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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2018 5:15 am Title: Chapter 14

Wow! Wow! Wow!  LOTS happening in this chapter. You must have had a blast writing the conversation between Michael and Collier. It was like, Okay, who can be the dumbest idiot. If Michael thinks he's gonna outsmart Collier, that's his first mistake. But his biggest mistake is him thinking if he can get Brian alone, that he can convince him he's making a mistake by not being with Michael.  There's a few holes in that. One, Brian doesn't want anything to do with you, Michael, and two, he'd never give you the chance to be alone with him. And if Collier and Michael think they can show up at these elite events, I hope they realize that there will be an abundant amount of security, and they won't get anywhere near any of them, probably not even in the door.

Lindsay sure has herself in a fine mess. I think she's on her way to losing not only her wife, but her son, too. (Lindsay, that will include any status and clout you may have right now, plus financial gain.)  Brian will crucify her. He will probably end up taking Gus with him to the Bahamas. If Lindsay was smart (I know that's probably not possible), she would open up to Mel and confess everything to her. Then proceed to tell her what Nancy and Lynette are trying to do. The best form of attack, is to let them know everything beforehand. I hope she learned that from the wedding announcement showing up in the paper. But I'm sure she will do the exact opposite, and try to sneak Gus to functions with her family. But Justin or his family will never put in an appearance.

I'm so happy for Daphne. She gets to marry the man of her dreams, (without all the hubbub), and she has her Dream Star singing for her. I hope she can keep her mind on her husband and not the man singing.

LOVED this chapter. thanks for posting.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2018 2:02 am Title: Chapter 14

Lindsay walked into this situation by opening her mouth besides her legs and now Mommy and Sister Dear are going to put Lindsay on the proverbial street corner and work her Ass until they get what they want which means she will never be Free.

If Lindsay was smart she would spill everything to Mel and Brian but when has Lindsay ever been smart?

Them using Gus and doing that interview means they have have crossed a line and there is no coming back because Brian, Justin and The Taylors are going to Eradicate Them!!

I wish I could work up some sympathy but my supply ran out and a new shipment isn't due until next year <eye roll> 

Michael and Colier are a match made in Hell and with this stupid plan they should be there shortly, but hopefully it will help keep Colier out in the open so they can block him hiding.

A private island and a wedding sounds like Paradise to me :)

Ben and Sean taking baby steps is good.

 

 

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 14

OH, wow, Mikey finds a fellow idiot and Lindsay just keeps making trouble.  Great chapter.  Terrific story.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG!!!!! THE FUCKING NUTCASES HAVE HOOKED UP!!! AND THAT FUCKING BITCH!!! I wish Lindsay would tell Nancy, Lynette and drunk-sounding Guttersnipe Brandy to go fuck themselves, but knowing the weak-wiiled, easily-influenced, eternally-victimized Lindsay, I highly DOUBT she will! I can only hope Jennifer sees through the ploy and freezes Lindsay's family and HER out!! Lindsay is proving Brian and Corey's point about hwr being untrustworthy to the letter. There's no coming back from that!    

 

Can't wait for MORE!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 14

Michael is going to be a big problem.  Good that all the members of both bands want relationships.  I hope they get their wishes.  Lindsay unfortunately has sent the ball in motion and may not be able to stop the disaster that will be her life.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

Two different fronts will come to Brian and Justin: they better be far away for some time; if it's on a private beach, that's even better.

Michael and Collier are good together: talking about their obsession without listening to the other. Perfect combo of nutcases.

Lynette and Nancy are diabolical and Lindsay is quite in an impasse.

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