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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2018 2:29 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

Love, love, love this chapter-  Christian telling his dad off while watching both of them going to jail.  Jenn's brother coming in-  you do know how to twist and turn a plot.  I may just have to read the whole thing from start to finish again.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 6:18 pm Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

Whoa Charles Alwin is in Town!

Wonder if he would like to come on a trip?

Lindsay needs to Seriously realize that n the outside she had some power but in prison she is a Nobody, Nothing a number on an orange jumpsuit.

All her plans are taters in a notebook no one wants to read but have to stop her next evil scheme.

Samuel and Christopher just learned that what little power they had is now gone, and soon they will be a forgotten thing in an orange jumpsuit.

Christian always had all the power and with Happiness he wielded it to set himself free.

All these trials are going to be so interesting.

But first a house cleaning party sounds like fun Michael and Lindsay will love the pictures.

I don't think earplugs will be strong enough.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 3:12 pm Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

Great chapter.  First Mikey and Linds now the Hobbs duo.   Fantastic.  Love this story so much.  Always felt that Mel & Brian could and should be friends.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 10:24 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

Amazing!

From Daphne to Jennifer, they were wonderful! How Hobbs Sr is going down at Mach 2.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 6:27 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

 

Oh for funny! I could just picture the surprised and furious faces of Christopher and Samuel when they realized the games were up. Gotta wonder what all the police found in Samuel's offices. I wanted to grab and squeeze Samuel's balls, very hard, when he told Daphne, you there, little Chanders. I want a cup of black coffee now. Then proceeded to tell her,  I do not appreciate your insolence, young lady!  What an arrogant jackass he is. And Christian is THE OWNER of Hobbs Construction, while Samuel and Chris get to go play, "Don't drop the soap!"  It was also nice to see the arrival of Charles Alwin.

So sad to see Lindsay got her little journal taken away :)  I had to gloat when Lindsay realized that Amanda got her money back... Via Mel. Lindsay thought she was so smart  attacking Martin Fisher, but just found out it was all in vain. Now she has a loss of $30K. The thing I don't understand, why was that money not seized/put a hold on it, what with the charges Lindsay is facing?

Very good, satisfying chapter. Lots of good things happening.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 5:11 am Title: MISTAKES, I'VE MADE ONE HUGE, ENTITLEMENT TANTRUMS, and DID THAT REALLY JUST HAPPEN?

OMG! Nichelle, you write some of the best twists and turns! Samuel, Sr. and Christopher are finally going to pay for all their misdeeds, but mostly for what they did to Justin, Brian and Christian.

Looking forward to more soon!

*HUGS*

Deb

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