Date: Feb 10, 2020 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
Justin is such an ass, do not feel sorry for him
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2018 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
When Ethan wouldn't let Justin top that was the time for Justin to run not walk away from this relationship. Living with someone who throws tempertantrums is not fun. I know.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
I really want to kill Ethan. He is a manipulative arrogant prick. It is hard to read Justin putting up with all that bullshit because I never saw him that way. I know he put up with shit from Brian, but that was different from what Ethan is doing.
I know you have your reasons and that is part of storytelling. I am looking forward to more :)
Lisa
Date: Aug 21, 2018 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
I can't get the idea of Justin's phone tampered out of my head. What a leech! It's awful to have someone chasing and hovering like this.
As for the sex scene, I understand it's for the story and it's one more way to get Justin where he wants: down and submissive. I know that's the way it happens, but I want to smack Justin so he opens his eyes and fight. Where is Daphne when you need her?
Date: Aug 21, 2018 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
Hey Tag. I've never commented before, but recently realized that it's important for the author. So, that being said, I want you to know I've enjoyed all your stories. I have to admit that I thought about not reading this, what with the concept of the story. I love a good anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay fic, although most of them usually end up with them not getting their just do, which I think is unfair to us readers As far as an anti-Ethan fic, they totally creep me out. Maybe, because in the original show, I was a little creeped out by him. That saying, every chapter I have read, I do get a sinking, horrible feeling in the pit of my stomach. You're an excellent writer, so I trust you to not let Ethan get away with too much, and he will get everything that's coming to him, tenfold. It's hard not to know Brian's feelings during this time, but I also know, it's not plausible. I really didn't like Jennifer's reaction to meeting Ethan. I thought she was smarter than that, by not seeing Justin's discomfort, and being suckered in by him, as her WASP upbringing should allow her to see through some of his bullshit. As for the anniversary party, I see we're not going to see the whole Brian slugging Michael arc. Keep writing please, I need to see a light coming soon.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 12:57 am Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
Well, that opening paragraph or two certainly could be applied to a current political figure, now couldn't it??? Ugh!
I think one of the reasons why Justin might have fallen so easily for Ethan's manipulations is the fact that he really DIDN'T have any other options - nowhere else to go at 1am. He's still fighting though, letting his real personality out in his remarks about the GPS, but he is mentally exhausted and his guard is down.
I really didn't mind canon Ethan so much, I was happy that Justin was giving himself a chance to experience other relationships. He was still SO young at the time. But this Ethan really makes me want to smack him!
I know you said you struggled with this chapter, but I thought it was great! Already looking forward to the next one!
Date: Aug 21, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 9 - Adjustments
OMG, I cannot stand Ethan. He is obnoxious and disgusting. Please free Justin from this horrible person. Great story and great writing, but will be better when Ethan gets his.