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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 2:48 am Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

OMG! This chapter is amazing! Brian's takedown of Michael is perfection at it's best! Love how he knows exactly how Michael will react and what to say to get Michael to break.

Amazing!!!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2018 2:07 am Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Oh, my dear:

 

What a lovely chapter.  I finally caught up.  Haven't been able to read for a bit, but today I read the last 4 chapters.   Love all of them.  Brian getting Michael to confess all the pieces of the scheme was brilliant. So evil Michael is now written his own ticket for the long-term sentence.  Can't wait to read about Justin's meeting.  Love how you incorporate the WASP into the story. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 8:05 pm Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Great chapter! I love the "buzz and sting" definition; I think it's very accurate and appropriate. Michael lost it and his confession is going to help Justin's quest. What a putrid nest of awful people.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 6:25 pm Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Michael may not be a Wasp but he got stung Hard!!!

His rant will play beautifully for the jury and help to seal his fate.

Ron, Ron, Ron you left Lindsay shout to dry while forgetting that your hands are just as dirty and it is going to get dirtier cause the police will be coming with handcuffs for you soon. (Do wonder if Nancy is involved?)

Brian got Michael to sing and out another person involved in this conspiracy.

What did Chris do with the fifteen grand and why would Ron get himself involved with embezzling and attempted murder conspiracy?

What was he promised to help his daughter and what could Justin get from Craig that brings this conspiracy completely down?

Is there someone else missing?

Lance was trying to cash in on a life insurance policy, did Lindsay have one on Brian or Craig have one on Justin??

So many idiots hoisted by the own petard all because of Jealousy, Greed and Malice smh

Can't Wait For The Trial...I means Trials to Begin

Fabulous Update :) 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 2:52 pm Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Justin explaining WASPs to Brian. Wasp nests. Buzzing and stinging. Pity, not, the one who wished and expected to be queen got stung. Royally.

Good g-d how far back does shit go? Can't imagine how Jack missed out on all the monies floating around him and him not seeing a cent of it.

Brian knew exactly how Michael would react. And what a good show little Michael put on. Hope he likes the look of his cell, he'll be in it for a while. Hope he can give it a homey feel. Ha!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 2:40 pm Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Thanks for the history lesson Nichelle! And thanks bec2224 for your input as well! This chapter was fabulous! Fucking delusional Michael...yeah what an asshole! Nicely done Warden, Bright & Brian! Oh yeah, the nurse too! lol

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 12:24 pm Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Just wanted to add something else here. I just reread chapters 17-19, 'You Have Our Attention'. Why would Ron risk telling Lindsay they've washed their hands of her, when he's so involved in this? Isn't he aware of how damaging she could be to him? I wonder if Nancy is aware of everything Ron is involved in? Or, is she just as much a part of it, as he is? Questions...questions... oh well. All will be answered, I'm sure.

Also it was classic rereading about Lindsay wearing her red suit to the meeting. Walking out in handcuffs thinking, 'AT LEAST I LOOK FABULOUS!' I kind of forgot that when Mel showed up at the prison wearing her red suit, looking FABULOUS! Funny... 

Thanks again, Cathy

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 11:00 am Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

OMG! I woke up to this! What a great way to start my day. Thank you for the very quick update.

Wow-oh-Wow!  I can't believe Michael's testimony! Lindsay is going to kill him, IF she had any opportunity to get at him. But when Ron Peterson gets arrested... Just Wow! And DELUSIONAL! Michael Is Brian's Husband?  I wanted to barf, just as I'm sure Brian did hearing that!

Speaking of Ron Peterson... I was confused when Michael was ranting about Ron.  he will take care of that blond...wouldn't have the information about Stockwell, Vance, Brian, and Justin...wouldn't be able to stick it to Craig... all without Michael. Are these all things that will come out throughout the story? The ones that really confuse me are Stockwell, Vance and Craig. Wasn't Ron a backer of Stockwell? Wasn't Craig his friend? Anyway... as Brain said, "Thanks for your complete confession." 

BTW... we never heard about what he wrote in his confession to his prison companion. Will that come out with the trial? And Oh Goody! The trial has been moved up. I'm so excited to get in that courtroom. Before that, I'm sure we will be privy to Justin's talk with Craig, and Christian's with Hobbs, SR.

I can only imagine what Justin's reaction will be when Brian tells him about Lindsay and Craig's involvement in the bashing. Too bad Justin isn't armed with that knowledge prior to his visit with Craig. Unless someone interrupts his visit and tells him. Well, we also found out where another 15K dollars are.

I'm loving this story so very much. You are such an AWESOME writer. Thanks again for writing it, and sharing it with us.

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 9:04 am Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

Wow, wow, wow, what a great chapter.  Fantastic writing.  Could just picture each sentence in my head as I was reading it.  So happy that you must be feeling well to be able to put all of these words out here for us.  Take care.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 8:06 am Title: MICK WITH A SIDE OF WASP

I learn something new in every chapter.  Love the lesson on WASPs.  Shame Mikey never learned his lesson.

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