[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:07 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE
So so good. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2020 1:31 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Wow, just wow. Absolutely amazing writing. Oh how I hate that Michael. Always have, always will. The pics were a great addition. Hope all is well with you. Just love this story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 7:52 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Brian and Justin really are strong together because they are sticking around that house so they can see and know every vile detail so that when it is revealed in court they won't be blindsided.
Plus by seeing everything together it takes away the surprised and pleasure Michael could derive from the videos and photos being shown in court in front of the jury and spectators.
Michael really is living in the past which is ultimately where his growth ends and does because with all his supposed cleverness he is sitting in jail waiting for his day in court with his other co-conspirators.
Michael was really willing to go to any lengths to force Brian to choose him and any lengths to guarantee that he is the only one who will ever have Brian.
This new detail about to be revealed could push Brian and Justin over the edge and further seal Michael's fate.
I wonder if Lindsay kind of the same plan for Brian with Michael and Deb taking the fall?
So need to find the cheap version of Brian and see what he knows and if he would be willing to make an appearance in court?
That would freak Michael out especially if he walks up to Lindsay and kisses her wonder if she or Deb will be able to tell the difference?
After this I think The Family could use a vacation to some place tropical or Brain Bleach?
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 4:41 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Whoa! I don't know if I want to throw up or cry or both! What a violation of privacy and trust! What a sick pervert Michael is!
Thank you for the update!
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 8:45 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Michael est vraiment fou! J'attends avec impatience le procès avec toutes les preuves qu'ils rassemblent. Thank you for the quick update
Date: Mar 09, 2020 7:54 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Argh omg the evilness of Novotny is going to really hurt Brian but also Justin
Date: Mar 09, 2020 5:48 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Your killing me with the waiting!!! 😫😫😫😫
Date: Mar 09, 2020 4:59 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
thanks for update. Michael is a sick fuck
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 3:25 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
Sick, sick, sicko...
I hope Brian can get copies of those pictures, take them into an investigation room, slap them on the table in front of Michael and ask him: JUST WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU WERE DOING? YOU SICK SON-OF-A-BITCH!!!
Could Lance have helped Michael design this? Or given him some suggestions what Lance would have liked to put Brian in?
I had to reread the last sentence a few times... hopefully, I think I now understand the way it is supposed to read...
What Michael intended for Brian, and ONLY Brian, to see.
The first few times I read it... I thought that Daris meant only Brian could see what the outcome was going to be... and I was ready to scream holy hell thinking he needs Justin with him...
I think it was the combination of the horror of the chapter, but finally understood that Michael only intended for Brian to be the only one who would ever see whatever it is that they will now hear from Melanie.
Sorry... (deep breath) ... what a House of Horrors!
Happy Birthday to you (tomorrow) ... Thank you for giving us a present...
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Aw!! THANK YOU SO MUCH for the birthday wishes, Cathy!! Hugs
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2020 2:50 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES PART 1O: INDISPUTABLE TRUTH
We know that Michael is mentally challenged, but what is it he had planned and how will Melanie take finding out?
Date: Mar 07, 2020 1:53 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Thanks for update. I was reading the entire story again
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2020 9:18 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
So we arrive in the house of horror! More pleeeease.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2020 2:01 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
What a chapter. They've finally gotten to the house that Novotney bought and while most of it shrieks Brian, the bedroom holds secrets that we need to learn. Hurry and get better so we can find out what you have planned.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2020 4:34 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
I have waited all day trying to form a coherent response for this chapter. (or was I trying to still my churning gut?)
I remember asking for photoshopped pics of the house in one of my reviews...
(In Urkel's voice) --> Did I do that??? What was I THINKING???
Uhmmm... I'm trying to figure out who I despise the most in this story... There have been so many evil people - so many evil things done... Lindsay, as a woman and mother... has been despicable. Craig as a parent... has done the unthinkable... and Debbie... ooh... don't get me started. I asked you once, why try and save her? Why try and redeem her? Why help her break away? I know you said because Steve was - kind of - in her place at one time. And she returned the house to the rightful owner. But, she still - to me - and some other readers - she should still be held more responsible, and punishment should befall her. Lies of omission... (can I say theft of omission?) ... she aided and abetted Michael in his plans... (Maybe she wasn't aware of the final outcome of kidnapping Brian... that's her own idiocy coming into play...)... which means, she was an accessory to the crime. Her high-handedness, and her "I'm right, you're wrong, you owe me, etc..." throughout the story, just screams - "I'm not wrong! No reason to change!"
But, right now, I honestly believe, that Michael holds 'most evil'... can we scoop his insides out with a dull fork? I wish we could explain all of this away by saying he had a split-personality, because what kind of evil does everything he has done in this story.
Wouldn't it be fun if Brian's dummy look-a-like showed up at the house when all the police are there? I wonder how much, if any, information they can truly gain from the neighbors. I can't imagine how they are going to feel knowing all of this has been going on under their noses. Which brings me to wonder... are the police going to find the people Michael hired to make the house look like this? Were their suspicions not aroused? Why did they do this work, and not contact the police? They had to know nefarious acts were in the making. Especially when they find the secret button to get inside the walls.
The projector... or info on the projector threw me for a minute... as my first thought was projector... hmm, let's film me with Brian... while he's unconscious, I'll make movies of us. But, things they found in Pittsburgh? I'm not sure what all that could be, or what exactly that means. Because everything came out in the open during that interview. So, I'm excited to see just what you reveal here.
Will we be privy to knowing just how Michael planned to have Lindsay and Debbie taking all the blame... or left 'holding the bag'? Will Debbie be in the courtroom when all is revealed?
The only bright side of this chapter, is that hopefully, Brian and Justin are able to have privacy while viewing the inside of this house. I can't even imagine what that would do to someone's psyche. I'm glad Alex is on stand-by.
HUGS `Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2020 2:47 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Great update, love the pictures. Wonderful writing and making me hate Mikey even more. Hope you are feeling better. Please take care of yourself.
Date: Mar 04, 2020 10:52 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Love this as always you leave me begging for more.
Date: Mar 04, 2020 8:37 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Omg omg omg your writing skills are brilliant I was reading so fast I missed some of it lol. So I have re read it and now I am late for work 🤣🤣
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2020 7:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Michael took the rope used to strangle Jason Kemp?
Sick A-Hole!
Everything they said about Michael, Deb and Lindsay is true they all abused Brian to get what they wanted then they discarded each other once they got it until they needed each other again, it was the pattern they had until Justin came in and disrupted the rhythm cause it left them scrambling to find new ways to get the balance back.
Deb should be charged caused she helped contribute to why Michael feels so entitled to everything and the lengths he was willing to go to get it just like the lengths she was willing to go to give Michael whatever he wanted.
That house is making my skin crawl and we haven't even found the really bad stuff yet, so glad everyone is doing this before Brian and Justin get there cause they are going to need help to process this.
Michael hiring someone to pretend to be Brian for the neighbors is spot on I wonder is the doppelganger is scheduled to make an appearance again?
I too wonder what Michael left for Deb and Lindsay to ensure they would never be able to get into his way again, and throw suspicion off of him while he does what he planned to do to Brian to keep him submissive?
Even if Deb was there with them she still wouldn't believe that Michael was capable of this and she would run to get mantra of blaming Brian.
This shouldn't be revealed until it is done in court that way Michael can't dispute this and neither can Deb without looking really stupid.
I just wish there was some way for Deb to go to jail too?
Scared to find out what else is in that house but gotta know
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:43 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: PART 9: HOW TO MERIT YOUR OWN CATEGORY IN THE DSM 101
Argh!!! Cliffhanger!!! Diving into the deranged mind of Michael is always painful, but seeing what he has built...
Thank you for the update!
Date: Feb 19, 2020 2:37 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)
This is the Brian he was becoming on the show...I hate what they turned him into.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2020 7:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 71: RESTORING ORDER
As I am re-reading this story over again I was thinking maybe the best way to continue to help Joan restore her equilibrium would be for her to move out of the repressive house with all of its bad memories and into a place near her grandchildren but Jennifer and Molly aswell?
It is time for getting properly leave the past behind and to start fresh inns home of her own choosing, with things she likes in it including pictures of her grandsons and her new family and friends?
Time for Joan to open the Windows in her new home to let a fresh breeze enter bringing with it happiness and new days without regrets to start?
Date: Jan 10, 2020 4:20 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION
thanks for update
Date: Jan 08, 2020 11:55 am Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION
I can't wait for California. 😘
Date: Jan 03, 2020 8:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION
Wow the first half of the chapter was all about the boys being reminded that they are stronger together and to get their shit together. Man they really listened and have reached a level of unity that they will need to manage the evilness they are going to see.
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2020 3:53 pm Title: CHAPTER 83: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION
Oh wow, what a powerful chapter. I love this story so much. As you know I have loved all your stories, but this on and Before I Let Go have ingrained themselves in me. Fantastic writing as always. Can't wait to see where you take our favorite guys from here, but wherever it is, they are going to be together.