conglomerate is Brilliant, with all those businesses under their built they will be quite a force to be reckoned with.
But first Brian has to assist Justin with calming down and then deal with the police problems surfacing (Though I think Troy will be the biggest one?).
Craig is going to wish he kept his hands out of Justin's money and his pants zip cause Jennifer, the police and the DA are going to twist his nuts until they pop <shudders>
Author's Response:
Hey Blue!!!
Talk about surprises! Even i wanted to run and hide while writing that, so I can just imagine the looks on everyone's faces while reading! We will definitely find out all of their motives (although Troy's is pretty clear right now) and what they are up to in a bit. I mean seriously, WTH is Christian Hobbs doing at Kinnetik?! Even I'm looking forward to the answer to that question!
I really love the idea of Brian and Justin's business growing in this fic. It's not so much the 'Rags to Riches' aspect as much as I think it should have happened this way in the series. Both are strong men personally, so to me it makes perfect sense that in all areas of their lives they should be able to drive and support each other towards successes untold. It is such an honor and privilege to write them this way. None of their enemies- both personal and collective- are ready for the force Brian and Justin are growing to be!
Stay Tuned Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 11:05 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
You have to keep notes.....Again, I did not see that coming.
Love these.
Author's Response:
LOL! Hey Sandy!
I'm so happy to be able to surprise you all. Believe it or not, I don't really keep notes unless I'm writing with Lorie, or until recently, other people. One would call me a free floater, and I guess that's true to a degree since I have the most primitive outline you can imagine. It actually looks something like this:
(1) Main characters
(2) Setting: Timeline and place of first scene ONLY
(3) What to accomplish in the first chapter/ introduce main conflict
(4) Grow the character throughout using subplots (to be determined later)
(5) Where do I want them to end up- Pittsburgh or Move on?
Ironically, it's the same format I use for every story, and nothing is actually filled in (hence the free flow vibe to my writing). Everything else that happens with in the story occurs organically, including the situations which serve to make every character's action and reaction as 'human' as possible. It's strange, and totally against the 'rules' of writing but I'm a rebel by nature so this works for me.
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 10:02 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
WOAH!!!!! You just threw in one hell of a cliffhanger! Brian's Justin-lookalike hustler, Justin's virgin conquest, and then Christian Hobbs! Holy-moly! Can't wait for more!!!!
*HUGS*
Deb
Author's Response:
First of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DARLING, DEB! May each day that you open your eyes bring more, Blessings, Love, Hope, Joy, Peace and Happiness!
Now to your review....LAWD Honey child, you're telling me?! I was NOT expecting these three. I nearly fell off my chair while writing them so I can only imagine how shocked you all felt at this twist. It's going to be interesting to see what they will do from here on out.
Stay Tuned, Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 9:23 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
All these twisted paths are fantastic.
I think Kinnetik Inc, Holdings whatever is going to be one of the fastest growing businesses around. Getting the right people to work for them may be a bit harder.
Eric and his crush on Justin. Troy Perkins Brian's ex huslter and Justin wannabe. And Chris Hobbs twin brother. Justin couldn't look at him day after day. These guys would drive them both insane.
Is Dale working along with Ted or just helping with the start up? It looks like time for talking with Jarod and Josiah and get their in put.
Author's Response:
Hey Sherry! I'm so happy that you are enjoying this insanity. I'm still in shock along with you, everyone else and our favorite duo. It's going to be interesting to see what comes from the arrivals of Troy, Eric, and Christian. I mean seriously, WTH is Christian Hobbs doing there?! Time to investigate that boy's motives just a little sooner rather than later, right?
Kinnetik is definitely on the move. Fortunately, they have the right people at the top working for them. Dale is definitely going to work along with Ted as a consultant. And yes, we will be seeing more of Jared and Josiah very soon. YAYYYY!!!! I really do like them! LOL! Brian and Justin are finally building friendships outside of the Avenue, where there are NO degrees of separation.
Stay Tuned , Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 8:55 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
It started well, but the end is quite chaotic; the past is coming to bite them in the ass, not in a life affirming way.
Author's Response:
Hey Claire! I guess this chapter was definitely the quintessential calm before the storm situation Even I was NOT expecting these three characters to show up!
Stay Tuned, Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 8:35 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
Holy shit! Hobbs was a freaking twin?! Sweet Jesus....
Author's Response:
Hey Shine! Honey, I nearly fell off my own seat writing THAT!
Stay tuned, Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS!
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 17, 2018 8:31 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
Oh, wow, these new storylines are fantastic. Just goes to show the past comes back to haunt everyone at some time, but knowing Brian & Justin and how you can write so wonderfully, it is just going to make this story so much better. Hope you are feeling better day by day.
Author's Response:
Marilynn Darling! So wonderful to hear from you!
First, thank you so much for the compliment! It's strange how this is all coming together. So many surprises thus far in this fic, and then the arrival of these three! Totally not expected, but it will be interesting to see what they do and what their motives are from here on out.
Today, I'm in some pain, but you know...I'm here and writing so I'll take the WIN!
HAPPY READING AND HUGS!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2018 7:24 pm Title: SURFACING ENEMIES
First off, I was so excited to see a new chapter. I love this story. Love how Daphne is onto Justin. Ted is coming up in the world in this story. Then you give us the Justin look-a-like, Eric of the frat party, then you top it off with Hobbs having a gay twin brother. Possible incest?
Author's Response:
Hey Phyllis! First, thank you for your continued support to my work, and that of the other authors producing on here. It means so much to all of us!
As for your review, LOL! I LOVE Justin and Daphne's friendship! They are awesome to write this way for so many reasons. Nothing like having a person by your side who knows just about every dirty little secret you have, but still loves you unconditionally even knowing the worse about you. Daphne is like one of the 'roots' to Justin's 'tree'. Her support and friendship nurtures him in such a way that he will always be able to stand tall in the face of adversity. Brian and Jennifer are his other roots'. As for Brian, Justin and Cynthia are that for him, but I think he's finding more that he never knew he had. Jennifer, Ted and Mel come to mind. I remain amazed and privledged to be able to bring their characters out this way. It's been a very humbling, and inspiring experience!
Then there are the surprises coming up from this chapter....PHEW! Even I didn't expect THEM! Eric and Troy....SMH that's all I can think about them at the moment, but the real surprise was Christian Hobbs! Now what is HE doing there?! We will soon find out!
Stay Tuned Darling!
HAPPY READING and HUGS
~Nichelle