Date: Dec 10, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Got teary-eyed at the Gus/Justin reunion...
Doesn't look like hairy Alex is going away easily!
Author's Response:
I’m thinking Gus will play a big role in convincing Justin to give Brian a second chance in this story....*wink, wink* TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Awesome way for Justin to defend the girls. Now we just have to see how Brian and Justin get back together. Great updates
Date: Dec 09, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Omg the Gus/Justin reunion! I'm not crying, you're crying
Too bad we can't hop into the story & beat the shit out of the Yeti ourselves huh? What a dick! He can't have them arrested! It's 5 people's words against his lone one. He's so stupid, please tell us they can get rid of him now??
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
💃💃💃::Dancing the Never-Yeti dance in my seat here!::💃💃💃
And what the HELL was Justin thinking adding that ðŸ´ðŸ’© to the title of his house!
Now that part of the mystery is solved, I wanna know where Lindsay fits into this little bag of tricks. She just seemed to know a little too much about Justin. Was she, perhaps, whispering in someone's ear, being the oh so caring art teacher and mother-of-Brian's-ONLY-child that she is?
Author's Response:
Can I just say how THRILLED I am that I’ve tempted you back into reading? Lol! I’m going to have to burst your bubble on Lindsey, though. She didn’t play a big part in Justin leaving. When we get there, however, you might recognize the impetus for how I’m writing him... Happy reading! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
I also loved the moment when Gus and Justin were holding each other: powerful and emotional. Their bond is restored, finally.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Sciatica be damned, I'm bouncing up and down in my seat and I haven't even read the chapter yet!
Author's Response:
Careful! Don’t Hirt yourself! Lol! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
Yeah! So happy to see a new chapter and what chapter! Epic, hilarious, chaotic, disturbing... It seems that Alex has the upper hand and I hope you have something really nasty to get him down. At least Justin has opened his eyes and knows some parts of Alex' personality.
I loved how Brian took his place near Justin when he arrived. Only Justin is not that happy about the girls' stunt and I hope he will understand their goal.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three
OMG, This was fantastic. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. Just PERFECT. I know that Brian can and will win back his Sunshine. Justin can give the damned house to The Yeti and be with Brian and their children. As for Brian's magic, just don't think it is possible to resist him. Your writing is beyond belief. Thank you for sharing the wonderful ideas that you come up with.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
I think this is the perfect Brian for the situation. He's obviously changed since becoming a father. His little "Sunshine" daydream in the airport shows us he's still there! Something tells me he has got evil plans for Alex!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2018 9:47 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Yes I'm ready for the Justin part. Brian is so romantic and always in love. Is lysette manipulating them for more money or will there be something else? Thank you for the update, I'm so exciting for the next.
Date: Dec 09, 2018 8:59 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Ok, I just came here for a little break from finals revision. I've spent each break today binging on this story! Your Brian is perfect! Makes sense that's he's evolved over the years. And he's missed Justin. Now your Justin is also perfect. Perfectly annoying! I am enjoying this story so much! Thank you for takin the time to write and update! Looking forward toYeti meeting The Stud!!
Author's Response:
I’m afraid the meeting of The Yeti and The Stud is probably not going to go well, but it should at least provide a laugh or two! Thanks for spending your study breaks reading my story. Good luck on your finals! TAG
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:38 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Great explanation: the mother was after money that's for sure, but why did she lie by omission about the twins? To get more money? I doubt that; there must be more to it. She should have wanted to keep Brian and Justin separated, but again why? Was somebody else pushing her acting like this?
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:19 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Excellent! From Emmett going all Dom demanding the truth, to Brian tricking his daughter during the call and Brian laughing during Qianna's explanation: delightful! Add a few "Honeycutt" poking, the LSD joke from Brian to Emmett, you made my day!
Date: Dec 09, 2018 5:04 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Dam I have to wait for another chapter and these last two were awesome. Me thinks the boys maybe not quite divorced and hopefully the yeti will be toast as they say 🤣🤣
Date: Dec 09, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Yay! You go you three! The three Musketeers to the rescue! This is going to be awesome!
Now was Lizette being manipulative for her own gain or manipulated by someone? Hmmmm
Date: Dec 09, 2018 12:32 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
It was written perfectly. Brian still shined thru in his normal way, but with a bit of happiness and excitement thrown. Just wonderful as usual. And, as for Justin, the twat better be HAPPY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2018 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine
Wow. That was some explenation and I beleive it. Something tells me the girls will not be hearing from Lizette. But Brian and Justin might.
Date: Dec 08, 2018 8:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Hey Tag. I had way too much laughing going on in this chapter. Emmett's flair for the dramatic, and, well, Brian just totally cracked me up. First, the I'm not getting married, then the LSD comment. Then the laughter enthused, and I had to laugh at the stupidity of everyone laughing and NOT know what they were laughing about. And I really laughed at Quinne's exurberance about 'Itchy Alex'. I wonder if the cream stinks... Hmm...
I've been thinking about Justin's reaction, and I don't think he's gonna be too forthcoming. Not only is he so very mad at Quinne right now, what is his reaction going to be when He learns that it wasn't HIS daughter who was the fouled-mouthed hellion doing all those things to Alex? I think he's going to go through the roof when he realizes it was actually BRIAN'S daughter. Will he believe the girls devised the plan? Now that the gig is up, and they know in Pittsburgh, is Quinne going to have to come clean and have Justin take her home? And, I can just picture Alex's sneer. He will probably try and talk Justin into sending Qianna away to boarding school, or something.
I realized the emails the girls sent out a long time ago, they still haven't heard from the one marked, MollT, have they? I suppose if she makes herself known, there will be a new wave of problems, after all this excitement.
About you focusing on The Britin Trap, I vote for you writing where your muse takes you. If it's writing about our plotting girls, go for it. If it's writing about quirky Justin, then that's what you spend your itchy fingers on. I enjoy both stories, so any update is a positive. Thanks for all the writing lately,
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
So, Brian and Justin weren't keeping the twins apart since they didn't know there was a twin! Interesting. I'm developing a theory about what happened and I soooo want to share to I see if I'm right, but don't want to ruin it if I'm right! Damn, I hate that. But the key is the surrogate... and Lindsay. Hmmm.............
I so love this kind of intrigue. And I'm going to love the holy hell that rains down on everyone when the truth of what happened comes out. Bwwaahaaaaaaaaa.........
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2018 9:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Oh great Brian laughs so everything is fine !! He did not know that there were twins, so what happened? I'm looking forward to seeing the whole family finally reunited. Thank you for the update.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:26 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Great update. So glad Brian is laughing and I hope it will be resolved soon. Love them together and want them where they each belong.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Oh this was great!! Can’t wait to see what Brian does!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:05 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
Okay, from what I gather Brian didn't know there were twins. If I didn't know better I would think Mikey was involved in some way. He and Hairy Alex would get along fine.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 2:48 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
I think Brian's reaction was perfect! He was too impressed with the girls' inventiveness to be angry!
Can't wait to see the big reveal when Justin finds out. But apparently, the boys didn't know about the twins. That's probably why the girls were able to get away with the switch for as long as they did.
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...
This was wonderful. Somehow, I felt that Brian would take it well. Now we wait AGAIN (LOL) to see how Justin deals with it. I can see a happy ending coming at some point. As for Stylite, I happily wait for chapters on either story so no problem. I couldn't write one at a time so you are doing great.