Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

Michael should be ashamed that his eight year old daughter told him off, as a supposed grown man he should stop expecting Brian to stop and wait for his opinion before he does anything.

Brian's life doesn't revolve around Michael Hell it never did and that Michael should keep his opinions to himself cause no one wants to hear it.

Besides who wants to listen to someone who refuses to face that he isn't the center of everyone's universe...Hell He Never Was!!!

And Michael's ' It Was A Joke or I Didn't Mean' has always been a lie when he is too much of a coward to stand by his statements, if he tries that around Jennifer she will eviscerate him.

Brian expressing that his office is Always open to his children shows that no matter what nothing is more important than his family.

Billy could be as smart as Justin or smarter but because he needs to protect Colton he refuses to shine his light and let's Colton own the spotlight, Drew continuous calling Billy his son is expressing to Billy that it is not just lip service Drew really wants to be apart of his life.

Hope is really blossoming in Billy's heart and that is Beautiful :)

Fantastic Update!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 10:48 am Title: Chapter 10

 

“I’m starting to believe again,”   Ohhh, Billy. What a wonderful day it turned out to be. And for Billy to have that kind of scholastc achievement, he needs to be somewhere special in order to excel. Maybe once Billy realizes this is for real, he can learn to let go a little with his need to always protect Colton. I know it will always be there, but Colton needs to learn to stand on his own at some point.

Well, I know they say the truth hurts. But is it enough to shut Michael up? As the saying goes, "A leopard can't change it's spots". So I have to wonder how long before Michael starts up again. Christ, if I would have ever had one of my kids at the tender age of eight make that profound statement towards me, I would have crawled under a rock and not got back out for a long time. And Michael better hope that he never makes a passing comment within Jen's hearing range. She's a ferocious mama bear who protects her cubs.

WOW! Is Brian Kinney really going to let Justin get a little kitten? I think Justin should ask Max which he would prefer, though. And I loved that even Brian's office is open 24/7 for the kids.

You have such memorable characters in what is fast becoming a memorable story. Your character's growth in this post-series story are admirable.

Thanks for the update, and looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2018 9:52 am Title: Chapter 10

Yeah, Jenny.  Great chapter.  Love this story.