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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2021 10:38 am Title: Chapter 18

Great ending to this part of the story and I'm looking forward to starting the next part...

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 18

What a fantastic story.  You two write the most amazing stories.  This one really felt so much more like real life with everyone having to face new situations in their lives  Of course, the tissue box was out for a few chapters, but that just made it even better.  Love the new characters coming into their lives and see the possible stories still to come from those characters and their part in Brian and Justin's lives.  Congratulations on YOUR 5th anniversary and fifty stories.  I can see many, many more stories to come.  Thank you for sharing all these wonderful ideas that you have come up with.  The Sunshine Files will always be in my thoughts.  Each time they are posted the sun shines for me.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 3:13 am Title: Chapter 18

It is hard to believe that you've written that many story over 5 years.  Also that Brian and Justin have been together for 20.  Congratulations.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sabina and I are a writing machine. lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 2:30 am Title: Chapter 17

The party and who should show up but Hobbs!



Author's Response: Doesn't it figure? lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 2:13 am Title: Chapter 16

Love how you did Leda going crazy when Jamies water broke.  It was perfect.  Doesn't that treehouse need some sprucing up?



Author's Response: Thanks, don't know about the treehouse.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 1:53 am Title: Chapter 15

JR's back!  Hurray!  Something tells me that the surprise party for Brian and Justin won't really be a surprise.  The baby's coming, the baby's coming.



Author's Response: You're right about all that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 1:16 am Title: Chapter 14

JR is a normal girl and she's not going to be all friendly with someone who she feels broke up her not so happy home and who can blame her.  Frankly I don't think Lorna really wants JR to be there.



Author's Response: You're probably right.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 12:50 am Title: Chapter 13

Joan advocating lying?  Nice touch.  Michael went to Portland now Melanie is there.  Talk about what goes around comes around.  Like the name Mim.



Author's Response: Interesting point.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2018 12:36 am Title: Chapter 12

A New Year.  We lost someone to death, someone to stupidity.  But the people left have friends and family to keep them going just fine.



Author's Response: That's the heart of our stories.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

It would be nice if Hobbs found himself with funds and everything going to Candy who will have a guardian to be proud of - Lindsay.



Author's Response: We'll see.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 10

Now for some reason I expected Michael to cross his arms and loudly state that as Brian's 'best friend' he should be the one to bring them to Papagono's and then give the whole thing away.  Looks like you have the perfect solution to the Hope problem. 



Author's Response: Let's hope the Hope thing works.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

A surprise party for Justin and Brian.  Everyone knows Brian hates surprises.  As for Candy I think it's time to bring Bobby in so Janet has no worries in her last days.



Author's Response: I would love to go to a surprise party for Brian and Justin. How about you?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

There is no hope for Hope.  JR will be alright after all she has Ben oh and Michael who when you think about it is almost as bad as Melanie.



Author's Response: Hope doesn't appear to have many redeeming qualities.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

JR won't let Mel run over her like she did Lindsay.  Everyone is siding with Lindsay which considering Melanie's actions is what she deserves. 



Author's Response: But it's still pretty hard for Mel to take.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 15

Riley and Danny are quite adorable.

What is wrong with Leda? She is not supposed to freak out like that. I hope she will be able to drive.



Author's Response: Glad you like Danny and Riley together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

What a way to end the show.  Craig and Brian in agreement about Hobbs?  Now that's a first.  Brian has Justin's back and his front and his ... well you know.



Author's Response: Yes, everything. lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

I am so glad the Emmett and Brian are going all out to get Candy in school.  I would also love the receipe for those pear and blue cheese canapes.  If Brian likes them they must be good.  Can't wait to find out how things go now that Hobbs has arrived.



Author's Response: Those canapes are delicious.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Gus is pissed with J.R.'s mom.  I don't blame him.  Melanie is as selfish as they come.  You always bring the most characters into each chapter.



Author's Response: Melanie still has some lessons to learn.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lindsay will be okay.  It's the start of something new.  I love any chapter that includes Emmett. 



Author's Response: Lindsay has to find a new path.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm thinking Molly is right.  Craig is going to turn into a lonely old man.  But Brian is lucky because everyone, even Susan will defend him from Craig if they have to.



Author's Response: Brian has earned loyalty from his friends and family, unlike Craig.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

A how to get around Craig story.  Cool.  It's nice that everyone is trying to care for Janet and that even Susan will be helping out.  How is it that Craig ends up married to the nicest woman when he's just a grump?



Author's Response: Good question. He's very lucky.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 14

Jenny is so funny calling Gus to tell him what's going on, both whispering.



Author's Response: They are a cute pair.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 13

Michael offering a sling to Brian and Justin: at least they would use it!

Glad Lindsey and Candy are doing well considering the situation.

Joan has a wicked mind and her trick could work.



Author's Response: Michael and a sling - yuck!

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 9:46 am Title: Chapter 18

Thankyou..please never stop delivering captivating stories 😁



Author's Response: We'll try not to stop. Thanks

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2018 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

This is a year Candy won't forget, ever; meeting her dad and losing her mother!



Author's Response: That's for sure.

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